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Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #160 on: 01-23-2005 04:37 »

A Mary-Sue (or Gary Stu) isn't always neccessarily an author insertion. Any character that is too perfect beyond words and can seem to do no wrong, usually being a romantic interest as well, is a Mary-Sue. It's always been my view that a perfect character isn't. Everybody has weaknesses, even the best of us. And fan-made characters should have them too.
Zed 85

Space Pope
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« Reply #161 on: 01-23-2005 05:29 »

In case anyone's interested why my re-write's taking so long is that one of my initial characters I think can safely be said is a Gary Stu.  :hmpf:
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #162 on: 01-23-2005 14:14 »

Awwwww. I hope the re-write doesn't take too much longer. I really want to read this. Your betas seem to think it's the best fic they've ever read.
Zed 85

Space Pope
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« Reply #163 on: 01-23-2005 19:38 »

Well I've nearly finished the first act, which is by far the most meaty - after that, a lot of the next two acts are getting trimmed.  :)
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #164 on: 01-23-2005 19:40 »

Just how long is this thing?
Zed 85

Space Pope
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« Reply #165 on: 01-24-2005 04:33 »

Well the initial one was 194,138 words long, or nearly 2 million, whichever you want, and also 368 A4 pages long. My betas were sort of split on the issue - most suggested trimming of some degree, some more than others. I've decided not to cut out huge chunks, just re-tell the story, which will require me re-writing it from scratch. Already I've missed out on a few parts of the story, skipping them over with brief explanations or discriptions (ones that still work of course). And then I may go add a few more lines to another scene, and it's only just gone under the word count of the original so far  :p
It'll still need to be beta'ed again, just to make sure I haven't been a complete pillock, but hopefully that stage will be completed in the next few months. And then, onto the next one, which I already started a bit of, and am very confident about already.  :)
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #166 on: 01-24-2005 10:13 »

So you mean the odds are i'm gonna finsish mine before you finish yours? oh man this is gonna be a long wait.
DrThunder88

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #167 on: 01-24-2005 23:57 »

Wait a minute...194,138 is not almost 2 million, or did I misunderstand something?
Zed 85

Space Pope
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« Reply #168 on: 01-25-2005 04:49 »

Oh yes, I forgot about Hundreds of Thousands. Simple mistake myyyes...
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #169 on: 01-27-2005 16:19 »

Spacedal11 and anyone else, part 3 of my SpyOrama/Kim Possible Crossover Crisis is now available at TLZ.  With special appearances by Scoop Chan, Lucy Liu and Jennifer Garner.
 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/crossover_crisis-3.shtml

hope you enjoy.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #170 on: 01-28-2005 02:13 »

Jennifer Garner, cool. Again Fryfan, been there read that, was really there looking for something of mine. Nicely done as always, extra points for using Jennifer Garner. And for anyone else, call me a homo anyway, I'm trying to become a hippie.

Hopefully, hopefully, by tomorrow, Teral will put up my new fan fic. And I know I said it was a drama and it wasn't gory, guess what?

I LIED!

There actually will be some violence. But I still think it'll be different fromt my previous fics. And once I'm done with this one, back to my sequels!
MKTai

Starship Captain
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« Reply #171 on: 01-28-2005 11:39 »

Episode 3 of Season A (With yet another brilliantly imaginative title...) is available on TLZ here

As for Episode 4, I can reveal it is going to be predominantly set in my home town.
DrThunder88

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #172 on: 01-29-2005 03:56 »

So, I was looking at my finished script when I realized it was more than 70 pages long (movie script format).  As soon as I figure out how to break it up into digestible chunklets I'll post it.  Aside from sucking, improper divisions were one of the major flaws of the first one.
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #173 on: 01-29-2005 17:14 »

Chapter 4 of A Past With No Future is up at FM:TLZ as of yesterday. Enjoy.
 http://futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/PastFuture4.shtml
Futurama Nerd

Professor
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« Reply #174 on: 01-29-2005 19:48 »

Yes! I was waiting for that to come out. About time Mr. White   :rolleyes:
swidzi

Bending Unit
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« Reply #175 on: 01-29-2005 20:28 »

I've read it... And I like it very much... You get the character personalities very well Mr. White... I can't wait to read the next parts... How many are you planning to write anyway??
KurtPikachu2001

Urban Legend
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« Reply #176 on: 01-30-2005 14:11 »

Currently I am working on two fanfics, "The Road to Fanzipar" and one that's a surprise!  I'm working on the surprise one first, and maybe later this year, I'll write the Fanzipar one, and Cult 55. 

All I can reveal about the surprise one is it's kind of a 'shipper-fic' between Fry and Leela! 
Gorky

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #177 on: 02-01-2005 06:35 »

First off, I'd like to thank Kif White for being such an awesome writer...part four was great!

Then, I'd like to thank him for putting my newest fic, "Single, Uptight Female", up at TLZ.

And here it is...

