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Spacedal11

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« Reply #40 on: 12-27-2004 18:13 »
« Last Edit on: 12-27-2004 18:13 »

I like your Fan fics Fryfan. I haven't read all of them but I've read a lot. I think the only fan fiction I got bored with was parts 2 & 3 of

TOTPD!
fryfanSpyOrama

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« Reply #41 on: 12-27-2004 18:24 »
« Last Edit on: 12-27-2004 18:24 »

Thank you Spacedal11, in response, I guess that just proves that the original of any trilogy is usually the best of the three.  Oh well, what are you going to do?

Hope to hear your thoughts on other fanfics.
spacepilot3000

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« Reply #42 on: 12-27-2004 18:29 »

Has anyone read my Fry-Trix series? Any sort of critisism would be nice. I realized that I made a mistake with the ending of the sequel. If I could go back, I would've changed it completely.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #43 on: 12-27-2004 21:34 »
« Last Edit on: 12-27-2004 21:34 »

I read a Futurama meets the Matrix and really didn't understand it. You did The Fry-Trix & The Fry-Trix Still Has You right? Cause I think I read the other one.

Speaking of reviews, can I have some feedback? I know I don't have that many stories but soon there will be possibly seven if I do the 7th one.
spacepilot3000

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« Reply #44 on: 12-27-2004 22:56 »

I did The Fry-Trix(Which got a score of 8.75), The Fry-Trix:Rebooted(Which got a score of 7.3, that means I must've did something wrong). Those where the serious tales. The other two were a parody of the two stories which I did. For this one, I collaborated with four other writers. Each consisted of 6 stories. One was called The Fry-Trix Has You, and the other was The Fry-Trix Still Has You.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #45 on: 12-27-2004 23:46 »

Oh ok! Yeah I read yours. I liked it from what I gathered but I don't think I rated it. The thing is I never saw the Matrix or any of the sequels so I wouldn't know. But I liked it.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #46 on: 12-30-2004 00:32 »
« Last Edit on: 12-31-2004 00:00 »

Delete this post!
Rhodan

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« Reply #47 on: 01-22-2005 12:54 »

New fanfic "The best times and the worst times" from Kriebs seems to be very worth to read.
fryfanSpyOrama

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« Reply #48 on: 01-29-2005 02:14 »
« Last Edit on: 01-29-2005 02:14 »

The following is a review of Mitch's fanfic, "Follow that Bender".  I read this Futurama/Kim Possible crossover a while back at TLZ.  It is a sequel to Mitch's fanfic, "Robot Hell Rises (Seriously, It Does)"

Rhodan

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« Reply #49 on: 03-07-2005 06:19 »

After a long time, there is new "The Other" on Leela Zone. Well I have not much to say except that it is allready third part without much significant events - both Skyler´s and Leela´s stories have some slow "twists" but they are obviously just predicting real events tha should happaned many parts ago. Well maybe in the next part we´ll finally see.         
Rhodan

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« Reply #50 on: 03-07-2005 07:10 »
« Last Edit on: 03-07-2005 07:10 »

 
After a long time, there is new "The Other" on Leela Zone. Well I have not much to say except that it is allready third part without much significant events - both Skyler´s and Leela´s stories have some slow "twists" but they are obviously just predicting real events that should happen many chapters ago. There is no any "mess" like in the last part but nothing great either. Well maybe in the next part we´ll finally see.     
Rhodan

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« Reply #51 on: 05-27-2005 15:52 »
« Last Edit on: 05-27-2005 15:52 »

Hmm, it looks that I am lonely here but I can´t help myself.

Now, The Other reached it´s 19th part with huge twist on the end. Why author don´t let happen something importent in the plot itself is behind me but on the other hand it is nicely written.
Venus

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« Reply #52 on: 05-27-2005 16:26 »

I read The Other. I really like it but i think he's playing the suspense to hard. Everyone figured out what the big twist was long ago but he's still keeping it a secret. It's going to be so anticlimantic when he finally does reveal it.

