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« #603 : 04-01-2004 00:02 »
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I will have a bit of the fanfic I'm working on here perhaps as soon as tomorrow, but definitely within the week.
And here it is... (Opening Caption: It’s a good thing.) (Exterior shot of PE building, then cut to Fry, Leela and Bender on couch. Fry and Leela are asleep, while Bender is on the edge of his seat watching All my Circuits.) Calculon: There’s something I have to tell you, Monique. The doctor says I may only have 6 months to live. Bender: I guess it’s contract renegotiation season. (Amy enters) Amy: Good news everyone! (no one reacts) Amy: I said, good news everyone! (no one reacts) (Amy walks off and grumbles something under her breath. She goes over to a closet, opens it, and is immediately buried under a pile of Farnsworth’s inventions and Zoidberg.) Zoidberg: Feh! If you think I’m paying for this hotel room, you are mistaken! (Scuttles.) (Amy digs herself out, finds the device that gives anyone Farnsworth’s voice, and returns to the others) Amy: Good news everyone! (Bender looks up, and Fry and Leela wake up, with Fry screaming.) Leela (to Fry): It’s ok, it’s ok. Just Amy playing a cruel joke on all of us. (To Amy) Shame on you! Look what you’ve done to him! Amy: Sorry, but this was important. Of course, now I’m not so sure I’ll tell you the good news. Bender: Don’t worry, I have ways of making her talk. (Opens compartment to reveal a manilla envelope with “Blackmail Pics” written on it.) Amy: I scored us tickets to the Mars-Jupiter State basketball game tonight! Leela: How? Tickets to this year’s games sold out in 2997! Fry: I’ll bet I know how she scored the tickets. (he and Bender snicker) Bender: 20 bucks says it’s not what you’re thinking. Fry: You’re on! Amy (irritated): Smeesh, I just had to fork over an exorbitant amount of money! Bender: Pay up! (Fry grumbles and fishes out a $20) Fry: Well, you should have left it up to me. I could have gotten the tickets for an orbitant amount of money. Leela: You don’t have an orbitant amount of money. Fry: Not anymore, but that’s not important. Amy: Let’s go before we get some good news from the professor. (Cut to PE ship taking off. A couple of seconds later) Farnsworth: Good news everyone! (looks around) You’ll be delivering Polish sausage and nitroglycerine to Swerski 46.
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« #609 : 04-12-2004 21:47 »
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I'm looking for fan fiction submissions for my site, and I'd appreciate it if anyone would like to email me their fanfic (zoidyzoid@hotmail.com)  Thanks!
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fryfanSpyOrama

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« #610 : 04-12-2004 23:03 »
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Originally posted by bish: i liked it so far fryfan. good work Thanks bish, though some people don't agree at ff.net "The following review has been submitted to: JX: Rise of the Jinx Revolution Chapter: 1 From: The Mystery reviewer() I'm actually very disappointed in this. Not only do you still need an editor, but once fired, the characters revert to their normal selves. There seems to be no real akwardness in job transition. Flipping burgers is a step down from being spies. Also, being partners, Fry should know much of Leela's past, yet he acts as if this is new information. Is Jinx dating Kif? Why? You've broken away from traditional Futurama. Sure, Jinx should be clumsy, Fry should be a moron, but if everything's the same, why would a rich girl help an insane robot? I'm not sure if this will help, but I'm just being honest. Lots of people may say it's great, but that doesn't mean it is. Hundreds of years ago, everybody thought the earth was flat. Boy, were they wrong. So this was ok, but it isn't your best." My response is that part two will answer some of the questions brought up in the review.
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bish

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« #614 : 04-14-2004 09:56 »
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Originally posted by fryfanSpyOrama: Thanks bish, though some people don't agree at ff.net
"The following review has been submitted to: JX: Rise of the Jinx Revolution Chapter: 1 From: The Mystery reviewer()
I'm actually very disappointed in this. Not only do you still need an editor, but once fired, the characters revert to their normal selves. There seems to be no real akwardness in job transition. Flipping burgers is a step down from being spies. Also, being partners, Fry should know much of Leela's past, yet he acts as if this is new information. Is Jinx dating Kif? Why? You've broken away from traditional Futurama. Sure, Jinx should be clumsy, Fry should be a moron, but if everything's the same, why would a rich girl help an insane robot? I'm not sure if this will help, but I'm just being honest. Lots of people may say it's great, but that doesn't mean it is. Hundreds of years ago, everybody thought the earth was flat. Boy, were they wrong. So this was ok, but it isn't your best."
My response is that part two will answer some of the questions brought up in the review. but from the reviews of most stuff, he/she (mystery reviewer) doesn't seem to like much of anything, so dont let it bring you down.
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« #620 : 04-17-2004 15:08 »
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Originally posted by tom123: What do you usually do when you are finished? Do you start an entirely new topic for it or what? Many people do start their own topic for consturctive criticism, and most people don't seem to have a problem with that; That is unless you spam up the boards with like 30 fanfics, each with their own topic. Once the final version of your fic is done, you can submit them to a Futurama fan site like CGEF or TLZ , or a fan-fiction network (which is my personal preference) like fanfiction.net.Addtionally, if you want more constuctive criticism for your fanfic, check out The Groening Fanworks Central forums.
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Dr. Morberg

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« #630 : 04-19-2004 18:30 »
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It's for ideas not to be used? Oops. I posted the very beginning of a fanfic I will probably finish there. I might send it to The Leela Zone if people like it. Here is the page. It's near the bottom.
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