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getak2003

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« on: 04-17-2003 21:15 »

yes that is right i am the one the only GHT.

i need your help. it seems there are some critics out there who do not like my work. i would like to change their minds by wrighting better. and i need YOU to do that.

i will put a stop to part six being published for the time being until i can sort some things out with you guys here, like namely their names. it seems you all raised a big stink about that, so i am laying it all on the table. what should our nearly starcrossed lovers be called anyway?

next after that is settled, i need more comedy. the love i got down, so what is left but comedy and a little content. i will tell you now that both are a bit lacking in orginality i admit. but you all can change that. tell me now what sucks, and what doesn't?

also would i have a high ranking if some group out there didn't like my work?

finally, yes i did use content from other fan fics, but i see this as usage of good ideas not displayed as well as they could have been. EX Eden known from part five i used it because it's original creators idea was not quite as good as i thought necessary, also it didn't really encompass eden as it was i added majic fruit and tame animals. also they got naked and blissfully unaware of it. i took it up a notch BAM!
does thout no agree?

plese bring up general issues you have with the stories critisism of all kinds welcome, love me, praise me, give me ten bucks, send death threaTS, burn me, insult me, whatever. it matters not. i like to talk about stuff, and maybe if it will improve my fan fics so be it i will make changes.

SOURCES: a crap load of leela zone fan fics, stargate sg1, dogma, and much more i can't really think of. you point them out if you want to.


GHT
Lee Roberts

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« Reply #1 on: 04-18-2003 12:26 »

Well lets see some of this art of yours first then we can help.
Kazzahdrane

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« Reply #2 on: 04-18-2003 18:25 »

What art?????!!!!!!

Surely the above post is about fan-fiction, that is, STORIES!! If I've misread the post then I blame my glasses...
getak2003

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« Reply #3 on: 04-18-2003 19:25 »

art? where did i say that? i do make some art, but i am refering to my fan fiction series here.

GHT
Hawk

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« Reply #4 on: 04-19-2003 04:20 »

You mean we make the stories and you get the credit?
Lee Roberts

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« Reply #5 on: 04-19-2003 05:47 »

 
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Originally posted by getak2003:
art? where did i say that? i do make some art, but i am refering to my fan fiction series here.

GHT

Sorry I read wrong, fan fiction, post one here.
Teral

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« Reply #6 on: 04-19-2003 10:48 »

 
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Originally posted by Lee Roberts:
 Sorry I read wrong, fan fiction, post one here.

You seriously want him to post a fanfic here? Imagine your average fanfic and compare it to the format of PEEL. Does any of this compute?

Just go to TLZ and look for them yourself. TLZ Fanfic Section
Lee Roberts

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« Reply #7 on: 04-19-2003 12:30 »

Oh the Going Insane series. I think it's a smart idea.
getak2003

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« Reply #8 on: 04-20-2003 23:07 »

please do you take me for a russian villiage idiot? my fan fics are like over 30 pages long!

don't give me stories, just ideas. you know, make amy a nun or farnsworth older/dead/dust/corpse/death by vaporization/horribly graphic death+bloodsparay?

i think i got a little off topic there.

Lee, do you really think it is good? thanks.

GHT
Venus

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« Reply #9 on: 04-20-2003 23:36 »
« Last Edit on: 04-20-2003 23:36 »

as far as their names go they should call each other what they have always called each other. Fry and Leela. The addition of a ring isn't going to change their preferred names. i had a boyfriend one time who tried to call me by my real first name even though he knew i went by another name. it irritated the hell out of me. i didn't let him call me by that name before we were together and i didn't let him do it while we were together. So Leela's and Fry's relationship wouldn't have any bearing on what they called each other at all as far as i can see.
Lee Roberts

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« Reply #10 on: 04-21-2003 07:36 »

 
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Originally posted by getak2003:
 
Lee, do you really think it is good? thanks.


Yeah. They are smart ideas. I've been trying to write my own series of Fan Fiction about what really happened. I've finshed volume one but It's not long
getak2003

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« Reply #11 on: 04-21-2003 08:28 »
« Last Edit on: 04-21-2003 08:28 »

 To Venus :alright already! i will have the freaken names changed. a slight hit to continualty, but it works. i hate toronga anyway, sounds a little weird, and is not a pretty as leela.

