Fanfic Masterpieces: Fanfic Release Date

[Reply #80 on:]

Did I say it was a fic? *Looks at previous post*. Yeah, no I didn't. Ok that's what I thought. I gave this guy some critical tips and hopefully he won't reply with swearing at me   . I've had to re-read this sucker to make sure I wasn't being too pushy. Finally Venus, we agree on something.   

TOTPD!!!


Thanks GFF! 

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Since I don't think I'll have my next SpyOrama done before Xmas, here's the plot of SpyOrama 10.

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The title is "On His Robot Santa’s Secret List".  The story centers on how Leela has never been able to celebrate Xmas with her parents, because of her job as a spy.  Fry has to accept that this is his first Xmas without his parents and brother.  Also, Ironfinger plots to ruin Xmas with an evil plan involving Robot Santa.  The story will feature Futurama characters, HG Blob, Yancy, Mr. and Mrs. Fry, the little Neptunians, the mutants and Robot Santa.

If Venus, Spacedal11 or anybody else could offer their input on this premise, that would be cool.

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Ok Fryfan, I'm asumming by mutants you mean Turanga Munda & Turanga Morris. It sounds like a good plot. I can't really say anything until I read a bit of it. Than I can say something and Venus will either agree with me or disagree and if that happens we'll get into a bitch fight. Nothing out of the ordinary.   

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Spacedal is bumping this. The rest has been deleted.

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You just took the same lines from scream and just replaced them with Futurama characters.  This is not a good idea.  I remember a while back, a writer did a Back to the Future/Futurama cross-over.  However, he just copied the lines from the BTTF movie and replaced the characters with Futurama characters.  The fanfic was available on ff.nt was the writer took it off the next day, due to fans giving him reviews that he just copied the whole BTTF movie and didn't add originality to it.

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I see. That was just a test run. Well I'll go back and fix it. See what I can do. Thank you Fryfan. I'm gonna delete that before Venus sees it.

[Reply #86 on:]

Plagerism? And i missed it?! Damn Dawn of the Dead dvd!

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Ha ha! I made it past the finish line this time! 

[Reply #88 on:]

not really, cause even though i didn't see any plagerism, i still heard about it. So it's more like you tripped over the finish line.

[Reply #89 on:]

Surprisingly that sounds more like me. Tripping instead of actually running through it.

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Originally posted by Spacedal11:
Ok Fryfan, I'm asumming by mutants you mean Turanga Munda & Turanga Morris. It sounds like a good plot. I can't really say anything until I read a bit of it. Than I can say something and Venus will either agree with me or disagree and if that happens we'll get into a bitch fight. Nothing out of the ordinary.    

Well, Spacedal11, Venus, Kryten, Allen or anyone else interested, TLZ has finally posted my 10th SpyOrama.  Or as I'm calling it SpyOrama X, since the X makes it sound cool.  "On His Robot Santa's Secret List", is the season 2 finale of SpyOrama.  It features Robot Santa, and Fry tries to give the perfect Xmas present to Leela, but things don't turn out the way it should.

Don't worry SpyOrama will be back for a third season with Futurama characters that haven't appeared yet.  But for now, hope you enjoy this fanfic, and I'd please liked to hear some reviews.

 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/spyorama_x.shtml

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Oh, Venus! How did I ever miss your shippy tidbit of bliss?! Well, better late than never I guess.

How can I put this elegantly?  Hmm... Wahoo!!
Yippy! YippyYippyYippy! Wahoooooey!

Yeah, that about sums it up. I so much love Morris and Munda, they're so parental! "I'd be surprised if you didn't."  Ah, I'm melting into a puddle of happiness. Fantastic, babe! Thanks, and MORE! (When are you gonna finish this thing so I can read it and shower your with praise?)


Not soon enough!!

[Reply #92 on:]

Well, for those interested, the 4th Chapter of "A Past with No Future" should be arriving pretty soon. It's basically done, just awaiting for one of my main beta readers to give me his feedback for final edits.

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Awesome Fryfan! I can't believe you have 10 now! How many more do you plan to have? Cause I liked the Christmas one. It reminded me of a TV show but I can't remember which one.

I still need feedback from this!

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Scream
 
Down in the high apartments of New New York, Michelle was in her living room watching TV and eating popcorn. The phone rang and she picked it up.
 
Michelle: Hello?

Voice: Hello?

Michelle: Yes.

Voice: Who is this?

Michelle: Who are you trying to reach?

Voice: I don't know. I guess I called the wrong number.

Michelle: Guess so.

