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Xanfor

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« Reply #80 on: 09-06-2006 08:55 »
« Last Edit on: 10-14-2006 00:00 »

All right, another update is coming soon, and before I post it, I have some comments I wish to repost and respond to.

     
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Originally posted by Shiny:
That was frickin' brilliant.  Really.  I'm seriously impressed.

That was...JBerges-level excellent.

I read this, but that was back when I was a bigger n00b then I am today and I had no idea what it meant. Thank you, Shiny!

     
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Originally posted by Shiny:
...and I liked them, especially the very sweet and nicely done Turanga segment [...] I enjoyed them.

[...]

1) Turanga segment.  Very nice, I loved reading it.  Though one thing bothers me a little....


But other than that small niggling feeling of unfinishedness, which may be only because it's a "bridge" piece, it was lovely.  The writing was beautiful and involving and I totally got into it.  Turanga's a neat character, I love the way you've handled her.  She feels like Leela but not too much, she's a different person but still fascinating.

Coming from you, Shiny, that's the best review I've ever gotten. Excuse me while I hang a frame around my monitor...

Now (in other news), my next fic should be up soon. I would post it in installments, like the greats of Venus and she-who-must-not-be-named, Shiny, but I just don't feel comfortable presenting something until I've gotten it all completely polished up. Plus, a bunch of little posts would be a pain to edit should I notice a continuity error.

So that means you'll just have to sit and read the whole thing.

     
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Originally posted by TriggerHappyJim:
I keep intending to read this, its just too freaking  vast. Curse you Xanfor. *Shakes fist*

Yes, that means you too. tongue

And now, before I leave, here's few more comments I'd like to show that I really did value and not just ignore.

     
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Originally posted by Professor Zoidy:
Well, the original storyline, the characters from the alternate universe you brought to us to love and cry for if and when you decide they die, the in-depth desription of the characters, what they feel, how they look. That[/i] is what makes it a great fanfic.

Aww, shucks. :blush:

     
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Originally posted by Venus:
[...] I really really liked it. Although it was sometimes a little confusing, i'd sometimes miss the change between the universes. But i loved the overall story. Shipperific!

I know you ain't seen much shipperific on this thread. But you will. You will.

( )

     
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Originally posted by wongasta:
wow holy shit, i just read half of the first part, and everything i read is coming to my imagination...

i would animate this in flash only if i hav the voice acts... lol

excellent work!

Tank you vedy mucho... (Tips hat)

     
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Originally posted by ClonedWizard:
If there is one thing I like just as much as time travel, it is alternate/parallel universes.  I realize I'm a month behind in reviewing, but... the thread has been posted to in the last few days and you said that it was never too late to hop on the FF train.  I really enjoyed the plot, the jokes, and the promise of more.  Based on the preview, I'm really looking forward to Movie 2.  It looks like there is more (alternate) universal goodness to come.

There will be. It just might take a while... :rollseyes:

But thanks for getting the earlier topology puns. smile (Moves ClonedLizard up to the same plane as Nerd-o-rama)


     
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Originally posted by Professor Zoidy:
*slowly yells like Sarge* Xanfor!!! *stops yelling* Where is the rest of your story? You haven't updated it in a while. You make me very sad.

You know, I would have warned you that my next post would contain an update, but I don't answer people who yell. wink

     
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Originally posted by Professor Zoidy:
Xanfor, I love you. The owl's sound told me immidiately what the sound reminded her of. It's that the character, this time being Leela, doesn't figure it out that gives suspense. The whole "missing the childhood" bit reminded me a lot of how Morris and Munda Turanga missed Leela's childhood, at least directly. (They still got a hint of it because of all those flushed pictures newspaper aricles and various letters of course.)

Wow... Somebody artistically interpreted something I wrote...

Whoo-hoo! I'm an artist! big grin

     
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Originally posted by PCC Fred:
Being about a different Fry and Leela, it's not shippy in the conventional sense, but that doesn't negate the fact you've done a fantastic job describing this Leela's depth of feeling for Philip, and the way in which she's spent years trying to rationalise denying those feelings.  It's shippy, but a different kind of shippy.

You have no idea what that means to me. Well, maybe you do. That statement was just meant to jokingly imply that it means more to me coming from you than it would be coming from me and going to you, which is obviously not true, and... Ok, let me start over here...

I'll go now...

Just kidding...


     
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Originally posted by Futurama Llama:
Alright Professor Xanfor. I will do as you ask.
OH_YOUR_GOD!
That's my favorite FanFic, Xanfor! I love it!

