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Tzlk
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sure why not? it could be funny.... but if its not natural dont force it
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Erdrik
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k, I thought I'd draw up a pic of the Tall Dark Leathery creature that's gonna beat up on Zapp, and save the.. !oop too much info! so here it is: ooo scary!
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Tzlk
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HELL YEA BUMBLE BEE!! Keep up the good work im looking forward to its "release"!
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BumbleBeeTheta
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Lookie here! I wrote more on IDoL! Scene: Back at the apartment.
(Leela and Fry come in the door. Leela’s carrying two huge bags from Frederick’s of New New York. Fry’s got a plastic bag filled to the brim with Chinese food from Ming Na’s House of Chow and High-Budget Animated Films.)
Leela: (teasing) I think I’ll go put these incredibly revealing pieces of lingerie away in my bedroom.
Fry: Great. Why don’t you put one on while you’re at it?
Leela: I think I will.
(She winks, rather blinks, at him before walking into her room. Fry goes into the kitchen and begins setting out the Chinese food. A moment later Leela strolls in, wearing a magenta corset.)
Fry: What a nice outfit.
Leela: Thanks. I thought you’d like it.
Fry: Chow mein?
Leela: Sure.
(He passes the box to her and intentionally spills it all over her.)
Fry: Oops. How clumsy of me. Now let’s get you out of those filthy clothes.
Leela: Uh, I think I can handle it.
(She goes into her room and emerges a while later in her normal attire.)
Fry: Want some Brain slug-fried rice?
Leela: In a minute. I think I’ll have a fortune cookie first.
(She grabs a cookie out of a small paper bag and breaks it in half. She pulls the fortune out and reads it to herself.)
Leela: (quietly) You will be asked a life-altering question.
Fry: So, did you get a good one?
Leela: Oh, you know, just the same old stuff you always get.
Fry: Yeah. Same here.
(He shows her his fortune, which reads, “Ed McMann says you may already be a winner.”)
Fry: Lemme see what the last one says.
(He picks it out and tries to crack it, but struggles with it.)
Leela: Here. (Places it in front of her and does a karate chop) Hi-ya! (grabs it) Here you go.
Fry: Thanks. (Reading) You reunite with a long-lost relative…Hm. Maybe it means the Professor. It must be months since we last saw him.
Leela: We were just at work Thursday.
Fry: Man, time does fly.
Now, gimme feedback! Please...
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Tzlk
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Go bee go bee go bee!!! wow im tired now... Looks good though!
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Erdrik
Professor
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« Reply #179 on: 04-23-2002 09:13 »
« Last Edit on: 04-23-2002 09:13 »
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hee hee hee From 'The Juicy Details' AMY: Anyway,… So lets get started. I axed Fry, but I doubt his info is accurate. He says that ‘You fell madly in love with him when he heroically beat down a horde of Evil Demonic Space Clowns’. I’m assuming that’s not how it happened?
LOL HA HA! lol heh heh heh *wipes tear from eye.* mmm... Welp back to work ...
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Erdrik
Professor
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« Reply #180 on: 04-23-2002 15:44 »
« Last Edit on: 04-23-2002 15:44 »
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I sent Chptr1 of my latest Fic 'The Juicy Details' to CGEF, FSAC, and TLZ Also I uploaded it to PE Watch for them! Call me Erdrik
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Tzlk
Professor
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im gonna read them as soon as they get posted! looking forward man!
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Erdrik
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Originally posted by TheVoices: _________ fry walks off in a sulk gullable idiot, he'll fall for anything thinks Leela as she walks off the other way _________ because i'm nice i've decided to leave this part of the fic, and i'm not going to be taking it off this time
I missed this before! What is this suppose to mean? Either she is reverting back to her denial mode, or is genuinly pulling Fry's Chain?! If she is genuinly pulling Fry's Chain ... since when is she that mean?
