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PEE Poll: Galactic Wars Part 1..
Great!!!   -0 (0%)
Good   -0 (0%)
Alright   -2 (40%)
wow (!)   -1 (20%)
My god Nurdbot that even worse than your Anime!!!   -2 (40%)
Total Voters: 5

Nurdbot

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« on: 11-15-2001 02:04 »
« Last Edit on: 11-15-2001 02:04 »

Ok guys here is the First part of Galactic wars.I am Working on the 2nd part.Please tell me what you think oh and neo1999 please DON'T!!!!... http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=455551
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[-mArc-]:Good new's PEEL
Nurdbot:Uhoh i don't like the sound of that...
[-mArc-]:you will be delivery to Ebola 9..
Nurdbot:uhoh here it comes...
[-mArc-]:In the most Diseased ridden part of the Bio-Zone..
Nurdbot:Thank you and Goodnight *drinks beer*
          
Back off Sailor Jupiters MINE she is Mine.
TheMadCapper

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« Reply #1 on: 11-15-2001 03:51 »

It's not exactly readable. You might get a decent rating if you actually correct the myriad spelling and grammatical errors.

Actually, if you agree to let me rewrite and correct these errors, I'll do it. There's probably potential for something spiffy here.
DrThunder88

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« Reply #2 on: 11-15-2001 07:31 »

I agree with Capper.  It really should be proofread before it's presented.
Nurdbot

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« Reply #3 on: 11-15-2001 12:23 »

Chapter 2 is now up..working on Chapter 3...
TheMadCapper

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« Reply #4 on: 11-15-2001 12:29 »

You'll note I asked for editing authority as well as proofreading.
Kryten

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« Reply #5 on: 11-15-2001 13:02 »

I'm sure it'd be funny... IF IT WAS THE LEAST BIT INTELLIGIBLE!!!  confused   confused

Otis P Jivefunk

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« Reply #6 on: 11-15-2001 14:45 »

Hmmmmmmm it's ok but is'nt exactly inspiring,  Could do with punctuation but it's ok, nothing special.
Nurdbot

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« Reply #7 on: 11-16-2001 00:54 »

 
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Originally posted by Kryten:
I'm sure it'd be funny... IF IT WAS THE LEAST BIT INTELLIGIBLE!!!   confused    confused

Hey Give me a break!! i have not written an Futu-Fic in years.


Allen

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« Reply #8 on: 11-22-2001 18:22 »

 
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Originally posted by Nurdbot:
 
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Originally posted by Kryten:
I'm sure it'd be funny... IF IT WAS THE LEAST BIT INTELLIGIBLE!!!    confused     confused

Hey Give me a break!! i have not written an Futu-Fic in years.


That's not the problem Nurdbot. The problem is most people will skim through what appears to be a long story crammed into two paragraphs. It also needs a spell-check done on it.


The end of a story is only the beginning.
rach_the_tall

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« Reply #9 on: 11-23-2001 03:36 »

Use word. It corrects your spelling and some grammar. Get your mummy to do the rest. There is not excuse for poor grammar and spelling in fanfics because you should edit them, or at least use a program that does it for you.
Nurdbot

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« Reply #10 on: 11-25-2001 05:36 »

 
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Originally posted by Allen:
 That's not the problem Nurdbot. The problem is most people will skim through what appears to be a long story crammed into two paragraphs. It also needs a spell-check done on it.



My I am busy at the Moment.I have 20 other fics to complete.So excccuuuussseeee me if it is rushed!!,I am 14 you know i got school..if i had my time i would write it and correct it.You got an Problem write to the Board of Education.

Fat Bot

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« Reply #11 on: 11-25-2001 09:32 »

If I were you I would just write them during school, saves doing work.
KENNEDY

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« Reply #12 on: 11-25-2001 11:45 »

Hmmm.I always thought school was for learning those things.I am currently working on a fan fic and I'm not going to to down-grade with grammatical errors.
Allen

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« Reply #13 on: 11-28-2001 21:09 »

 
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Originally posted by Nurdbot:
 My I am busy at the Moment.I have 20 other fics to complete.So excccuuuussseeee me if it is rushed!!,I am 14 you know i got school..if i had my time i would write it and correct it.You got an Problem write to the Board of Education.



That doesn't make sense. I have school too and I find time to write and make corrections. Some one once said quality not quantity. Work on one at a time. It's not hard to do


The end of a story is only the beginning.
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