Here's my list of favorite fanfics:

1) Lennie Asserholt's "No More Secrets 1 and 2"
2) Xanfor's "The one with the paralell universe"
3) pretty much all of bumblebeeTheta's stuff.
     
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Originally posted by KitKatBar-Fry:
Oh, I loved No more secrets as well. And BumbleBee Theta's 'a helping hand' was awesome too. I liked yours too, Xanfor.  smile
     
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Originally posted by Benders_Fan:
Like Peter would say"That's Freaking Sweet!!!"
That was really,really good!

Thank you, thank you. Just want you guys to know that I really do appreciate these.

Note to self: Look up 'appreciate' in dictionary...

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« Reply #81 on: 09-14-2006 18:48 »
« Last Edit on: 11-04-2009 13:48 »

   (Life is but a Dream)
   (written by Xanfor)

This fic is dedicated to everyone who has ever aspired for a dream.

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In a mad fit of schizophrenia, Xanfor has revamped this fic and moved it to here.

Thank you for your dedication. This post will now self-destruct.


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PCC Fred

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« Reply #82 on: 09-14-2006 20:06 »

Wow!  That was awesome!  If Layla's the queen of the shippy fic, then you Xanfor, are the king of concept sci-fi.  And once again you've thrown all the pieces up in the air to create another variation on the F/L relationship.  Brilliant work.  smile
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« Reply #83 on: 09-14-2006 21:29 »

That. Was. Awesome.

Trippy, shippy and you kept me right on the edge of my seat! All good things, great original story.
I'll be waiting for another; more! more! more! (no pressure  wink )
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« Reply #84 on: 09-14-2006 22:43 »

Fuck, that was a long piece, but I loved it to bits. Xanfor, you have officially made my day.
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« Reply #85 on: 09-15-2006 16:32 »

i havent read it all yet, but it's great so far.  I'll try and make some time for a review later this weekend  smile
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« Reply #86 on: 09-18-2006 00:07 »

I loved it.  It was much better than Cats.  I want to read it again and again.


Seriously, that was excellent.  I especially liked the "Pong Farr" and the desk-bell gag, and of course the relationship nuances were as subtly spot-on as we have come to expect from your stuff.

Reading it lightened up an otherwise crappy Sunday afternoon for me.  smile
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« Reply #87 on: 10-09-2006 20:14 »
« Last Edit on: 11-04-2009 13:51 »

Rough draft, here. I'll rewrite it in prose, eventually...

Summary: ('Anthology of Interest' Script) Fry finds himself the last human being alive in the universe, with only a hologram, a monotonic computer and a humanoid ham-lover for company; Bender falls in love with the Countess once again, causing certain repercussions among certain members of a certain crew; and Farnsworth retires, promoting Leela to active CEO until Cubert reaches the age of discretion. Of course, suddenly without help, Fry finds himself overwhelmed trying to enforce eight certain simple rules... Based on Matt Groening's bittersweet romance, 'Futurama'.


Disclaimer: I currently have a team of lawyers working on it, but as of yet, I don't own 'Futurama' or any of it's characters.

   (Anthology of Interest π )
   (written by Xanfor)

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In a mad fit of schizophrenia, Xanfor will eventually revamp this fic and move it to here.

Thank you for your dedication. This post will now self-destruct.


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« Reply #88 on: 10-09-2006 20:52 »

Interesting, I would actually like to know the answer to Bender's question as well. I don't really get the 'smugging' bits, but it's still a fun story so far.
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« Reply #89 on: 10-09-2006 21:36 »

FINALLY!!! The wait is over! Although, I don't get the 'smugging' bits either.

I loved the intro... it's so very Futurama smile

Can't wait for the rest...OH NO! MORE WAITING!!!
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« Reply #90 on: 10-09-2006 22:02 »

Heh, Bender's "quaint" comment, a reference to Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home? Scotty trying to use primitive 20th Century computer equipment.
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« Reply #91 on: 10-09-2006 23:27 »

 
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Originally posted by coldangel_1:
... Bender's "quaint" comment, a reference to Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home?
It seems so. And, from the few bits I skimmed, it seems the whole 'One Smug of an Italian Appliance-Up' segment is a rip-off parody of "Red Dwarf."  wink

Xanfor, you seem to have a taste for British humor- er, humour.
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« Reply #92 on: 10-10-2006 02:29 »

Picking out homages is one of my favourite pasttimes. And British humour kicks arse.
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« Reply #93 on: 10-14-2006 15:45 »
« Last Edit on: 10-24-2006 00:00 »

Ahh! You got the 'Star Trek IV' reference! I was wondering if anyone would get that, and while I was wondering, I forgot to put in the title sequence and a funny caption!