And i really don't buy 'Leela the abortionist' Family means way to much to her and she's been alone for so long she wouldn't kill any family that did come along.

And i really hope what happened at the very end of this last chapter isn't what it appears to be. It would be such a huge cop out for

On a side note the next chapter of Background Noise finally came out. I love this story so much but the updates are so far apart that by the time the new one comes out i've forgotten what happened in the last one. I completely missed a part that i suspect was supposed to have a lot of emotional significance becuase i couldn't remember who that particular character was and what made him important.
Teral

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« Reply #53 on: 05-27-2005 16:57 »
« Last Edit on: 05-27-2005 16:57 »

Which character? Sergeant 'Top' Orlov?
Venus

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« Reply #54 on: 05-27-2005 17:16 »

If Orlov is Dientz then yeah.
Teral

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« Reply #55 on: 05-27-2005 17:43 »

Dientz was the commander of Fire Base Edinburgh, but  we've only met him briefly when major Smith inspects the firebase defenses a few chapters back.
Venus

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« Reply #56 on: 05-27-2005 18:23 »

Teral

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« Reply #57 on: 05-28-2005 05:34 »

Gorky

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« Reply #58 on: 07-05-2005 21:07 »
« Last Edit on: 07-05-2005 21:07 »

*BUMP*

I just read Spacedal's "The Way That It Is" (parts one and two). One of the better ship-fics I've read in a while. There's room for improvement (which is true of any story), but it's a pretty nice story, nonetheless.

My much more extensive, ultra-babbly review...

Spacedal11

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« Reply #59 on: 07-05-2005 22:19 »
« Last Edit on: 07-05-2005 22:19 »

Gorky: No one's perfect. I still love you though.  tongue Though I am not sure if I'm a smiter. If I am, then I don't know it.

Now as you've said, I have never written a shippy before. So this is new to me and I'm still working on it. Glad you like it though.

And reading your review, I am going to agree with a lot of it.

Let's see for starters, the whole Fry and Leela kissing issue; I don't actually know that they want to get married. I mean how I see it is that they're (Or Leela is) really unsure if this would mean anything or just something that everyone's pressuring them to do. And the kissing is just friendlyness. Ross and Rachael do it, so that's where I was getting that from. Maybe I'm making the kissing to personal but I don't mean to be.

Also with the "Just then, the door that opened from the meeting room opened", thing, sorry. I really don't mean to do that I just keep thinking that my story needs to be distcriptive. That happens when I start a story. And sometimes if I'm writing part of one and I'm in a deep writing mood, I'll do that. I'll double check to make sure that doesn't happen in part 3.

And I am having problems with the Bender/Lucy relationship too. I feel stupid of what I went and did with that. It was good at first and then I made it bad. I'll see how I it goes when I review part 3.

Yeah, I agree that I'm making Leela to soft. But then she gets bitchy in part 3 (which is not done with). I told myself that I was making her real soft. Working on that.

Now with Fry, what I was saying was he was worried about being a parent in general. The fact that it was with Leela just made him more nervous. But he figured he should do the right thing and stick it out. And now that the pregnancy thing is done he's real happy. But the whole situation of being Leela's boyfriend/husband is what makes it complicated for him.

Also if it's not already obvious, there's a lot of Friends and Murphy Brown connections that I put in there. I was gonna go on with the spicey food in which Leela thought her water broke after eating some of the food but it was really nothing. Then I decided that part 2 was long enough and I wasn't in the mood to write it.

If there's anything else, email me. I'd rather have an email conversation then a posting one. Thanks for the love.
Venus

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« Reply #60 on: 07-06-2005 00:24 »

Wait, what? I give you critisism and you declare a feud but then Gorky gives you critisism and you accept it gratiously? Unfair! I demand apology kittens!