Voice: Sorry.

Michelle: It happens. Bye-

Voice: Wait! I like your voice. What's your name?

Michelle: You tell me.

Voice: I wouldn't know.

Michelle: Well I don't tell people I don't know my name.

Voice: I understand. So what are you doing?

Michelle: Watching TV.

Voice: Is it scary?

Michelle: I don't watch that shit.

Voice: Why not? Does it scare you too much?

Michelle: No. It's all the same. Boring, you know.

Voice: I like scary movies though.

Michelle: Good for you. What's your favorite?

Voice: Halloween 30.

Michelle: Huh really?

Voice: Yup. Although Nightmare on Elm Street and Friday the 13th are way gorier.

Michelle: So you like to watch people's guts fall out?

Voice: Uh-huh. So much that I'd want to do it in reality. Maybe to you...

Michelle dropped the popcorn in her hand back into the bowl.

Michelle: What did you say?

Voice: I'd like to try and become a doctor is what I meant.

Michelle: Oh! You scared me for a second.

Voice: That was the idea.

Michelle stared at the phone with concern. Although it was a video phone, the screen only showed black.

Michelle: Well I think that was rude.

Voice: Do you?

Michelle: Yeah. Listen my boyfriend is coming over in a minute so I'll have to be going.

Voice: Can't you wait? I'm certain he won't be coming over anytime soon.

Michelle: What makes you say that?

Voice: Cause he's hanging from your balcony...

Michelle ran over to the sliding class doors. She opened them and ran outside but saw nothing.

Michelle: Ok jackass, you've taking this too far. I don't see-*A wet drop falls on her hand*-anything.

She looks up and sees a black haired man in a leather jacket hanging from the upper balcony. He had been stabbed a few times and hung. Michelle screamed and dropped the phone. She ran back inside and locked the doors. The phone rang again. The voice was laughing on the other side.

Michelle crying: Stop it! What the hell is wrong with you!?

Voice: I'm sorry I'm being rude. I'll only laugh completely until I have your corpse on my hands too!

Michelle screaming: No!

She hung up the phone and started dialing the police. But before she hit the "send" button the phone rang again and she screamed.

Voice: You listen to me you harlot, you hang up on me one more time and you'll be stabbed so many times you'll be lucky to have a last breath!

Michelle didn't answer.

Voice: Now I want to play a game.

Michelle: Ok...

Voice: It's very easy. It's a trivia game! Answer the question right, you live! But answer it wrong and well you figure it out.

Michelle was in her kitchen and pulled a knife from her shelf.

Michelle: Ask-ask away.

Voice: That's the spirit! First question: What time did I call?

Michelle looked at the clock.

Michelle: Ten-ten forty-three.

Voice: Correct! You're good. One more question, what time did I kill Bill?

Michelle: I-I don't know...I don't know.

Voice: Are you sure? Your call then...

Just then the closet door busted open and a man in a black cloak wearing a long droopy ghost mask charged at Michelle holding a knife high above his head. Michelle screamed and dropped the phone and ran to the door. She unlocked it but not before the killer got two stabs at her back. Michelle ran out of the hallway screaming "Help!". No one answered. Ghost-face, who wasn't far behind her lunged at her, knocking her down and stabbed her three more times in the back and front. Michelle kicked him off of her, got up and ran. But the killer socked her in the face smashing her into the window. She was on her back gasping for air. Michelle reached her arm out and pulled the killer's mask off. She didn't know who his face was.

Michelle: Who...are...you?

Voice: Time will tell someone, but it won't tell you.

With that he took his knife and plugged it into her stomach. In an instant she was dead.

There's something wrong but I don't know what. It's opened to anyone.

[Reply #94 on:]

   

Originally posted by Spacedal11:
Awesome Fryfan! I can't believe you have 10 now! How many more do you plan to have? Cause I liked the Christmas one. It reminded me of a TV show but I can't remember which one.

In answer to your question, Spacedal11, I don't know for sure how long I want to continue with SpyOrama.  I have many ideas and I hope to have time to work on future stories.  James Bond has 20 official films under his belt and 2 unofficial films, so I have plenty of ideas, but I just need the time.

I'm hoping for Season 3, I can finally add some of my favorite characters that I haven't yet.

Also, your story is more original than before.  It is a good start.

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I see. I think that goes for me too. I won't know when I'm done with fan fics until I'm out of ideas too. Thank you!

[Reply #96 on:]

Altough I´am now little skeptical, doesn´t someone know when will be "The Other", part 18?   