HAPPY?

Really, so lee your writitng too? cool. i ran out of fan fictions to read on TLZ, that is why i started to write.

Hope your series comes out soon. i can't wait.

GHT

Venus

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« Reply #12 on: 04-21-2003 11:54 »

 
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Originally posted by getak2003:
 To Venus :alright already! i will have the freaken names changed. a slight hit to continualty, but it works. i hate toronga anyway, sounds a little weird, and is not a pretty as leela.

HAPPY?


feeling quite content, yeah.  :D
getak2003

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« Reply #13 on: 04-21-2003 19:18 »

A DESPRATE CRY FOR IDEAS

I am writting part nine. it has to do with parallel dimensions. i need good ideas of everything or at least some of the things you have always wanted the two lovers to do, but could never write into anything because it would destroy the space and time as they know it.

i am talking crazy shit just to get me started. SPOILER!!! Amy a nun? well we can use that. everyone speaks archaicly from romeo and juliet, amy is a nun, somehow she screws farnsworht.

there it is short simple, let me do the work. i just need to get started. these are to be ideas that could never otherwise be worked into a fan fic that is based on what happened in the futurama series.

post ideas here of mail me at getak2003@hotmail.com

GHT
Nixorbo

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« Reply #14 on: 04-22-2003 00:54 »

Fry: Are there an infinite number of parallel universes?
Farnsworth: Oh no, just the one.
getak2003

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« Reply #15 on: 04-22-2003 15:49 »

not im my story you don't!

there are infinate dimensions with an infinate number of possibilities. there is just more action that way.

anyway, back to topic here, is there an idea ANYWHERE FROM ANYONE! ideas from other dimensions welcome.

]PaulFSAC[

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« Reply #16 on: 04-22-2003 16:51 »
« Last Edit on: 04-22-2003 16:51 »

Just think of ideas for yourself, some of us (me for art and avatars) are renowned for doing other things on this board, but have managed to write fics (Minds Apart Parts I and II - with Andy, Destiny's Child and No Compromises Part I - MA to be completed and so is NC when I get time), so use your OWN imagination to do fics, instead of borrowing peoples ideas and then claiming them to be your own.
Anarchist

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« Reply #17 on: 04-22-2003 16:59 »

Ok, I'll throw you a bone here.
You could do one where Fry and Leela reverse roles. Personality-wise, I mean - and completely reverse. Leela is the well-meaning but idiotic hopeless romantic, and Fry is the character who is strong, kind, caring, but soured by his past and surroundings. Would be a very amusing read.
getak2003

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« Reply #18 on: 04-22-2003 17:17 »

screw this! you people obviously have no interest in helping to shape a fan fic you otherwise would never help to make, so fine be that way.

also sorry to say anarchist, but that has already been done in another fan fic. good idea though. better luck next time if you feel like trying again.

Lee Roberts

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« Reply #19 on: 04-23-2003 17:52 »

I think that your fa fics are good and you should think of other stories to do.  :) Honest
getak2003

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« Reply #20 on: 04-23-2003 18:05 »

Other stories? like you mean real stories? i don't know, i need a good starging point to work off of, from there it is history.

Futurama always had great poential, so when i read some fan fics i deacided to make one, then i made another, and another, now i have ten fan fics on my desktop each about 30 pages long, and have no idea what to do with them other then post them on TLZ

then i hit a snag, i fell as though they are not good enough, so i keep re-reaind them trying to add in actual comedy and more action to help to nullify the ungodly amounts of shippyness i add into these things from the start.

part six i have just been procrastinating on because i have finals soon, it needs more comedy.

would you like a breif description of it? i would
be happy to give you an idea, let you all speculate a bit, then i will phave it put up on the TLZ.

what do you think? i have no problem throwing you
an apitizer of a short description before sending off my story to be posted by Gramh.

GHT
Lee Roberts

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« Reply #21 on: 04-24-2003 03:45 »

30 pages whoa! mmmmmmmm, the one I'm doning is going to be a little less but what I ment was more of that Going Insane Series!  :)
getak2003

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« Reply #22 on: 04-24-2003 06:46 »

Done and Done...