Hope you guys like it.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #178 on: 02-01-2005 19:06 »

Kif White: Any sign of Teral? I sent him a fic like 9 days ago and he's been gone for a while.
Teral

Helpy McHelphelp
DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #179 on: 02-01-2005 19:14 »

I've been skiing in Norway for the last 10 days, and only got back today. I'll get right back into the game but it might be a few more days before you'll see it on TLZ.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #180 on: 02-01-2005 19:16 »

Fine fine. I figured you were somewhere away from the computer. I find it ironic that both times I've complained about this that you instantly pop up. Damn timing. Anyway, glad you're back, I'll be waiting.
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #181 on: 02-05-2005 18:16 »
« Last Edit on: 02-06-2005 00:00 »

@Spacedal11 and anybody else.  Part 4 of my SpyOrama/Kim Possible Crossover Crisis is available at TLZ.
 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/crossover_crisis-4.shtml

Here's what to expect:


Hope you enjoy.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #182 on: 02-05-2005 19:49 »
« Last Edit on: 02-05-2005 19:49 »

1. Damn it is one word.

2. Nice, same as always.

3. Teral has been so kind as to post my new fic. So far, people have liked it.

 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/Stung.shtml
KurtPikachu2001

Urban Legend
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« Reply #183 on: 02-05-2005 20:07 »

Great story, fryfan!  Speaking of fanfics, I'm working on mine that's a surprise as we speak!  I'll be done with it tommorow!
DrThunder88

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #184 on: 02-06-2005 03:05 »

So, yeah...I'm in the process of posting my latest fic on PEEL.  Aside from having more spelling errors than I could shake a sizeable shaking stick at, it seems to be doing better than my first fic.

Take a gander, if you like.  I always love receiving critiques.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #185 on: 02-06-2005 03:40 »

i liked your first fic.
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #186 on: 02-06-2005 15:27 »
« Last Edit on: 02-06-2005 15:27 »

 
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Originally posted by KurtPikachu2001:
Great story, fryfan!  Speaking of fanfics, I'm working on mine that's a surprise as we speak!  I'll be done with it tommorow!

That's funny, weren't you one of the people who said you didn't like Kim Possible?  I'm really asking, because I remember a lot of people saying that here.  If that's the case than I feel I'm succeeding what I set out to do with my fanfic.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #187 on: 02-06-2005 23:12 »

Just because we hate the show that your fic is based on doesn't mean you haven't made it a good one.
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #188 on: 02-07-2005 00:06 »
« Last Edit on: 02-07-2005 00:06 »

The fact that people who don't like Kim Possible are reading my fanfic that features Kim Possible and say they like it, says something.  It may not be much, but it's something.
KurtPikachu2001

Urban Legend
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« Reply #189 on: 02-08-2005 20:19 »

I actually did like that Kim Possible crossover story.  I like any story that involves a crossover, I even like fanfics that crossover with The Simpsons!  I'm not a fan of the show, however. 

Speaking of fanfics, my surprise one 'Up the Down Potion' is up the The Leela Zone aka Futurama Madhouse.  Feel free to read it, and let me know what you think.  I'm open to comments, questions, and criticisms as well.  Hope you will like it.
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #190 on: 02-15-2005 13:15 »
« Last Edit on: 02-15-2005 13:15 »

@ Spacedal11, KurtPikachu2001 and anyone else.

You can read part 5 of my SpyOrama/Kim Possible CrossOver Crisis at TLZ.

Here's what to expect:

 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/crossover_crisis-5.shtml

hope you enjoy
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #191 on: 02-18-2005 11:58 »

Seeing as I haven't left my stupid sarcasm, I'm here to do that.

1) Why wasn't I surprised that you were going to have a Kim/Ron love affair thing?

2) Interestingly amussing as always.

Why do I always have to be the one to say something? Also, feedback please! I'd be obliged if I were to get feedback on Stung.
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #192 on: 02-18-2005 23:41 »

I like your fanfic.  It is a touchy subject though.  Fry dead and Leela thinking about erasing him from her memory.  I feel a little sad, I hope things turn out for the better in part 2.
Philp_J_Fry

Starship Captain
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« Reply #193 on: 02-18-2005 23:48 »

I read Stung a while ago when you put it on FuturamaMadhouse. It was really good. Keep up the great work and update soon.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #194 on: 02-19-2005 16:07 »

Much obliged, like I said. Fryfan, it's suppose to be depressing. Part 2 is up today, thanks to Teral.
Philp_J_Fry

Starship Captain
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« Reply #195 on: 02-19-2005 22:15 »

I read the 2nd chapter today and I thought it was even better.Poor Leela. Keep up the great work.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #196 on: 02-21-2005 22:54 »

Thanks. Really the only reason why I'm responding is so the "My Peel" thing will come on.
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #197 on: 02-26-2005 17:11 »
« Last Edit on: 02-26-2005 17:11 »

2 Spacedal11, KurtPikachu2001 and anybody else.

I have the sixth and final part of my SpyOrama/Kim Possible Crossover Crisis available at TLZ.  Secrets will be revealed.  "I must say this opens my eyes! Another case closed my dear Watson. For I was blind but now I see! The cat's out of the bag now!"  Something happens in this story that has never happened in any of my previous SpyOramas.
 

Hope you enjoy and please review.


 http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/crossover_crisis-6.shtml


Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #198 on: 02-27-2005 00:52 »

Cool! I was mentioned in the "thanks". You're welcome Fryfan.

Also, yes part 2 of "Stung" blew in a sense that I write these stories at 2 in the morning and are too tired to edit it. I'll fix it. And any recommendations except "delete this shit" I'll accept.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #199 on: 02-27-2005 02:40 »

You post without editing? Aren't you worried people will think you're a sloppy writer? I can't even tell you how many times i go back over everything i write. Plus i have betas! Why not just wait and edit it in the morning if you're too tired to do it at night?
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