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Ol´coot

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« Reply #760 on: 05-05-2005 20:33 »

Wow! Fourtynine parts and with each one the intensity and tension increase! How do you do that??? Great chapter Layla!!
Layla50

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« Reply #761 on: 05-05-2005 21:10 »
« Last Edit on: 05-05-2005 21:10 »

I've just received a bit of good advice from someone in the know, and so I'd like to request that this thread not get closed until it's closer to the end of the page.

That way I could start off a new thread with another update.

Thank you mysterious moderators who I vaguely fear. I'm sure you are all beautiful or handsome or both.
AsaB

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« Reply #762 on: 05-05-2005 21:21 »

Thank god! Layla, you saved my week. It's simply *so* relieving reading some interesting quality work after almost a week lost in schoolbooks. So I'm hoping the next update is within the next two weeks, then at least I'd know of one thing to keep me sane.

But on to the update! That was a really epic and dramatic one. First off, you're giving us the impression that you've killed off two major characters (which I refuse to believe) and that the third one is about to! Which I refuse to believe that as well. Why, of course. Your cliffies are the worst!

I'm not too good at reviewing, but I still know amazing work when I see/read it. The drama was so well done, as was the tension in the war-in-the-sewers part, almost tangible.

Then the part in Fry's head. Crap. It scared me! When Fry started to sing that song, acting weird and slipping underwater--seriously freaked me out. But since that was your intention, give yourself another well-deserved pat on the back!
In short, awesome.
Kryten

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« Reply #763 on: 05-05-2005 22:49 »

Sadly... this thread must now go the way of all flesh. You can start a new thread and link it to this one if you'd like.
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