Run, Leela, Run

[on:]

Yup, I've decided to write a fanfic. Here's the first part...

The PlanEx crew sits at the meeting table

FARNSWORTH: Good news, everyone! The Planet Express has found a way to run into some extra money.

BENDER: Do I have to do anything?

FARNSWORTH: No...

BENDER: Damn. I had such a good excuse.

LEELA: So, what are we doing, Professor?

FARNSWORTH: Eh-wha? Oh yes, We'll be shamelessly moving some cheap crap from the Slurm company.

LEELA: Isn't that a little undignified?

FANSWORTH: Leela, Leela. The real issue here is all new "Vanilla Slurm" and "Slurm Blue". Both found to be 13% less lethal than it's predescessors.

He picks up the bottle and takes a drink from it

FARNSWORTH: See? I only ruptured one kidney.

FRY: I'm sold.

Theme song plays

OPENING SLOGAN: "From the people who Brought you Dude, Where's My Kidney?"


More to come...

[Reply #1 on:]

I like it! You managed to have about 4-5 jokes before the theme song even plays, impressive! Looking forward to the rest of the story and the clever link ups to other characters viewpoints I hope it will include. Good luck with the rest of it!

[Reply #2 on:]

I like it so far. You've managed to get a few jokes in too. I think it's going to be pretty good. And the theme song hasn't even started yet! I hope you get more done soon. 

[Reply #3 on:]

hahaah u captured their personalities in a bottle of new diet slurn with lemon!

[Reply #4 on:]

Great start, Leelaholic! I can't wait to read the rest! 


 

Originally posted by deathknight:
hahaah u captured their personalities in a bottle of new diet slurn with lemon!

DeathKnight, I've been seeing your posts all over PEEL, and all of them are either in ALL CAPS or in teh 1337 speakh!!!1

Have you read Aslate's PEEL FAQ yet? It's very imformative and will tell you all about PEELiquette. 

[Reply #5 on:]

Very good! I am not sure pimping would be the right word for a usual futurama episode! Maybe something like Shifting!
Other than that I have no other comments except for great work!