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newhook_1

Urban Legend
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« on: 08-02-2003 02:13 »
« Last Edit on: 08-02-2003 02:13 »

Here is my fanfiction that took me a whole hour to write.

Fry and Bender are on the couch watching T.V., Leela and Amy are sitting at the table playing that horrible futuristic 3-d scrabble.
Professer enters the room pushing a hover cart with a crate on it.

Professer: Good news everyone! Today you'll be making a delivery to Keenevil 7, The daredevil planet.

Leela walks over

Leela: so what are we delivering?

Professer: It's a shrinking ray, the government there wants it to shrink the giant bears that live there

Fry: Why don't they just kill there bears

Professer: Because you dottering fool! The bears are used to make the leather in their stunt jackets, They just want to
be able to make them in children's sizes.

Leela: So even the childern there do stunts?

Professer: Oh my yes, people get injured there all the time, why the hospitals are never empty there.

Bender (looks over): What injured flesh wad's?

Bender jumps up

Bender: Come on people this delivery won't make its self!

Bender lifts up crate and heads toward ship

Zoidberg enters the room

Zoidberg: A planet full of other medical doctor types such as myself. Can I come mabye?

Leela: Well ok, just don't let me catch you near the shrink ray or I'll start locking my dumpster again.

Fry, Leela and Zoidberg head for ship

Cut to Bender laying down crate and heading off to he and Fry's room

Fry, Leela and Zoidberg enter ship. Fry puts a lunch can down next to the shrink ray and Zoidberg notices it out of the corner
of his eye.

Leela starts the ship and takes off while Fry heads to he and Bender's room, where Bender is in the top bunk

Fry: Hey that's my bunk!

Bender: What difference does it make Meatbag?!?

Fry lies down on bunk under Bender and a creak is heard. The top bunk then colaspes and bender falls on the floor

     
---------Later On---------------

We see a shot of Leela in her bed (in a reveiling night gown for you Leela fans), Shot of the Bender-Fry room
Bender is on the bottom bunk, Fry is on the floor.

We see a shot of the crate with Fry's lunch box next to it and Zoidberg's shadow looms over it

He walks in an picks up the lunch box

Zoidberg: Happy Birthday Dr. Zoidberg!

He opens the box and leans up aganist the crate tipping it over, activating the ray

Zoidberg: (Unspellable Zoidberg Yell)

It zaps Zoidberg and shrinks him

Zoidberg: Oh no! What have I done?!?

Zoidberg looks at how big the food is compared to him

Ziodberg: Hooray!

--------------Insert standerd Futurama change of scene music here-----------------

Leela, Bender and Fry walk into cargo hold

Leela: Well we're here, but where's Zoidberg? And why is the crate tipped over?

Bender takes a puff of a cigar

Bender: eh, he's probably in a better place

Shot of Zoidberg stuck on a glue mouse trap

Zoidberg: ohhhh, what would Zombie Jesus do?

Back to Leela, Bender and Fry

Bender: Who cares any way? Let's just deliver the ray so we can see some motorcycle crashes!

They load the crate onto a hover cart and push it down the ramp. A world foll of rocks shaped like ramps
gigantic canyons and trees with prickers in them unfolds before them.

A motorcycle with a guy who is dressed like Super Dave Osbourne and looks just like a human except he is green and has devil horns
crashes in front of them from the sky.

Fry and Bender (high fiving eachother): Yes!

Leela stoops down to talk to the fellow

Leela: Can you tell us where the government office is?

He raises an arm that looks to be broken is several places and points to the east.

--------------Insert standerd Futurama change of scene music here-----------------

The crew is walking back onto the ship

Fry: Wow! I've never seen a Govener who's throne is a pit of venom filled snakes before!

Leela: well we're ready, where's Zoidberg?

Bender pushes button to close door

Leela: Hey! What if Zoidberg isn't on the ship?

Bender: He would have wanted it this way.

they all head to the control room where Leela starts the ship and takes off

 
--------------Insert standerd Futurama change of scene music here-----------------

Zoidberg is still nowhere to be found, the others are explain the situation to Professer Farnsworth.

Professer: Tch Tch Tch. Luckily I have already made and invention perfect for this situation

Farnsworth opens a desk drawer and takes out "The Zoid-Seeker"

Farnsworth walks onto the ship and the device begins beeping he hones in on Zoidberg who they find
Jumping up and down in front of the tiolet.

Zoidberg: Little help?

Farnsworth: My god! he must have used the shrink ray on his self.

Bender: (Evil Laugh)

Leela: So how do we fix him

Farnsworth: well I can try to reverse the properties of the shrink ray but that could take months

Zoidberg: What do I do until then.

Bender: I know

Bender picks up Zoidberg and takes a goldfish bowl out of his chest cavity, which he puts Zoidberg in

Bender (narrows eyes looking at zoidberg): he he he he

Leela: couldn't we just clone a regular sized Zoidberg with the same memories from this one's DNA?

Farnsworth: That just might work and we can just flush this one down the tiolet! 

