Fan script for a trilogy

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nobody in another topic want's to anwser my question about how my script is . So i will make my own topic.
Afroman a pixie from space comes to earth and grants the whole pe crew 1 wish (but not without impact)
Wishes
Fry becomes a fembot
Leela becomes a Ghost
Bender Becomes a teen-robot gazalionair with strict parents
Amy becomes a diamant thief
Zoidberg becomes human but know he can taste and he hates it
Farnsworth want's pe to be de best delivery service in the galaxy but is ambushed with bomb letters
Hermes becomes boss and is stranded with farnsworth and the bom letters
Zapp becomes ghost
Kiff wishes Guts but ends up in prison

Now he has collected enough Negative energy to grant himself a wish.To be the Dictator of the universe

The end of part 1

[#1 :]

Put it in the Fan Fiction forum, bub.

[#2 :]

how do i move and now that were busy what do you think you like my fanscript ?????

[#3 :]

You don't. I do.

That'll be $2.50.

[#4 :]

It's nice to know that the PE crew have such sensible wishes. Fry a fembot? Leela and Zapp as ghosts?  And why does a pot smoking rapper suddenly take it upon himself to grant wishes?

 Stick with the mail bomb idea, the only really palatable idea on the list.

[#5 :]

from what i understand those aren't actually the wishes the PE crew make. This 'afroman' takes their actual wishes and twists them horribly out of context and grants them in such a way that makes the wisher miserable, at which point 'afroman' feeds off of their negative emotions. I kinda like it.

[#6 :]

 

Originally posted by Venus:
This 'afroman' takes their actual wishes and twists them horribly out of context and grants them in such a way that makes the wisher miserable, at which point 'afroman' feeds off of their negative emotions.

Sounds like Polymorph from Red Dwarf.

[#7 :]

 

Originally posted by Venus:
from what i understand those aren't actually the wishes the PE crew make. This 'afroman' takes their actual wishes and twists them horribly out of context and grants them in such a way that makes the wisher miserable, at which point 'afroman' feeds off of their negative emotions. I kinda like it.

You got it right.And why afroman is a pixie will be explained in part 2.i'm goin to make a list of the wishes and you can see the impact above
    Wishes
Fry wishes to be a Robot
Bender wishes to be a gazillionair
Hermes wishes he was head of Pe
Farnsworth wishes Pe is the best delivery company in the universe
Amy wishes for a diamant
Kiff wishes more courage
Leela wishes she had a happy life
Zapp wishes he was with leela
Zoidberg wishes he was human

[#8 :]

what's a diamant?

[#9 :]

 

Originally posted by Venus:
what's a diamant?

Srry that's dutch diamant= diamond

[#10 :]

Why would Fry want to be a fembot?

[#11 :]

Sounds ok, though I think something a little less genie in a bottle would be better. Like Afroman got ahold of an invention of somekind instead of granting wishes... Maybe you could even have Afroman not even know at first the devise syphoned off the negative energy, then hee likes it and goes on a power trip  lol

[#12 :]

 

Originally posted by Young_and_Angry:
Why would Fry want to be a fembot?

He was hart broken by leela and whises he was a robot without feelings.

[#13 :]

 

Originally posted by Erdrik:
Sounds ok, though I think something a little less genie in a bottle would be better. Like Afroman got ahold of an invention of somekind instead of granting wishes... Maybe you could even have Afroman not even know at first the devise syphoned off the negative energy, then hee likes it and goes on a power trip    lol

Sounds good anyone have any comment
Write something like this please and i will see

[#14 :]

Part 2

Afroman reveals himself als the space fighter Neil Aldrin.Wich ship crashed in to the sun.Butt durin the crash he wishes himself out and in return must be a fairy. after 600 years of being a tiny fairy and granting evrybody wishes he becomes evil and enters the pixie side.Leela is sure good is greater than evil.And dare's him to a fairy-pixie duel.Afro man accepts and makes Leela and Zapp Fairy's.There counters are set to zero and the one who grants the most wishes by sunrise is the winner and can wish for anything Even being his slaves.Butt the more the Pe Crew feels unhappy the more higher Afroman's counter becomes.So evrybody has to become happy.

Fry becomes a Playbotstar
Bender Starts studying
Leela and zapp begin there wish quest
Hermes and Farnsworth recrute army DOOP people to help de-bom the letters
Amy and Kiff go back to prison and begin there defense.
Zoidberg Gets tasteless food
 

[#15 :]

*sigh*

cedric, don't double or triple-post.

use the button.

[#16 :]

???? what do you mean ?????

[#17 :]

which is beter Part 1 or 2

[#18 :]

That. What you just did. That's double-posting.  Don't do it. Use the "edit" button (that little icon at the bottom of every post) instead.

[#19 :]

what do you mean what is double posting i only posted something once I know how to edited.But what is double posting the second question is not for Him but for the visitors.P.S you like my script

[#20 :]

Part 3

Leela and zapp grant 100 wishes before afroman.And he becomes insane.He flyes to Pixielvania.Where he forms a gang to take over the universe.He Flys To fairytopia To destroy the Fairy ball A.K.A the hart of the Universe.The nibblonians sense this and nibbler tells fry and Leela that there the only hope for the universe.

[#21 :]

Double-posting is posting two messages in a row. Triple-posting is posting three messages in a row. Within the course of this thread you have double-posted twice and triple-posted once.

[#22 :]

O.K now back to reviewen my script anyone want to try and make drawings of the characters

[#23 :]

Actually I think Leelas wish would be either to find the perfect guy or to relive her childhood but whith her parents.

[#24 :]

i liked it, sorta strange though, you should make an accual script for it, i would read it

[#25 :]

Me too... I really haven't got anything better to do with my life

[#26 :]

I like the ideas so far, you should get to writing it.

[#27 :]

i need help

[#28 :]

My God....what have you done the show I love?

I'd already made my judgement about this idea when you mentioned "Afroman"...and the rest only served to convince me.

As constructive critisism though, start again with a slightly less cliched storyline.

[#29 :]

you think it's cliche ????????????

[#30 :]

What concerns me is the use of Afroman. Is he that guy that sings the 'Because i got high' song? If so why would you want to bring him into the Futurama universe? If you need a fairy of somesort, use katrina, at least she's already been introduced into that universe.

[#31 :]

ok i will change the Name to afrodude ps it's not afroman