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Writer unit32

Professor
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« on: 10-29-2006 16:10 »

I'm working on my first fan-fic.I have to finish it (only the first part)and check to use the catch-frazes and stuff.Shouldn't take long.  roll eyes
Bendersucksfry

Bending Unit
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« Reply #1 on: 10-29-2006 19:37 »

i like to read it so just post it and all read and tell how good it is
Officer 1BDI

Starship Captain
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« Reply #2 on: 10-29-2006 20:04 »

Would you be willing to give us a quick preview or a summary while you're finishing it?
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #3 on: 10-30-2006 06:33 »
« Last Edit on: 11-29-2006 00:00 »

OK then
A delivery on Trisol.I wont tell any more!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #4 on: 10-30-2006 14:15 »
« Last Edit on: 11-28-2006 00:00 »

The solid emperor      chapter 1

The crew was as usual working .That means they were sitting on the coach, watching TV. On the screen Calculon found Boxy opening his safe
Boxy (throw the usual bybiking): ‘Bip! Bip biiip bip…’
Calculon: ‘In Australia?’(It’s really like that Calculon/Monic/Boxy bit:
Monic:  ‘Calculon! I thought you were…’
Calculon: ‘In Siberia?’)
Fry got extremely bored from the scene he already saw in seven episodes. He changed the channel.
Bender: Hey! Meatbag we were watching that…
Fry: Who's dying to be a Gazilionaire…’(a show from one of the Futurama comics)
Bender: ‘Me!’
Fry: ‘Well then die and I'll give you some cash.’
Bender (standing up): ‘Well I’m going’
Leela: Where?
Bender:’To a suicide booth’ He went out of the room muttering’Money, I need the loot Fry promisssssssed, yesss my precioussss, loot...’ (Really like Golum from Lord of the Rings)
Amy walks in: ‘Good news everyone...’
Professor: ‘Shut up!’
He walked out taking Amy with him, then walked in again.
Professor: ’Good news everyone.you got a mission!’
He started walking away.
Fry:’So whats the mission?
Professor:’ The wha-a?
Fry: ’The delivery’
Prof.: ’Oh yes that…Hey, its my turn to show my invention’
Fry:’ What invention?
Leela:’Professor,you gave us a mission’
Prof.:’Well what are you waiting for?
Amy:’ I guess that means Hermes will tell us.
Prof: ‘C’mon the symposium must go on!’
Everybody walk out of the room except the professor who was mumbling something about his ingenious invention.
Fry:’ I never saw him like that before…’
Amy:’Spl'uh he’s like that all his life!’
Fry:’ I know but not like that…’
They sat at the conference table.Hermes walked in reading some papers.
Hermes: ‘Sweet gum ball of New New York city hall,you got a delivery on Trisol!
Everybody stare at Fry.It looks like he’s too slow cuz he’s still smiling ,althought the rest of him looked worried.(hope you can imagine a man who knows he’ll die today and is still smiling.
Zoidberg:’It was good knowing you Zoidbergs friend’
Leela:’Goodbye Fry’
Hermes:’You’ll all be deader then a green snake poisoned by sugar from a can!But here’s some good news.Zoidberg,Amy and Scruffy will die with you.’
Zoidberg:’Hooray I’m useful!’
Scruffy:’Scruffy will rather die than do his real job’
Amy:’Well I’m going’
Leela:’Where?’
Amy(standing up):’To a suicide booth she went out of the room muttering’its not worse than flying on Trisol…’
Hermes:’Sweet trigger happy Jim of the fortress of grim(TriggerHappyJim is a real PEELer),did Amy just go to a suicide booth?’
Fry:’Well I wont be the only one to die…’
to be continued (atleast I hope so)
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 I know it's junk but it's my first fan-fic
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #5 on: 10-30-2006 14:31 »

wow, thats quite good, i think you captured some of the charecters [almost] perfectly. Well Done!!  {*does her victory dance*}
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #6 on: 10-30-2006 14:40 »

Than-jii
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #7 on: 10-30-2006 14:47 »

wahh...? what are you onnabout??  confused
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #8 on: 10-30-2006 14:53 »

Cool fic, looking good  smile
Apple Tea

Bending Unit
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« Reply #9 on: 10-30-2006 14:59 »