--------------Insert standerd Futurama change of scene music here-----------------

They are all in the lab with a nervious looking Mini-Zoidberg on the table
The Professor is about to stick in the needle when Zoidberg's shell cracks open and a slightly
larger Zoidberg climbs out.

Zoidberg: I'm molting, oh that takes me back

Professor: Amazing it seems that with his smaller size Zoidbergs DNA has kicked in and he's growing larger

----------------------------------Several weeks later-------------------------

everyone except Zoidberg is watching T.V., Zoidberg walks into the room

Zoidberg: Look everyone I'm back to my normal size
   
Bender Throws a beer bottle and just misses Zoidberg's head

Bender: Shaddup!

Zoidberg (tear runs down face): Ah, just like old times.

-----------------------------------END---------------------------------
Killerfox

Professor
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« Reply #1 on: 08-02-2003 02:23 »
« Last Edit on: 08-02-2003 02:23 »

Really good but you could make it a little larger maybe
newhook_1

Urban Legend
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« Reply #2 on: 08-02-2003 02:37 »
« Last Edit on: 08-02-2003 02:37 »

well if people like this I probably will make a longer one but like I said, It took an hour to write, I thought it would take an hour to read.
Bobby King

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #3 on: 08-02-2003 02:51 »

preaty good  smile
SpaceCase

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #4 on: 08-02-2003 04:38 »

Very good. I begs to be expanded on.
newhook_1

Urban Legend
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« Reply #5 on: 08-02-2003 21:39 »

If anyone else has an opinion on this (besides being to short) I would like to hear it. So next time I try this I can make it better.
Vintage Dave

Bending Unit
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« Reply #6 on: 08-04-2003 21:11 »

You've got some good lines in there and the story arc is ok, except maybe a little too chopped-off at the end, but that seems to happen in most fanfics.  The main problem I see is that even as unpopular as he is, the others would make at least a token effort to find him, especially Leela, since you set her up with the "Hey! What if..." line.

Just my hastily scrounged $.02
newhook_1

Urban Legend
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« Reply #7 on: 08-04-2003 21:56 »

THANK-YOU It's good to get some input that goes into a bit of detail (no offense to the other peeps who commented though).
Vintage Dave

Bending Unit
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« Reply #8 on: 08-04-2003 23:15 »
« Last Edit on: 08-04-2003 23:15 »

Don't mention it.  I haven't seen much public critique.  Too volatile.  I think a lot more of this sort of thing happens in private email.

All right!  I'm a delivery boy!
Killerfox

Professor
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« Reply #9 on: 08-05-2003 00:24 »

keep on working on that fanfic!
alexvilagosh

Goose Patrol
Space Pope
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« Reply #10 on: 08-07-2003 03:15 »

Nice planet name!
King Prawn

Poppler
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« Reply #11 on: 08-07-2003 04:57 »

I_think...I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  flirt
Gocad

Space Pope
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« Reply #12 on: 08-07-2003 05:04 »

Hello, King Prawn.  smile

nice story, btw.
ooy

Professor
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« Reply #13 on: 08-13-2003 23:29 »

wow cool!
Bobby King

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #14 on: 08-14-2003 03:03 »

coooooooooooooooooool
Zack Brannigan

Bending Unit
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« Reply #15 on: 08-17-2003 01:57 »

My favorite line:

*Zoidberg looks at how big the food is compared to him*

Zoidberg: "Hooray!"
leelaholic

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #16 on: 08-19-2003 22:20 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by Newhook:
We see a shot of Leela in her bed (in a reveiling night gown for you Leela fans),

Thank you  smile
newhook_1

Urban Legend
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« Reply #17 on: 08-19-2003 22:34 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by King Prawn:
I_think...I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   flirt

I am honored that the only post King Prawn has ever made is in a thread I started.
Oh, and Thanks to everyone who liked the story.
HawkingHole4001

Bending Unit
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« Reply #18 on: 08-19-2003 23:03 »

It's great! You should make a sequel.
LordZoidberg

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #19 on: 02-19-2006 15:12 »

the story is literly a story from another site
Benders_Fan

Urban Legend
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« Reply #20 on: 02-19-2006 17:26 »

Wow,a 3 year bump.Was this really necassary?
Officer 1BDI

Starship Captain
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« Reply #21 on: 02-19-2006 17:47 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by LordZoidberg:
the story is literly a story from another site
*investigates*

You know, it's entirely possibly that Newhook is/was a member of Simpworks and uploaded the story there himself.

Also:
 
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Originally posted by Benders_Fan:
Wow,a 3 year bump.Was this really necassary?
LordZoidberg

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #22 on: 02-20-2006 18:49 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by Officer 1BDI:
 
Quote
Originally posted by LordZoidberg:
the story is literly a story from another site
*investigates*

You know, it's entirely possibly that Newhook is/was a member of Simpworks and uploaded the story there himself.

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i was going to put an edit saying it might have been you and i didnt know it was that long ill stop on this 1 know sorry

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