Reverse Fry-chology *MY FIRST FUTURAMA FIC*

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Please, can some of you go here and read my story? You don't even have to read it all, just some. Constructive criticism welcome!    How'd I do? IT's still in production, though.

 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3318829/1/

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I like it so far. It's fun. Nothing like slurm in the morning. And slurm in a glass? How novel. I think I see where you're going with the chocolates.

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It's GREAT!!! well done Fry_GIRL!!
And happy new year now that it is for everyone   

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Thanks so much, guys! 
I really appreciate it. Happy New Year!!

Also - if you're on my story, to go to the next chapters (there are about 9 so far) jusst click on the dropdown menu on the top right or bottom right.
Thanks and keep reviewing, you party people!
  I love when people read my stuff!

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Cool!I cant read it all right now but I can already say that it's better than my(everything's better than my).

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Sounds realy creative and good so far. Realy nice. Also, funny. I like it.

 

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Oh, thank you soo much!   

What chapter did you guys all get up to?
I think I'm gonna go write more now!

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Cool story, but the idea of Leela and Zapp makes me sick so I hope you're planning on Fry and Leela, or something like that. Keep it up

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I have read all chapters by now and I still think it is a great story. In fact, you describe the characters realy good, one could realy imagine this as a Futurama episode from TV.

Leela, Fry and Zapp? This is going to be interesting. Also, magical love candies are involved. Please continue writing! 

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@ jle1993 - Don't worry, it is NOT going to be Leela/Zapp.     I just think Zapp is too funny to NOT be in the story. lol!

@ TLL - Thank you for reading all of it! I'm glad you like it.    Yes, the love candies will be a big part of it soon. Thanks for the review! I will keep writing. In fact, I may even write more right now! I will probably post up some more later.

~EDIT~
I am writing a verrrry good part right now, should be up soon. Want a hint of what's happening? Think Fry + candy.   

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cool story so far keep it going!

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Originally posted by Fry_GIRL:
@ jle1993 - Don't worry, it is NOT going to be Leela/Zapp.

Thank God, I was going to have to shoot myself if it was. 

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:] Thanks again everyone.
I'm going to go put up Chapter 10 right now!

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Is it up yet?

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Look here (link).

... and it doesn't seem like there is anything up yet.   

Though, I think we should at least check every now and then to see when it's up.

For I'm realy curious about the next part of the story ... what with Fry and Candy.

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Wow that's very creative I thought it was going to be generic but you proved me wrong. Good job!

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Thank you I'm so glad people are liking my story!
Yeah I'm sorry I couldn't put it up last night.
I'll put it up now.

~EDIT~
It's up. Sorry it's kinda short.   

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very short...but still good. I wonder whats going to happen next, its caught my attention

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Yes! It's getting heated up lol. I'm going to finish CHAPTER 11 right now and then hopefully put it up in a little while! 

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SORRY FOR THE X2 POST, but CHAPTER 11 is finally up!! Enjoy! (It's not as short as Ch. 10, don't worry.)

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NONONONONONONOnONONo, NOT CHAZ!!!!!
I mean okay, I'm glad she love Fry yoo, but Chaz, come on!

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Don't worry, it's just a little part of the story, he's not gonna be a big part of it or anything. He's just an example to show that Leela ate a....oh I've said too much :0

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SHE DID WHAT!!! I thought Leela was sensible, oh nononono, not good, but great story anyway *starts pacing*

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Okay so you still like the story right? lol. I don't wanna make a part that no one will like.

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I like the story, I just get stressed out easily. It was a good update.

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oooh good I'm glad!!!!!
The next chapter, (I'm writing it right now) is pretty funny!!

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Good good, I need some light comic relief after the tantrum I just threw over in the shippers thread.

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***CHAPTER 12 IS UP***

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Woo! *reads*
Wow, this throws everything, what the hell is Leela doing?
Go Fry go!

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Wow!! Coool!! I like this fanfic, can't wait to see how it ends!!! 

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Thanks you! 

Hey I just wanted to let you all know that I'm not allowed on the computer during Mon-Fri, but during school I will write a LOT, and I mean a lot of the story. Sorry for the wait! Check back here on Sat. 

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hey guys sorry for the lack of updates.  i'll update soon.

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I'll read your story later. I can't right now, but I will!