Well done old chap!  I agree, characters are well captured.  Why do u keep changing ur avatar?
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #10 on: 10-30-2006 16:15 »

x-number1fan-x I was thanking you.
jle1993 than-jii.
Apple Tea,thanks and I cant deside what avatar to keep.
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #11 on: 10-30-2006 16:20 »
« Last Edit on: 11-01-2006 00:00 »

oh...!- see, I'm way too stupid for my own good...
miss_bender

Starship Captain
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« Reply #12 on: 10-30-2006 23:23 »

that was good write more! I think you got the peofessors character the best scruffy's was good two...though he only said one line, but it was a good one! Bender and fry were good too. No offense but I think you made hermes say to many of his weird hermes like things...sorry...but that was the only thing I didn't like! Oh and I also thought the calculon TV show was cool too. big grin
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #13 on: 10-31-2006 07:49 »

I thought I made Hermes too much...errr...Hermes!And thanks!
I'll try to finish it soon cuz I got a idea I like a lot more...
A Bender/Flexo thing...
Only I think Flexo should have his oun nicknames for humans(or people,however your rase likes to be called)- Food container,DNA bank,bone wraper and of course even Bender's evil twin brother should use the Bender classics- meatbag and skintube.
miss_bender

Starship Captain
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« Reply #14 on: 10-31-2006 19:16 »

DNA bank that's a good one big grin I'm glad you not offened by my comment thoough!
LuvFry

Bending Unit
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« Reply #15 on: 10-31-2006 20:44 »

That was purty good. I'd like to see where it's headed. Keep up the good work!
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #16 on: 11-04-2006 05:35 »

can you post another update, its been like 4 days??


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Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #17 on: 11-04-2006 06:51 »

Sorry, I got a Simpson DVD and a 'lazy disease'
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #18 on: 11-05-2006 12:09 »
« Last Edit on: 12-20-2006 00:00 »

Atlast I got some free time.I had to make it quick.

The solid Emperor     chapter II

Amy and Bender walked in the PE building.Amy looked mad,Bender looked like he lost something he really needed.
Hermes looked on a bending unit,a  guy looking really like Fry,some rich girl(you can tell by just looking at her),and the five-eyed freak who was in Alcazar's bride list.
Hermes:’Why the hell are you still alive ?!’To the rich girl and the bending unit’ Sorry, you can go now’
They walked out of the building(not until Bender stole the rich girls wallet)
Hermes:’Now you two.Why aren’t ja dead?’
Amy:’Bender stole my wallet’
Bender:’And I lost my coin on a string…And where are the others?
Hermes:’ Professor’s over there ,errr..Showing his invention on the annual inventor symposium,’He pointed where the professor was wawing a toster( This isn’t the first time something happened to the toster:
Prof :‘Good news everyone I tought the toster to love!’
Prof:‘I already tried to turn a toster in a raccoon…’
Fry:‘The toster ain’t working right either!’) and saying some speech to a imaginary audience’and the rest are on a delivery on Trisol!’
Bender:’Whaat?The jerkwads are gonna die?Oh well lets watch TV.
Hermes:’Bender,mon according to this contract that me,Leela and Fry tricked you into signing,you’re supposed to find they’re bodies, buy them graves,then…’
Bender:’Whaaaat?!’thrown bottle in Hermes,bottle hit Amy’You jerk!’
Hermes:’Bender you signed the contract’
Bender:’Then I'll find them if it's the last thing I do!’
Amy:”But I think they’re already dead…’
Bender:’Death can bite my shiny metal ass!’

Fry and Zoidberg just put the package on the hover dolly and were still tyred so they didn’t walk out on the ground yet.
Fry:’Well now we'll suffer.’
Zoidberg:’Why?’
Fry:’It’s a planet with three suns,doctor Zoidberg,three.We'll be fried!’
Zoidberg:’You are Fry’
Fry:’Even more fried!’
As soon as they stepped on the ground a rain started.Not just a rain, they got wet on the next step.
Fry:’Well,atleast it isn't hot’
The rain got even worse

In a borroved(more like stolen) space ship Amy sat in the captain’s place while Bender and the professor are putting the old PE ship autopilot(the one that drinks martiny with Bender on missions) where it’s supposed to be.Everyone sit down,Farnsworth starts sleeping
Amy:’Bender?’
Bender:’Here with my shiny metal ass!’
Amy:’Fry?’
Nobody answers.
Amy:’Err,yeah…Autopilot?’
Autopilot(drunk voice) :’Here’
Amy:’Professor?’
Professor:’Eeer whaaa?Oh I'm awake,I'm awake’Went back to sleep
Amy: (looking like Leela in Bendless Love)’Lets rock’

jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #19 on: 11-05-2006 12:24 »