On a side note, without Drew to confuse your readers and upstage all of the other characters you can actually put together a decent story. I'm not surprised this one got a better rating.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #61 on: 07-06-2005 00:32 »
« Last Edit on: 07-06-2005 00:32 »

I knew you'd come along and say that. Well the difference between the fueds I'd put up with you and me agreeing with Gorky is that
1) I wasn't willing to agree,
2) I didn't like you. Not saying I'm your best friend now, and
3) Somehow Gorky made me feel good anyway even though she crtiscized me and you made me feel bad.

I'll apologize but no kittens. And trust me, I would have added Drew in there, oh yeah, but then I figured I'd do something completely different. I might throw her in there somewhere. Now I really want to. So stay tuned, cause I'll probably put her in part 4 since I'm almost done with part 3.

And yes, this one got a better rating than my last two, (yeah they sucked) but my others have done fine. TFI has 4 more points than TWTII.

So, I'm sorry, and hope you're enjoying this fic.
Venus

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« Reply #62 on: 07-06-2005 00:40 »

Wait, you didn't like me even before the feud? Any particular reason why?
Spacedal11

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« Reply #63 on: 07-06-2005 00:44 »

I don't remember. I was still sorta new here and like every n00b they don't like being bossed around. Maybe I didn't like you when I did fued with you. I don't know.

But I do like your fan fic and you don't annoy me like you use to.
Venus

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« Reply #64 on: 07-06-2005 01:04 »

I don't remember ever bossing you around. I don't remember saying anything to you that i wouldn't say to someone else.

But i guess i'll take what i can get. Glad you like my fic.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #65 on: 07-06-2005 01:12 »

I don't remember what made me dislike you. If I thought it was that important I would have remembered. I don't think it's that important.

Yeah I like the story. And by the looks of it, you said that mine was "decent".
Venus

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« Reply #66 on: 07-06-2005 01:15 »

The only problem i remember you ever having with me was Drew, anything else you never mentioned on the board.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #67 on: 07-06-2005 01:16 »

Probably. Why are you so curious as to know why?
Venus

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« Reply #68 on: 07-06-2005 01:21 »

People don't generally hate me. They either really like me or don't notice i'm there. I havn't been hated by anyone since Angelica Johnson back in the 9th grade, but she hated everyone. So when people hate me i get curious.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #69 on: 07-06-2005 01:28 »

Did I say I hated you? And I'm not talking about a year ago. I'm talking about now. No I don't hate you. But I don't really like you either. I just admire your writing and that you also like Evanenescence like I do.

And while I'm at it, do you like me that much?
Venus

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« Reply #70 on: 07-06-2005 01:36 »

I had absolutely no opinion of you until you started your feud. Which i didn't even know we were having until you announced it. Then you got all belligerent with me which was both annoying and amusing both at the same time. But as a general rule, i don't like people who don't like me.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #71 on: 07-06-2005 01:56 »

Then we're even. So let's let it go now.

But before I go to watch Conan, I have one question, did you like my fic? Cause I'm not sure what "you can actually put together a decent story" meant. 
Gorky

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« Reply #72 on: 07-06-2005 13:38 »

Uh-oh...I write a review, leave for the night, then return to find that I have Venus and Spacedal being so...argue-ie. Sorry 'bout that. And, Spacedal, I read that whole feud that you and Venus had in the last thread (I believe it was). If I could just say something, Spacedal, I don't think that Venus was really doing anything other than offering her constructive criticism. It may have made you feel bad, but I'm sure that that wasn't Venus' intent as she wrote her review. And, even despite having your feelings hurt, you should try to take any criticism you get in stride. Just try to improve next time. (Although I am glad that I didn't hurt your feelings or anything. I was just being honest. I hate hurting people's feelings. (Unless I hate them...but I don't hate you or Venus. You're both great writers in your own respects...fighting like you are (or, were) seems kind of pointless.) 

 
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Wait, what? I give you critisism and you declare a feud but then Gorky gives you critisism and you accept it gratiously? Unfair! I demand apology kittens!