[Reply #97 on:]

I read Fry's Lady fic on TLZ and it was magerly plagerised in the beginning. Not great, not good, but it wasn't the worst.

[Reply #98 on:]

I have a fan fic series already half done, but I don't know if you guys will be interested. It's  sorta a parody of Survivor with a bunch of other TV shows.

[Reply #99 on:]

I'm starting a series of Futurama episodes modeled after the Twilight Zone, only funnier.

"The Farnsworth Files"

[Reply #100 on:]

So you finally found your password, eh Professor?   
I think you should post The Stupid Gate Futurama Nerd, I'll help you if it's fine with you.( Well duh,you are my sister.)

[Reply #101 on:]

 

Originally posted by Prof.Killbot:
I'm starting a series of Futurama episodes modeled after the Twilight Zone, only funnier.

"The Farnsworth Files"

Will it be like the Scary Door?  Because if it is, you might just want to call it "The Scary Door".  But hey it's your spin-off, and I'm interested in reading it.

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My good friend Silvertide (known SpyOrama fan artist, now retired), has done his very first Futurama fanfic.  "Untold Adventures", was a story he had done at ff.nt, but he had to take it off the site due to the way it was written.  TLZ webmaster Graham "confirm that this story is good... and funny, too."
 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/untold_adventures.shtml

So, I hope you enjoy this fanfic like I did.

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 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/scream.shtml

What did I do? If anyone from Peel rated that please tell me what was wrong. I don't see what's different from this fan fic from my others. I didn't plaigerize the story. I made it as original as I could. I mean all of my stories have blood in them. All of them! Somewhere whether it be in the beginning, middle, or end, there is always blood, there will always be blood. Please tell me what I've done. I'm in a writing withdraw cause I feel depressed about this. Tell me!!!!!!! 

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You pretty much parodied the movie.  But it isn't taken word for word exactly.  You managed to add originality to it.

I remember when I wrote, PX2: PlanetExpressmen together, I remember when (I think it was Allen, but I'm not positive) said that I just parodied the movie and ripped it .  That was my intention, but I didn't rip it off, I just merely poked fun of things I remember from the movie.  I was confused like you and I posted a thread and people had this to say.
 http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-000711/

My story is part of my fanfic, Anthology of Bender, in case you want to know.

I was also accused of stealing someone else's fanfic in this thread.
 http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-000920/

[Reply #105 on:]

how similar is the fic to the movies? What all didn't you make original?

[Reply #106 on:]

I think the story itself is pretty original. Although once or twice I did use quotes from the movie and I use 2 names from the movie. But for the names, I just used part of them. I don't know what is wrong with it unless I talk to whoever rated it. Cause I'd like to know what that person thought was wrong. I think it's pretty good. It hurts. It's suppose to be like similar to the movie, that's why it's a parody.

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similar is a paraody, too similar is a rehash. Were any of the deaths the same? How similar was the killer? How similar was the killer's costume?

[Reply #108 on:]

Deaths, They died in different ways except for one. The killer wasn't like the one in the movie, but the costume was. 

[Reply #109 on:]

Attention Spacedal11, Venus, and any other SpyOrama fan.  Get ready for SpyOrama's first miniseries.

The following is a preview.

Coming Soon to TLZ

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Get ready when the best agents of 31st Century will have to team up with two of the greatest agents of all time.

Ron: Oh my goodness.  A one-eyed woman, and she looks fine.
Leela: Don’t worry kids, I’m sure your parents will be fine...

Kim: Can you tell us where we are?
Leela: You are just outside of New New York.
Kim: New New York?  (Kim notices a calender and it reads the year.)  Ron, look at the date, we’re in the future!  (Pulls out her Kimmunicator, but it has been damaged because of the crash.)
Ron: That’s not good.
Kim: It’s broken.

Kim Possible, Ron Stoppable are about to realize they're not in Middleton, Colorado anymore.

Fry: So, who are you guys?
Kim: I’m Kim Possible and this is Ron Stoppable.
Ron: And this naked mole-rat is Rufus.
(Leela’s eyes glare and Fry just busts into laughing.)
Fry: No seriously, what are your names?
Kim: I just told you.  (Fry just starts laughing like hell.)
Fry: That's rich.  Did your parents name you or did you have to legally change them to that?
(Kim just feels annoyed, while Ron doesn’t understand why Fry’s laughing.)
Kim: Are you done?
Fry: Just a second...(Trying to hold in the laughter, but continues to laugh a bit.)...okay now I’m done.  (He snickers a bit, but is done laughing.)

