my own futurama episode (part 1)

[on:]

"fry the vegitarian"

fry watching 2 minute microwave beans go round and round.

fry: can;t this thing go any faster!

leela: you have been saying that for the past 1 minute 25,26,27,28,29,30 and so on secondsyou only have 2o more seconds !

fry . you (beeep!) thing.

zoidberg: temper temper now wheres my 2 minute beans?

leela looks at fry.

fry: i'm of to the pizza place

leela: always goes that step to far.

the next day at the zoo.

amy: look kim and sheepie lamie thingie.

kim: i love being married hearing the sounds of..

amy: BURRPPP! sorry i had 2 minute beans for lunch.

kim: what his it about 2 minute beans.

leela: look a pig.

pig ( the best meats in the rump)

leela: that would make a lovely dinner.

fry: oh my god! your all helpless beings.

fry: i will stand up for animals because i will become a vegitarian.

all: ooohhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!           

[Reply #1 on:]

Hmmm to be completely honest I am sorry to say I didn't like it that much    . The phrases were out of character it was going nowhere and it was quite boring, sorry man...

[Reply #2 on:]

hey wolves,
Not bad for a start, has to develop some more though.   
btw. It's "Kif" not "kim". 

Sadly you posted it in the wrong forum, but I think a mod will gladly move it to the right one.

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Originally posted by wolves95:
"fry the vegitarian"

fry watching 2 minute microwave beans go round and round.

fry: can;t this thing go any faster!

leela: you have been saying that for the past 1 minute 25,26,27,28,29,30 and so on secondsyou only have 2o more seconds !

fry . you (beeep!) thing.

zoidberg: temper temper now wheres my 2 minute beans?

leela looks at fry.

fry: i'm of to the pizza place

leela: always goes that step to far.

the next day at the zoo.

amy: look kim and sheepie lamie thingie.

kim: i love being married hearing the sounds of..

amy: BURRPPP! sorry i had 2 minute beans for lunch.

kim: what his it about 2 minute beans.

leela: look a pig.

pig ( the best meats in the rump)

leela: that would make a lovely dinner.

fry: oh my god! your all helpless beings.

fry: i will stand up for animals because i will become a vegitarian.

all: ooohhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!              

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