Well, excuse me. I'll have to come back and fix that later. Maybe tomorrow. In the meanwhile, Spacedal11 has inspired me to write yet another fic. What can I say? PEEL has an almost unlimited supply of that stuff. (Inspiration.) Wish me luck.

And SpaceCase, since you know all my 'rip-offs' and such, would you mind explaining to the rest of these mortals the pun in the title 'One Smug of an Italian Appliance-Up'?

   wink

If you dare!    evil laugh

 
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Originally posted by Shiny:
Seriously, that was excellent.  I especially liked the "Pong Farr" and the desk-bell gag, and of course the relationship nuances were as subtly spot-on as we have come to expect from your stuff.

Really? I'm spot on? Usually that's addressed at you, or Venus, or Layla...

I think my secret is simply avoiding senarios in which I don't know how the characters would respond. Which is why this next fic I'm tackling is going to be a challenge. Wish me luck!

I've got the world on a thread, typin' on  a keyboard, I've got the keyboard, hooked up to a computer.

What a board, what a life...

I can write!


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« Reply #94 on: 10-15-2006 03:24 »

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    Originally posted by Xanfor:
    ... And SpaceCase, since you know all my 'rip-offs' and such, would you mind explaining to the rest of these mortals the pun in the title 'One Smug of an Italian Appliance-Up'?
    • You give me more credit than I'm due.
    • Parody. Not rip-off, parody!
    • I haven't a clue, though I suspect it has to do with the term "Smeg-up."
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    « Reply #95 on: 10-24-2006 06:10 »

    Who said parody? Oh, right... You did. Silly me. Now return my credit, or I will be forced to destroy you! Puny PEELer, you will reveal to me my devestatingly funny pun, or suffer the consequences!

    Eh-hem. Morbo gets tired of yelling at a computer. Morbo types much more terrifyingly.

    (People scream)

    Shut up! Morbo wishes to inform people of an upcoming fic!

    Morbo has now informed people! Now Morbo demands to know SpaceCase's gender!

    This board will be easy prey for Morbo's people, yes indeed, whooo-ha-ha...

    SpaceCase

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    « Reply #96 on: 10-24-2006 13:49 »

     
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    Originally posted by Xanfor:
    Who said parody? Oh, right... You did. Silly me. Now return my credit, or I will be forced to destroy you!
    [*Yawn*]
    Oh! I’m sorry, were you talking to me?
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    Puny PEELer, you will reveal to me my devestatingly funny pun...
    I was going to say you prove my assertion that the pun is the lowest form of humor, but I don’t think you quite made the cut... 
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    ... or suffer the consequences!
    [Grins evilly]
    [Al Bundy]
    Let’s rawk…
    [/A.B.]
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    Eh-hem. Morbo gets tired of yelling at a computer. Morbo types much more terrifyingly.
    Really?  confused You’ll must show me sometime.
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    (People scream)

    Shut up! Morbo wishes to inform people of an upcoming fic!

    Morbo has now informed people! Now Morbo demands to know SpaceCase's gender!
    Personnally I prefer “none of the above,” or “undecided,” but neither of those is available on PEEL.
    You tell me.
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    This board will be easy prey for Morbo's people, yes indeed, whooo-ha-ha...
    [*Tsk*]  no no
    You missed your medication again, didn’t you?
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    « Reply #97 on: 10-24-2006 14:02 »
    « Last Edit on: 11-04-2009 13:54 »

    The following post contains a segment from an incomplete version of a fic that I eventually rewrote entirely from scratch. It is preserved here merely for posterity, however, is also spoiler-encased so that no one is tempted to actually read it. The final, complete, and much less sucky version is posted on the next page.

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    « Reply #98 on: 10-24-2006 14:24 »

     
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    Originally posted by Xanfor:
    @SpaceCase: Yes.  tongue
    Aww, I'm sorry; I was trying to make a joke...
    HeRe, HaVe SoMe Of MiNe... %^}

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    « Reply #99 on: 10-24-2006 19:43 »

    Yay I'm glad you've started. I look forward to seeing how it developes. I also posted a picture of Ren on the "Let's look into the future" thread, if you wish to use it for refrence.