Together, they'll have to save the world from a new evil team.

Drakken: Thanks to my brilliant genius I have determined that we are in Earth’s future.
Shego: Did you figure that out before or after you noticed the flying cars?
Drakken: Not now Shego, we must come up with a plan.
(Just then Ironfinger and Jinx enter through an opposite door.)
Ironfinger: Jinx, we must come up with a plan.  (They stop to notice Drakken and Shego across the room.)  Hey! Who the hell are you?  And what are you doing in my hideout?
Drakken: Your hideout?  We were here first.

Kim has saved the world before, but can she do it in the 31st Century? 

The SpyOrama/Kim Possible Crossover Crisis

Please share your thoughts.

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I swear to god, I've seen a Kim Possible/Futurama crossover before. Was that you? No I don't think so. *Reads something* Middleton, Colorado!? Say it ain't so! Scream 2 will live on!!!!!!!!

Scream 2 trailer:

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Voiceover: A FOX Corporation production,

From the 12-year-old who brought you Scream, The Fry Identity, and The Lost Fry,

Come's Spacedal11's

Scream 2...

[A phone rings and Leela answers it]

Leela: Hello?

Voice: Hello Leela!

Leela shakes her head.

Leela: What do you want?

Voice: What else? You...

[A flash goes across the screen. Shows Bender and Drew talking]

Drew: Are you saying that someone's trying to make a sequel?

Bender: If the ghost-mask fits...

Voiceover: If you thought the screaming was over,

[Shows Violet talking to camera]

Violet: Hermes and Labarbara Conrad were killed last night at a local theater...

Voiceover: You were wrong...

[Shows Fry talking to Leela]

Fry: It's not over is it?

Leela: No...it's just started...

[Screen flashes again and shows clips off some of the guys above running away and screaming]

Fry: *On a cell phone* Where are you?

Voice: You'll never find me!

Fry: Ha!

Voice: You'll never get the girl and you'll never live to see another day!

Voiceover: Someone has taken their love for sequels too far...

[Shows Ghost-face pulling Fry and Drew into a fan]

Voice: I'm still here Leela...

Leela: Leave me alone!

[Shows Leela slamming the phone down and looks up. Next clip shows Leela, Violet, Drew, and some other people screaming as the screen goes black and shows the Scream 2 logo].

Voiceover: Scream 2. This fic is not yet rated. Coming soon. 

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That Kim Possible/Futurama crossover was done by Mitch at TLZ.  It featured Kim and Ron meeting the Robot Devil and Motor Ed's Head.  I was a good fanfic, but I'm a little disappointed.  It was a crossover of two shows I like, but it didn't live up to what I had in mind.  My crossover, I plan to go all out.

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Originally posted by Spacedal11:
 And for my Scream crisis, I say to whoever rated it "fuck you!". I like how I write and you can just kiss my ass if you don't! Scream 2 will live on!!!!!!!!

*Reads something* Middleton, Colorado!?[/i] Say it ain't so!

That's rather immature. If you don't care what people think then how did you have a 'crisis' to begin with?

[Reply #113 on:]

Neat. *Clicks camera at nothing.* Venus: Because after hearing people tell me the same thing again, I gave in. And I couldn't think of a better word than crisis. So yes I know that was stupid.

[Reply #114 on:]

a cross over? Oh lord...

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That's what I'm thinking.

[Reply #116 on:]

I know that crossovers aren't that good, with the exception of the Futurama/Simpson Crossover Crisis.  This is the second attempt for me to do a crossover.  I did do the Futurama/KOTH crossover but only as a favor to a friend of mine who wanted to see Zoidberg meet Bill.

My next crossover, I'm hoping it becomes way better because I'm approaching this with full commitment as any of my other SpyOramas.  However, this story isn't officially SpyOrama 11.  Expect SpyOrama 11 in the near future.

So Spacedal11, if you say you like my previous SpyOrama, I hope you like this story.

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I've been a fic reader for a long long time, and i have never seen a good crossover. Even the Futurama/simpsons comic crossover was rather lame.

Edit: Tips for new fanfic readers. There are five fic catagories that i have learned over the years to stay away from. These are:

1. Crossovers
2. Author Insertion
3. Mary Sues
4. Songfic
5. Slash

individual opinions may vary, this is just my personal experience as based on my reading standards.

[Reply #118 on:]

What about Kryten's crossovers?  Futurama/Powerpuff Girls? Futurama/South Park.  They were pretty decent, and many people considered that they were in character.

[Reply #119 on:]

What's a Mary Sue?