Pretty good, I liked Bender's reaction, but the typing confused me abit. Good storyline though.
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #20 on: 11-05-2006 12:25 »
« Last Edit on: 11-05-2006 12:25 »

Thanks but, I ran out of ideas. frown
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #21 on: 11-05-2006 12:25 »

its great! goody goody great great  big grin
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #22 on: 11-05-2006 12:31 »

Maybe Amy and co could get stopped by the Nimbus?
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #23 on: 11-05-2006 12:35 »

Great idea!And something with Kif!Ooo and Fry and Zoidberg won't die they'll become slaves!And...Well I ran out of ideas again.But I think I got enough already!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #24 on: 11-05-2006 12:38 »

Good good!  big grin
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #25 on: 11-05-2006 12:57 »

yay!...more story, more story, more story!

(btw, anyone in england gunna watch the new simpsons in half an hour?)
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #26 on: 11-05-2006 12:58 »

yup
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #27 on: 11-05-2006 12:59 »

gurrd, me too
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #28 on: 11-05-2006 16:30 »

Sorry for making it so short but,here's th update.

The solid Emperor     part III

Fry and Zoidberg we’re walking in the wet desert.The rain was worse than ever.
Fry:’Well I’m not fried,but I’m freezing.’
Zoidberg:’I can give you some warm mucus.’
Fry:’Yes please’
The next second Fry was cowered in some kind of a grey liquid.
Fry:’Ewww…’

In the borrowed ship Amy was in the captain’s chair,Bender and Professor that by the look of it was used by a reaaly angry man(or bot) and the autopilot was steeling some martiny throw a robot hand that was supposed to be used like some kitchen instruments.Amy was looking at a map but didn’t understand anything.She put it up-side-down.Yep this looked more like it.Amy looked at the map closely.’Darn neptunian language’she thought.She still didn’t understand anything.She was looking in the dictionary when she noticed a ship on the raider.She looked in the window.The ship was still too far away,but it still looked big and kinda familiar.She got closer to the unknown ship.
Amy: (gasping)’The Nimbus!Oh, this isn’t good.
Zapp’s face appeared on the screen.
Zapp:’Your under arrest!’
Amy: (screeming)’FOR WHAT YOU JACKASS?’
Zapp:’For coming close to the ship of a 25 star general’
Amy turned the ship but, it was too late,Zapp borded the whole ship and she had to stop before flying into a wall.
As soon as they went out off the ship they were arrested and lead into the Nimbus jail.

Fry and Zoidberg stopped before the liquid emperor’s fortress.
Fry: (thinking)’I could leave the package here.Or wait I can’t.Well technically I can, but…Yes I can..or no…Yeah,no wait …Yes I could.
He was going to leave when the door opened and the emperor’s quards circled him,moving even faster than usuall in water.Fry and Zoidberg were lead into the fortress.Fry looked on the Trisolian emperor.The same he drunk!This guy by the looks of it was a ruff ruler since he wasn’t drunk yet.
Fry:’What up?’
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #29 on: 11-05-2006 16:45 »

hehe, its quite good, i only got to skim it cuz i have to go to TV land before I go to sleepybyeland, but its good!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #30 on: 11-06-2006 02:33 »

Does anybody remember what Zapp usua lly sais when he sees Leela?And whats the name of the Trisolian emperor Fry drunk?
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #31 on: 11-06-2006 10:57 »

sorry, i can't remember, but isn't it just the Emperor?
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #32 on: 11-06-2006 17:05 »
« Last Edit on: 12-20-2006 00:00 »

I'm really slow today so I'll post a even shorter one.

