At Long Last .. My First Fic Is Finished

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After mentioning this over the last few weeks, I've finally completed my first fan fic, called Destiny's Child (Nothing To Do With The Band).  Click Here to read it.
 http://www.scanartcentral.net/fanfics/met_dc_1.shtml

I'm not going to stop there, got a concept for a mirror dimension fic next, so keep your eyes PEELed for it.

PEEL has got the first site of this one, it'll be available on FSAC later on. 

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terrific first fic, paul

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I liked the references to PEEL members in the story,except where was I?I dont believe there was a KENNEDY there.I dont have to be a good guy just somewhere,someone put me in your stories!

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Love it Paul, you have worked very hard on it, Well done   

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I will tell you my meaning when I`m done reading it....but it looks good... 

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That was good.
I enjoyed to read it, I hope i can read more fanfic from you in the future
 

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I L-O-V-E it!!!!!!!!!!!  Paul, you should've started writing a long time ago!  Nevertheless, keep up the great work!

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Best play ever

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the quote is "best play ever made" -- have you even seen rushmore Kryten? 

yea i'm reading that fic now, so i'll vote later

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It was good, but I didn't like the ending..

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Yeah it was good Paul.

Hope you next one is just as good too 

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Shadow >> Yeah, the ending ended the whole Romance on the show.

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Originally posted by Mark:
Shadow >> Yeah, the ending ended the whole Romance on the show.

Explain how, personally it keeps it going, but on a different level.

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Yeah just cos your married don't mean the romance you had is dead.

I know. 

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It just gets better 

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Nice one, Paul! I really liked it, keep it up!

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Paul it's just GREAT.

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I`ve just done reading it, and came to the conclusion that is was a exiting and thrilling fan fic, great job you have done Paul!
    

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Great Job Paul on the fic

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--WARNING--WARNING--
No-holds-barred Critique

I'm not usually impressed by romantic plotlines and supernatural forces acting to influence them...this fic is no exception.  I suppose that's mostly my fault.  I can handle macabre, technical, action-packed, or even moron-funny plots, but I just can't stomach the excessively lovey-dovey, happy-ending, look-at-us-being-happy-ever-after stories.  Like I said, that's my fault.  Overall, I'd say it's very well written with no major flaws.  The humor, however, seems a bit awkward and forced, as if you were trying to justify it as a Futurama story by adding recycled moments of levity.  Very good attempt, though.  Comedy is one of the hardest things to write and write well.

Take this with a grain of salt, Paul.  I'm no literary critic or creative writing professor, so I'm in no position to claim this is an "expert" analysis.  This is just what I thought as I was reading your story.

Also, nice use 3PO.  Script format is much more difficult to write, as the character has to convey their thoughts in the dialog.  The omniscient perspective gives a lot more depth to the minds of the characters, and it works very well in a story like yours.

Keep up the fine work.

P.S.  Was the sauna scene completely gratuitous, or was there a reason beyond having Amy and Leela naked in a hot room?

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Cool fic Paul better than mine.