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Kryten

Space Pope
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« : 06-13-2001 21:21 »

Here's a preview of my next fanfic... tell me if it sucks or not.
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Note: Takes place a few months after “Lookin’ for Snu-snu in All the Wrong Places”. This story is NOT to be confused with Tim’s fanfic of the same name. No sirree.

(Space. On a floating platform orbiting the star Andromeda stands the group of buildings formerly known as the World Trade Center. Cut to interior. The restaurant “Windows on the Universe”. Lots of couples out tonight. We focus on one in particular… ;)

Amy: I had a wonderful time, Kif.

Kif: Well, ah…

Amy: Now, I gotta go powder my nose. Why don’t you enjoy the view?

Kif: Um, ah, okay…

(She gets up and heads toward the females’ room. Surreptitiously, she slips her celphone out of her pocket… ;)

Amy (into celphone): The bird’s in the feeder. Initiate plan Alpha.

(Outside, the Planet Express Ship hangs in space. Interior: Fry, Leela and Bender on board.)

Leela: Okay, guys, launch the torpedoes!

(The ship launches a whole bunch of torpedoes. The first batch form a giant W.)

(In the restaurant, Kif’s attention is grabbed by the sudden burst of light. He looks outside. The torpedoes are spelling out WILL YOU MARR… ;)

(Interior of the PE ship. Fry and Bender fire the last of the charges. They hi-four.)

Fry: Woo! Didja see that? I was all “boom” an’ they were all “pow” an’ everyone’s gonna be all “awww” an’…

(Leela slaps her forehead in disgust)

Bender: What?

(Back inside, Kif watches the explosions. Kif POV: we now see what they spell: WILL YOU MARRY ME KIM. At another table, a young blond woman squeals in delight.)

Kim: Oh, yes! Yes! Yes! I will marry you, Henry!

Henry: B-but it’s only our first date…

Kim: Oh, why can’t you men commit?

(Amy rejoins Kif at the table, after watching her big proposal fizzle)

Kif: Did you see that?

Amy: Yeah, uh… Kif… that was supposed to be for you.

(Kif sputters in that entertaining way of his… ;)

Amy: So… will you marry me?

(Kif faints dead away)

Amy: Is… that a yes?

(Opening credits. Caption: In Looneyvision, where insane)
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That's all I have so far. Well, what did you think, sirs?


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"Your father was right. We ate the wrong son."

[This message has been edited by Kryten (edited 06-13-2001).]
VelourFog

Space Pope
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« #1 : 06-13-2001 21:33 »

best play ever made
Zoidy_want_Balloon

Crustacean
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« #2 : 06-14-2001 03:32 »

Sounds good so far nice intro.  :)
BumbleBeeTheta

Starship Captain
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« #3 : 06-14-2001 16:10 »

Much better than Tim's version in my opinion.  But then again, what fic isn't?  I'm sorry.  I'm so cruel.  :rolleyes:
Kif

Bending Unit
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« #4 : 06-15-2001 02:51 »

That's great!!! I wish Kif didn't die at the end though.
FishyJoe

Honorary German
Urban Legend
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« #5 : 06-15-2001 08:13 »

 
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Originally posted by VelourFog:
best play ever made


Give that man the 10,000 dollars!

Where can I find this "Tim" person's version? Everyone seems to be bad-mouthing it, I want to see how bad it is for myself.
Kryten

Space Pope
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« #6 : 06-15-2001 10:25 »

Kif: Kif isn't dead, he just passed out.

Fishy: Go to TLZ. But I'm not cleaning up after your head explodes from trying to make sense of it.
Allen

Professor
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« #7 : 06-17-2001 23:39 »

Cool Intro! Keep it up.  It is much better than Tim's excuse for a fanfic. Thank your god its over!   :) Bye
iliketowankalot

Professor
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« #8 : 06-23-2001 11:49 »

Since everyone is badmouthing Tims fic I decided to read the first part of it..
I was so lame it was funny, I laughed my ass off when Leela said "Fry and I have been married for a year and we didn't have sex yet."
Seriously, what plannet is this Tim from?
Kryten

Space Pope
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« #9 : 06-23-2001 22:08 »

 
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Originally posted by iliketowankalot:
Since everyone is badmouthing Tims fic I decided to read the first part of it..
I was so lame it was funny, I laughed my ass off when Leela said "Fry and I have been married for a year and we didn't have sex yet."
Seriously, what plannet is this Tim from?

Yeah, just one of the problems I had with this 'fic. Another was that Tim had zero personality. He seemed like a "Mary Sue"-type character.
rach_the_tall

Space Pope
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« #10 : 06-24-2001 01:03 »

 
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Originally posted by iliketowankalot:
Leela said "Fry and I have been married for a year and we didn't have sex yet."
Seriously, what plannet is this Tim from?

holy christ, what an odd ball! "marry the camera then make love to it, baby"- the catholic photographer
Holly J. Fry

PISS-Leader
Starship Captain
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« #11 : 07-07-2001 14:11 »

Kryten, I love ur intro, it's good & it's sounds exactly like a Futurama episode - dont u hate when writers write in a genre they obviously know nothing about?

Also, what is 'TLZ' and how can I get to it? I want to check out Tim's fic for myself, and I'm a computer moron. I've been online for 2 days! Sorry to waste everyone's time with techy questions!
  :love:
Kryten

Space Pope
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« #12 : 07-07-2001 22:45 »

Go to  http://www.leela.com.ar . While you're there, you can check out lots of other fics, including a few by me.
Airman

Crustacean
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« #13 : 07-08-2001 10:34 »

Well that sounds good to me Kryten.  :cool:
i'll go check out that link youput in your last post.
Bob_14

Crustacean
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« #14 : 07-08-2001 10:44 »

 
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Originally posted by Airman:
Well that sounds good to me Kryten.   :cool:
i'll go check out that link youput in your last post.


you know that you won't airman. so why do you make promises like that?? j/j

  :D
Airman

Crustacean
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« #15 : 07-08-2001 10:45 »

Hey that site's pretty good.  :eek:
Airman

Crustacean
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« #16 : 07-08-2001 10:46 »

but i just did
like on the main page the colors were like pink and purple and that!
Bob_14

Crustacean
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« #17 : 07-08-2001 10:55 »

 
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Originally posted by Airman:
but i just did
like on the main page the colors were like pink and purple and that!


so you didn't lie...
interesting

Airman

Crustacean
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« #18 : 07-08-2001 11:06 »

I don't know why no one ever believe's me.
Holly J. Fry

PISS-Leader
Starship Captain
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« #19 : 07-08-2001 11:26 »

It is a great site - thanks Kryten!

I read 'Lookin' for Snu-Snu in all the Wrong Places', I like how u write. Thats a big compliment, because I hate everyone who writes better than me (read: I hate everyone) and can't usually swallow my pride & say ur good. Ur good.   :D   :D

And it's nice to know Airman keeps promises  :)
Kryten

Space Pope
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« #20 : 07-08-2001 12:35 »

 
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Originally posted by Holly J. Fry:
It is a great site - thanks Kryten!

I read 'Lookin' for Snu-Snu in all the Wrong Places', I like how u write. Thats a big compliment, because I hate everyone who writes better than me (read: I hate everyone) and can't usually swallow my pride & say ur good. Ur good.    :D    :D

And it's nice to know Airman keeps promises   :)

Yow. That sound you just heard? My head swelling to twice its size. Thanks for the kind words, fanfic writers live on 'em.
Valgarv

Delivery Boy
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« #21 : 07-10-2001 06:40 »

I like it! Yep, now you have to post more.... =)

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