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Erdrik
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HELP! I need a list of meals that can be served at Elzar's! I have Fry ordering: ‘Red Cherry Rose’Corpse of a Red Bonal Sloth. Sautéed in onion and Spice Weasle, BAM! With a side of Melotion antennae. (Crack on the MelonPool Online Comic ) Price: $ 1,000.01 What should Leela order? oh on a side note I posted a link to a new Fan Art by yours truly, check it, and post feed back
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Tzlk
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« Reply #190 on: 04-25-2002 14:39 »
« Last Edit on: 04-25-2002 14:39 »
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OOOOOO Bumblebee!! Im off to read..... be back soon!! Edit- Sweet fic Bee, I really enjoyed it!! but dammnit! FINISH FINISH FINISH FINISH Great Job, it was witty and funny like all your fics are I cant wait for the next part.
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Erdrik
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« Reply #193 on: 05-01-2002 01:27 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2002 01:27 »
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Ok I got Part2 half way done! But I got a part open for some Zoidberg Humor At DOOP headquarters at a Buffet hosted By the Wongs. Ive got a funny part but I need more ideas Also I have Zapp, giving a long winded pompusly arrogant speech about how he 'saved' Amy from the Martian Natives In Buggalo. This bit is funnier so far but I still need some ideas to beef it up a bit I need to beef those areas up becuase after that the mood gets realy realy serious and jokes get spread out abit.... Oh just so you know: you got 2 more flash backs coming
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Erdrik
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« Reply #194 on: 05-01-2002 13:40 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2002 13:40 »
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I just got an idea for another what if question for Fry(I need to think of some for Amy ) Question: FRY: What would life be like if Leela loved me? And the machine would show they're regular life. No weird changes. Think about it ^_^ that would mean that Leela already Loves Fry(DOI!) but now Fry knows it! hee hee This would obviously not be apart of my other two fics /EDIT I just emailed Chptr2 of The Juicy Details to CGEF TLZ and FSAC. I also sent it to PE, and FF.net Watch for it
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BumbleBeeTheta
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« Reply #195 on: 05-01-2002 19:01 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2002 19:01 »
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Shmeesh, Erdrik. When did you come up with that what-if for Fry? It's kinda funny, but I've been tenatively partially-writing a What If series for the past two months and that's REALLY close to what I had as his question. Great minds think alike, I guess. 'Cept I don't think yours was gonna spin into a "Leave It to Beaver" parody... Here's my current list of questions... Leela: "What if I met my parents at an earlier age?" Fry: "What if Leela went out with me?" Bender: "What if I actually had empathy without the use of a chip?" Amy: "What if I was the human race's only hope for survival?" Part of Leela's is at my site but a plot point's missing, Fry's is basically "Leave it to Beaver" with flying cards ("Where's that laugh track coming from?" and Bender's and Amy's are parodies of "A.I." and "Barbarella" respectively.
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Erdrik
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Originally posted by BumbleBeeTheta: Shmeesh, Erdrik. When did you come up with that what-if for Fry?
Just today actualy. But my Fry question is actualy different. yours is what if they were dating. mine is what if Leela loved him. In the Machine it will show there normal life. ... Damn this is harder to explain than I thought... *kracks nuckles for long explination* Ok, Ill have it like this: Ill write out the begining of the day before the questions are asked. And Fry will go last. The first two questions will basicly show the same morning over again only change to incorperate the question. But when Fry asks his question The machine will show the morning just as it actualy happened. like: After the simulation: __ FRY: What a rip! It just showed what happened this morning! It must be broken! The Professor examins the What If machine. PROFF: Nope. Its in perfect working order. FRY: Then why did Leela act like normal? ... __ This will lead Fry to beleive that Leela already loves him.(Which I think she does )
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Erdrik
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AH, yes Hot chocolate, and fuzzy-.. Kittens?!? what have you been eating?! spit that out now!! Kittys are for petting not eating!
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