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Bending Unit
« on: 03-27-2004 18:14 »

(Zoom in on Nimbus to Zapp Brannigan modeling the new Uniform for Kif)
Zapp: (admiring himself) Hey Kif come over here! I need someone to spank me to see if these new Uniforms feel good on the Ass!
Kif: (very very unhappy) Do I have to sir!
Zapp: (a little annoyed) Come now, my green squishy boy,  otherwise I will bust you down to the lowest rank possible and instead of spanking my ass you will be wiping my ass! Now chop chop!
(Kif groans. Walks up to Zapp and spanks him. Walks away to sink to vigorously wash his hands)
Zapp: Mmmmmmmmmmmmm! That feels good! The next best thing to wearing velour is not wearing anything at all, and making it with a women, (a short pause) that is wearing velour! Kif what do you think the Democratic Order of Planets would say about a naked army!
Kif: I donít think that would be very (short pause) fun or very appropriate!
Zapp: Youíre probably right Kiff! Damn shame though! Also itís a shame that the people from Tittilick 8 arenít allowed in the Planet Earth Army!
Kif: Yes! (alarm) That will be planet express with the new uniforms!
Zapp: (aroused) Leela!
(zooms in on Zapps eyes)
This is scene two of my fanscript it does not give away much of the plot so no-one can steal it ahahahaha! Please tell me what you think

« Reply #1 on: 03-27-2004 18:52 »

Well.. You got Zapp down, although I think having Kif spank him isn't something he would do.. His way of speaking is great. You have written that well. I can't object to anything with Kif in it. Yay for j00!

« Reply #2 on: 03-27-2004 18:55 »

Use your other thread for this, please.   Two threads for one topic is frowned upon and I'm frowning now.
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