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TachyonWhat a compliment! I always thought that I portray the emotions not good enough ... thank you Beanoz4MadisonThank you guys T_T So cool to hear it =3 El-ManYes, it's true. But the example does not save her from the attacks of the "normal" children. They will still taunt Julie. Perhaps after the tears she will talk to Leea and calm down for a while  Last weeks were difficult for me. Exams + problem with the art thieves = I can not draw. But now everything is back to normal Adult Alice in the rain By missfuturamaSketch Robot Sisters: Serena, Silvia and Sisi By missfuturama
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Inquisitor Hein
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Okay, the colour is great as usual.
A piece of constructive criticism will follow (as I tend to get rather detailed, it might look as if I have more to complain than to praise about the picture. Which is not the case...)
Maybe you might consider adding Alice's legs: From the waist down, the character does fade, but the background stays the same.
- With character and background both fading, the image goes for a painting style. - With character and backgound staying the same (means: Alice legs can be seen completeley to the pictures lower rim), it goes more for a screenshot/comic image style.
Right now, the character goes one way, and the background another one. With BOTH fading, or BOTH staying, the pic as a whole goes the same direction (Damned...I do not really know how to put it otherwise. Hope you understood where I'm coming from....)
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TheMadCapper

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I thought she was just walking through some exceptionally thick smoke or fog, Hein.
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Inquisitor HeinConstructive critique is always welcome =) I understand the essence (but not all 100%  ) of your observations, but I must say that this drawing was a very quick sketch. Without a plot and without much effort. So I do not bother myself with the background or feet. TheMadCapperTrue =) UnrealLegendThank you Professor Zoidy  sexy fembots will become more sexy when I paint them  My friend gave me an idea associated with my last picture (Alice in tattered uniforms). Now I draw a short comic based on it  In Russian I made a translation, but I'm not sure whether it makes sense or is it just a bunch of words   By missfuturama* Planet Storm * Alice: Not very windy... Samantha: Don't be afraid Alice! I'll save you if need be Х) Alice: Oh, Shut Up Samantha! We first time received real papier-mache weapons. Samantha: I think it wont be useful to you. Freshmen do not send on dangerous missions. The maximum that we get here - catching wind shrimps.  By missfuturamaCommander: Attention Freshmens! Does everyone know our dangerous mission? Freshmen: No Commander: Excellent Commander: You two! Inspect the planet! Others come with me. Alice: Umm .. can you tell us what we should be looking for? Commander: No. A good space policeman do not need to know who the culprit is to solve the crime. Sometimes the crime itself does not necessary.  By missfuturamaAlice: a storm is coming ... Samantha: I told you! I said how it will be! I specifically checked the planet with sensors when we were still on board - there is no life on this planet!! Let's go back until we got into a storm. Alice: You think they would believe that we have Inspect/searched (I do not know which word is correct ХD) the entire planet in 20 minutes? Maybe it some sort of test? I do not want to fail our first mission. Alice: No, it's useless. There is nothing special about this planet. The stones are made of stone, trees made of wood, the animals are made of cheese. Regular boring planet. Samantha: I already know it. Let's think about how to get out of this thicket. Alice: What do you mean "how do we get out?" I thought a bag of bread crumbs with you! Samantha: I was hungry..
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Beanoz4

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I like the last page  . The translation is alright a few words are wrong, the first part is the worse, I had to read 3 times before I understood what it meant.
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Tachyon

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hahaha on the last panel, Miss Futurama  I presume the windy shrimp is a reference to the creatures of the same name on Vergon 6? Love your comic style. How long on average did it take you to draw one of the panels?
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MissFuturama

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Beanoz4Thank you  I know the page 1 is the most distinguished. TachyonI presume the windy shrimp is a reference to the creatures of the same name on Vergon 6? Yes! =) How long on average did it take you to draw one of the panels? I do not know ... Around 20 minutes =) Planet Storm p4 By missfuturamaSamantha: But ... But they will find us, right? Alice: No. Interplanetary Act "about idiots lost in the uncharted planets" give them the right to leave us here. Samantha: We will die of hunger! Samantha: what kind of cheese animals are made of? (there is something wrong with this line  ) Alice: Holland cheese. Samantha: We will die of hunger! Alice: Relax, Sam. Took out your papier-mache blaster and we'll go into the forest. Let me remind you that we have to find something on this planet.
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MissFuturama

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Zed 85Thank you so much! Planet Storm page 5 Alice: Okay, I admit it was not a best idea, But at least It was funny! Samantha: Funny as hell. Samantha: Listen, Alice. Can you deliver me from the new brilliant ideas and just let me die in that cave? Alice: Do you think they might be there? Planet Storm page 6 Let the drama begin!   Alice: Cover me Samantha: Shoot! Samantha: Shoot! Little girl: Hi, I'm Cindy, and who are you? I randomly added a bit of color 
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MissFuturama

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Alice: I do not understand .. Alice: Cindy ... How did you get here? Where are your parents? Where are you from? Who are you? And why are you ..? Little girl: I like your ponytail. Samantha: Alice, what's the problem? Why do not you shoot the girl? Alice: Sam, I'm scared. This girl is an exact copy of me in childhood. It even has my childish clothes... 
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TheMadCapper

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Will you (or anyone else) ever translate your Futurama stories into English for us to read, MissFuturama? Your art is very nice to look at, but I wish we could enjoy the stories too!
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Actually now that I look, a few of the most recent updates ARE in fact a storyline. Very nice!
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TheMadCapperI can't do it myself. And I don't have someone to ask =( Zed 85Thanks a lot, but I think my comics is too stupid to be translated to normal English  And I created another video! Hooray!  It is great because it contains my drawings, song Walking on Sunshine and HD quality! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xXNBPhZ5U4I&hd=1
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« Reply #107 on: 06-26-2012 20:09 »
« Last Edit on: 06-27-2012 02:09 »
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OMG, OMG, OMG... It's perfect! Thank you SO much, MissFuturama! <hugs>  I will be contacting the avatar czar immediately, for assistance in turning this into my PEEL avy. * Tachy has a HUGE beaming smile right now, and will be walking around the office all day today with his feet several inches off the floor... [edit] As you can see, Whale Biologist is currently quite happy, living inside Robot One-X 
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MissFuturama

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Farnsworth38 Beanoz4 tyraniak Zed 85Thank you very-very much ^.^ Last week I was focused on my fanfics and dont drew much. Only did a few sketches. Alice and Lucy are fighting for REAL Planet Express ship (last time when TLF drew them they were fighting for the toy)  Sketch illustration for my fanfic "Stranger in New New York" Alice meets Lulabelle, Bender's bride.  And another illustration for "Stranger in New New York" 
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Tachyon

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Lovely, lovely work, MissFuturama. And it's always a treat to see the sketchwork.
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