I have sent off part six to the TLZ, and it should be up in a few days. You mail Grahm if you want it faster, i think i over did that with the first five.....

read it soon, hope you like it.....


GHT
SB

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« Reply #23 on: 04-24-2003 11:30 »

 
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Originally posted by getak2003:
Other stories? like you mean real stories? i don't know, i need a good starging point to work off of, from there it is history.

Futurama always had great poential, so when i read some fan fics i deacided to make one, then i made another, and another, now i have ten fan fics on my desktop each about 30 pages long, and have no idea what to do with them other then post them on TLZ

then i hit a snag, i fell as though they are not good enough, so i keep re-reaind them trying to add in actual comedy and more action to help to nullify the ungodly amounts of shippyness i add into these things from the start.

part six i have just been procrastinating on because i have finals soon, it needs more comedy.

would you like a breif description of it? i would
be happy to give you an idea, let you all speculate a bit, then i will phave it put up on the TLZ.

what do you think? i have no problem throwing you
an apitizer of a short description before sending off my story to be posted by Gramh.

GHT

Instead of just limiting yourself to one site, others take fan fics.  The Fry Hole, CGEF, FSAC, fanfiction.net to mention a couple, I'm sure they'd welcome them as well.
getak2003

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« Reply #24 on: 04-24-2003 17:55 »

Yeah, i bet they do, but i want to put them on the TLZ first.

the reason being that they have a good rating sysem, so that way i can improve my stories more before putting them on the web somewhere else.

like i said, in my opinion, they need more comedy.
SB

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« Reply #25 on: 04-24-2003 18:07 »

 
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Originally posted by getak2003:
Yeah, i bet they do, but i want to put them on the TLZ first.

the reason being that they have a good rating sysem, so that way i can improve my stories more before putting them on the web somewhere else.

like i said, in my opinion, they need more comedy.

CGEF has a rating system as well, so send them there as well, then you get double the feedback .. if not more.
getak2003

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« Reply #26 on: 04-24-2003 18:41 »

you don't say.......

perhaps i shall do that.

but first i recomend that you read what i have out now on TLZ so you can help me make them better by telling me what my weak points are.
SB

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« Reply #27 on: 04-25-2003 01:47 »
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Originally posted by getak2003:
you don't say.......

perhaps i shall do that.

but first i recomend that you read what i have out now on TLZ so you can help me make them better by telling me what my weak points are.

Go for Maximum Exposure (i.e send them everywhere) if you want the feedback you yearn for, not just rely on people visiting one site to read your work.  Book authors would get nowhere if they only relyed on their local bookstore for people to read their latest novel.


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Kif White

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« Reply #28 on: 04-25-2003 03:03 »
« Last Edit on: 04-25-2003 03:03 »

I was thinking of submitting my "Universe of Malice" fanfiction saga to CGEF and other sites when it was finished, but perhaps I should put it up piece by piece (like I am now at TLZ) at other sites too. Advice please?

- Kenneth White


getak2003

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« Reply #29 on: 04-25-2003 07:04 »

That would be a wise plan. You should finish the story before you have it all put somewhere else. it is just plain easier that way. i mean you would have to send off each new insallment to every site you have it shown on.

i have hit over 256 pages of transcripts and more to come. i think i may be going insane.
SB

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« Reply #30 on: 04-25-2003 10:20 »

 
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Originally posted by getak2003:
That would be a wise plan. You should finish the story before you have it all put somewhere else. it is just plain easier that way. i mean you would have to send off each new insallment to every site you have it shown on.

i have hit over 256 pages of transcripts and more to come. i think i may be going insane.

Maybe the best idea is complete the whole thing, and send it everywhere at once.  Seems easiest to me, as a none writer.
getak2003

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« Reply #31 on: 04-27-2003 19:39 »

well part six is up. i will stay silent and let you all talk about it.

it is at the TLZ enjoy....


GHT
getak2003

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« Reply #32 on: 04-28-2003 19:55 »

part seven up, OOORAH!!!!

hope you like  it...


GHT
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