Venus, Venus, Venus...you and your apology kittens.  wink
Spacedal11

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« Reply #73 on: 07-06-2005 19:40 »

That's ok Gorky. I found your review helpful but somewhat obvious cause it was problems I was already aware about.

And I know I was in the wrong in those last threads. But it's done and over with and there isn't anything I can do about except apologize. I have seen the errors of my ways and will now seek a life in peacefulness. So, therefore I apologize to Venus and anyone else I might have offeneded and just hope you don't punish me by trashing my latest story.
Venus

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« Reply #74 on: 07-06-2005 23:59 »
« Last Edit on: 07-07-2005 00:00 »

I'm really not petty enough to trash a story just cause i'm annoyed with the author. Any comment i make to anyone, good or bad, is an actual reaction i had too the fic when reading it.

As for your story Spacedal, besides from the issues Gorky already mentioned, the plot is pretty good. And i really do think the story works better without Drew. The Futurama creators and writers knew what they were doing when they created the characters and character dynamic they did and when canon is followed good things come out of it. The only thing i remember that pulled me out of the story was the Author's notes. Like mentioning Ross's apartment. You probably should have left the Friend's reference out and just described the apartment. Not everyone watched Friends (like me) and therefore don't know what Ross' apartment is supposed to look like. As a general rule you don't want to remind people that there reading a story. It would be like watching 'War of the Worlds' and having Spielberg suddenly walk into frame and say "See those two people standing over there? They were in the original 'War of the Worlds' movie. I had them make a cameo cause i liked the original movie." and then walking out of frame and having the movie continue as if nothing had happened. It's too jarring. If you really want to include any kind of Author's note just put a little paragraph at the end. I don't know if you read Ramon 51's Gladiatrix story, but the way he does the footnotes is the best way i've seen to go about it.

@Gorky: I like kittens in all forms, not just apology. I even like my roommate's friend's kitten and he had 6 toes. He's so small!   love I can hold him in one hand!   love
Spacedal11

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« Reply #75 on: 07-07-2005 19:16 »

That's just something I do. But thank you.

I like cats too. From a far away distance. I curse my horrible alergic reaction to them though.
Venus

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« Reply #76 on: 07-07-2005 21:35 »

One more thing i just remembered, (after you mentioned it in the baby name thread) The name you decided on for the baby, Randy. I'm not saying it's a bad name, just a rather male one. My dad's name is Randy. I think the female spelling is Randie. Also, Randy is brittish slang for horny, i learned that from Buffy.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #77 on: 07-07-2005 22:29 »
« Last Edit on: 07-07-2005 22:29 »

Neh. I just named her from two characters from two different movies. Two of my favorite movies. I very well could have ended up calling her Murphy. But I didn't! And now that I've heard the name 1000 times, I want to change it to Neve. But to hell with it.

(And ok, now this is what's annoying me. This is making me annoyed that you aren't letting the critizing go. You could have left the horny comment to yourself.)

Venus

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« Reply #78 on: 07-07-2005 23:01 »

I could've, but i figured you probably didn't even realize it meant that. It's not exactly common knowledge as far as i know. The only reason i knew it was cause i watched that one ep of Buffy. But seeing as Futurama seems to be pretty popular in Brittian and TLZ probably has several British readers i figured i'd clue you in. It's not my fault you take everything as some kind of personal attack i was actually attempting to do you a favor. if i made an unintitional sexual reference in my fic i'd want someone to let me know.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #79 on: 07-07-2005 23:19 »

Well like you said about Friends, not everyone watches Buffy. Did I horribly need to know that? Not really. And if I did know that I might not have used the name. But if you don't like the name, sorry. I'm sorry that I just happened to pick the name of your dad and that it means horny in England. Yes Venus, I just knew that your Dad's name was Randy and I just wanted to put it in there so you could point that out to me. You reveiled my evil plan. Oh no.

   

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