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FuturamaPac

Professor

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Good fic so far, I take it your Fry?
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FuturamaPac

Professor

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It better not be 3 years! Great so far!
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Rosa

Crustacean

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It's so good please continue
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coldangel

DOOP Secretary

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First-person narrative is more effective than the third in the depiction of emotions and internal conflict. The trick then, of course, is to discover adequate mechanisms by which other character's emotions can be displayed without resorting to cheesy 'change-the-perspective-to-different-characters-every-chapter' kind of cop-out gimmicks. It's a lot of fun, and an interesting challenge. Needless to say it doesn't always lend itself to complex tales involving multiple locations or large-scale action sequences. I use it for short introspective fiction. Like this very brief little romantic thing written from Leela's perspective: http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-001474-1/ Great work so far. Hope to see more.
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FuturamaPac

Professor

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So when's the next update coming?
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DrThunder88

DOOP Secretary

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How long ago were your Year 6 SATS, Mattador?
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