The solid Emperor     chapter VI

In the jail professor Farnsworth were sleeping, Bender was signing folk songs and Amy was just sitting thinking.
Amy: (thinking)’I’m on one ship with Kif and still locked in a jail.I think we should give that jackass a kick in the ass…’
She looked at one of the guards.
Amy:’Hey you.Can you call Leutenant Kif Kroker?’
Guard:’And who are you?’
Amy:’Amy Wong from The Martian Wongs, maybe, potentially Amy Kroker’
Guard:’Errr…OK.But the jackass isn’t gonna like this…’

Fry and Zoidberg were dropped in some place that looked like some kind of some mines.
Fry:’Errr…Where are we?’
Trisolian:’You are in our mines’
Fry:’Minds?’
Trisolian:’No.You have become slaves of the Trisolians.Now you can hmm…Explore your new home.
Fry and Zoidberg:’???’(stare blankly)
Trisolian:’The mines of course’
Some kind of a bell rang.
Fry:’Whats that?’
Trisolian:’Dinner’
Zoidberg:’Whoopy, free food’
Fry:’I’m in!’
They rushed to the place everybody were going(isn’t it obvious,if there’s free dinner, then wher would everyone go?).They got something looking kinda like food.
Zoidberg:’Mmm,shoe pie,you should try it.
Fry:’After Bender’s cooking  I’m  not complaining.
Fry grabbed a glass and was going to drink it.
Some guy:’Don’t drink that you idiot!’
Fry;’But I’m thirsty…’
Some guy:’It’s a Trisolian watchman!’
Fry looked at the glass.Yep the water is too blue and there are snoring noises coming out of it.
Fry:’So what now’
One of the human slaves:’Now?Work.’
The bell rings again.Everybody start going.
The same human slave:’You know what makes a proper slave?’
Fry:’Err…Work really,really hard?’
Human slave:’No’
Fry:’Ahh,thank god!
Human slave:’You just have to look busy and rebel.It’s all about rebellion.’
coldangel

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #33 on: 11-06-2006 18:37 »

Great stuff, but 'Vong'?
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #34 on: 11-07-2006 02:08 »
« Last Edit on: 11-07-2006 02:08 »

Whoopsy-daisy!Well now I edited it so she'll be Wong.And thanks!
Apple Tea

Bending Unit
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« Reply #35 on: 11-07-2006 03:44 »

smashin!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #36 on: 11-08-2006 12:51 »

Thanks,I'm writing the next chapter.
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #37 on: 11-08-2006 12:52 »

ooh its good!  big grin go wu32, go wu32, go wu32
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #38 on: 11-08-2006 13:10 »

Go writer,go writer,go writer...
Thanks!I'll put Leela in the next part.
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #39 on: 11-08-2006 14:43 »
« Last Edit on: 12-20-2006 00:00 »

Again a short update.My uncle was at the computer a long time so I couldn't write faster.
The solid emperor     chapter V

Leela was lying in her room on the PE ship.Whenever she let Fry on a suicidal mission she started thinking about him not only as a co-worker and even not as a friend.She knew that the ‘he’s my best friend’ bit didn’t work any more even for herself.She started thinking about all the things he did for her.She stood up.The thoughts she didn’t really want to think won’t let go of her if she was gonna lay there when Fry’s in grave danger.Still putting on her ‘captain’s’ jacket she went out of the room.
Leela:’Scruffy.You know how to get to the Trisolian fortress?'
Scruffy:’Yeargh…'
He threw Leela a umbrella,grabed something looking like a long girder,grabed Leela and put it all on the spare hover dolly.Then he took another umbrella and used the girder like a paddle and started paddling.Not  even in the right direction.

Fry and Zoidberg were in a croud.Fry was talking to the slave that tell him about rebellion.
Fry:’So what are we gonna do there?’
Slave:’The usuall thing for slaves.Digging for some crap,making new mines…’
Fry:’Does this place have a phone?’
Slave:’We’re in mines Fry!What makes you think Trisolians would put a phone in here?’
Fry:’Good point…’
Slave:’Maybe you can run away when we rebell’
Fry:’Wait,you were serious?’
Slave:’Pfff ye,what did you think,we’re gonna work ourselves to death?’

Amy was still waiting for Kif.Bender fell asleap and was mumbling something about killing all humans and something about sexy fembots wantig to kill all humans.Finally Kif came.
Kif:’How did you get on the Nimbus, my precious?’
Amy:’We were going to save half of our crew and on the way the jackass borded us!Can you get us out of here?’
Kif:’But if the jackass…’
Amy: (desperately)’Kif…’
Kif:'I’ll talk to the jackass…’
Kif went away,Amy sank in the seet.
Amy: (to herself)’Zapp wont even listen’
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I ran out of ideas.I mean I have some but,I don't know how to get to the part where I'll write them.
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