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MissFuturama

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« #247 : 10-10-2012 20:15 »
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Little help please?  Looking for correct English again. Leela: It's weird. Alice is so quiet since you're both returned from Bender ... Fry: Yeah, quiet indeed...  Uploaded with ImageShack.us
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laurenSmiles1

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« #249 : 10-10-2012 20:49 »
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Little help please? 
Looking for correct English again.
Leela: It's weird. Alice is so quiet since you're both returned from Bender ... Fry: Yeah, quiet indeed...
You're = You've Is = Has been (I think) Bender = Bender's So the sentence will sound like this: Leela: It's weird. Alice has been so quiet since you've both returned from Bender's ... BTW, I nearly failed English in high school, so perhaps someone with a better English education might like to comment.
Same here.
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HIGHasFRY

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« #255 : 10-15-2012 04:09 »
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Well at least Bender gave up drinking and smoking... Wait how can he eat ice-cream? Wouldn't it melt and then short fuse him?
He turns food into burn able chemical energy... BTW still doing great work. The Zapp and Alice comic made my stomach drop. But come to think of it if the show ever does include fry and leela having a kid I find this likely to happen. I think it would be too tempting for the writers to not have the turunga affairs to go full circle and create a Mrs. Robinson affair referance. Also one last note, have you ever thought of doing a full length story or comic, rather than these flash fiction pieces? Just wondering because I think you could really nail it if you try your hand at it. Keep up the fantastic work.
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MissFuturama

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« #259 : 10-20-2012 15:59 »
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HIGHasFRYAlso one last note, have you ever thought of doing a full length story or comic, rather than these flash fiction pieces? I tried. And failed  Comic impossible without words, and I cant write in English. SofHello Sof! And thank you =) winna tyraniakThanks =) Zim's New Robot SlaveFuturama and Invader Zim crossover Romantic Evening for TwoLeela wanted a bit of romance, and waited for Mr. Fry join her when he put Alice to bed, but it all went wrong  Fry allowed his daughter to watch a late night shows with him .. Because he's a good daddy  Poor Leela ... 
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MissFuturama

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« #269 : 10-20-2012 20:39 »
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Solid Gold BenderWords cannot even compensate for how I feel about your words! Thank you  It means a lot to me. Zed 85Sorry! I did not want to make you feel like a durak. Light and shadow is really not right, all true. Anyone is free to express their opinions and to give criticism 
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MissFuturama

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« #273 : 10-22-2012 13:50 »
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Tachyon scififryHee-hee  thanks  It does not look as good as I would like to. I wanted a large, detailed art with great light and great prospects. And since no one wants to draw it for me, I tried to do it myself. And I failed.  Alice aiming somewhere above Bender  lol I am not happy with this piece. Perspective, light and stuff  except textures. textures look good 
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Inquisitor Hein
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« #274 : 10-22-2012 17:14 »
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I like it anyway, the textures on Bender looke great  Perspective looks mostly all right for me. Just the pillar/tentacle/robot arm/whatever to Alice's left seems to be leaning the wrong direction. If you used several layers, you might just mirror that thing, or straighten it a little. That will probably do the trick. I wanted a large, detailed art with great light and great prospects. And since no one wants to draw it for me, I tried to do it myself.
Who says no one wants to draw something for you? Should you ever need a detailed background, I could draw it for you. Of course, I would expect you to colour it accordingly...every detail 
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