    A.k.a You'd better use it for reference.  wink
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    « Reply #100 on: 10-24-2006 20:12 »

    Great Red Dwarf parody, Xanfor.  I was going to whinge that you'd overdone Bender saying 'smug', but you redeemed yourself when Farnsworth used it after the What-If simulation had ended.  smile
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    « Reply #101 on: 10-26-2006 18:32 »
    « Last Edit on: 10-26-2006 18:32 »

    @Spacedal11 only!:


    @PCC Fred: Thanks! I can picture it now...

    (Bender hovers in digital nonexistence)
    (His disk shatters)
    (The cybergrim-reaper appears)
    Reaper: You must come with me...
    (Bender kicks him in the parallel port)
    Bender: Only the good die young!
    (Bender floats away)
    (Reaper falls down in a byte heap)


    @SpaceCase: Eww, what is this stuff? Wait, wait, I don't wanna know...

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    « Reply #102 on: 10-27-2006 03:30 »

    Xanfor only:


    Otherwise, I look forward to your plans and wait with anticipation for your work. Good luck.
    LuvFry

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    « Reply #103 on: 10-27-2006 19:26 »

    Just finished reading everything. Sometimes I am amazed at how easily I can picture your stories in my head. You are an awesome writer! You rock my world! I bow down at your superior writing skills! Can't wait for the rest  love
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    « Reply #104 on: 10-27-2006 21:20 »

    Oooh, time waves... wicked!
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    « Reply #105 on: 10-28-2006 03:46 »

     
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    @SpaceCase: Eww, what is this stuff? Wait, wait, I don't wanna know...
    What? You've never seen Thorazine before?  wink
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    Originally posted by coldangel_1:
    Oooh, time waves... wicked!
    SURF'S UP!  laff
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    « Reply #106 on: 10-29-2006 02:33 »

    Haha.
    Need to put some temporal wax on my time board...
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    « Reply #107 on: 10-30-2006 06:38 »
    « Last Edit on: 11-04-2009 13:55 »

    The following post contains a segment from an incomplete version of a fic that I eventually rewrote entirely from scratch. It is preserved here merely for posterity, however, is also spoiler-encased so that no one is tempted to actually read it. The final, complete, and much less sucky version is posted on the next page.

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    « Reply #108 on: 10-30-2006 06:53 »

    Heehee, get lost.
    Great shit.
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    « Reply #109 on: 10-30-2006 06:55 »

     
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    Great shit.

    Not in my thread you don't!

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    « Reply #110 on: 10-30-2006 07:20 »

    Haha!
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    « Reply #111 on: 10-30-2006 17:33 »

    I want stomping shoes!
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    « Reply #112 on: 10-30-2006 22:02 »

    Nice, the stomping boots/shoes were hilarious. Damn your short entries however. Make them longer! Give us something to wait for!!!  wink
    LuvFry

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    « Reply #113 on: 10-31-2006 20:54 »

    Stomping shoes-hilarious! I agree with Spacedal11, longer entries, please smile
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    « Reply #114 on: 11-01-2006 15:10 »

    Ok, ok! Stomp, stomp, whatever. Longer entries. You got it. This weekend, probably. They're just short now because I gotta figure out the time paradoxes...

    Stomp, stomp, stomp...

    Pmots, pmots...

    Wheeeeee!

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    « Reply #115 on: 11-01-2006 20:31 »

    WOW I REALLY LIKED THIS ONE. I HAD TO RE READ IT ALOT BUT AWESOME!
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    « Reply #116 on: 11-04-2006 23:02 »
    « Last Edit on: 09-24-2007 00:00 »

    The following post contains a segment from an incomplete version of a fic that I eventually rewrote entirely from scratch. It is preserved here merely for posterity, however, is also spoiler-encased so that no one is tempted to actually read it. The final, complete, and much less sucky version is posted on the next page.

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    « Reply #117 on: 11-05-2006 00:12 »

    Heh heh... 'bonk'.  laff
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    « Reply #118 on: 11-05-2006 04:49 »

    Cool start, looking good Xanfor big grin
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    « Reply #119 on: 11-05-2006 09:07 »
    « Last Edit on: 11-05-2006 09:07 »

    As always I don't know what to say when I read your fics.So I'll say what I think as simple as I can.WOW!
    And I really want a update.


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    C'mon people, are you voting for P.A.T.T.H.E.B.U.N.N.Y. or are you idiots?
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