Fan Fiction help...

[Reply #120 on:]

Yeah, it's kind of weird and kinky.  But I like it.   
As for the Romeo and Juliet thing, that's a plot point I haven't added in yet.  It's not been explained yet, but it will.  I got the idea from my friend Jamie.      Hopefully, it'll make a least a little sense.

::Bumblebee does a TOTPD that resembles Cameron Diaz's in "Charlie's Angels". ::

[Reply #121 on:]

 

Originally posted by BumbleBeeTheta:
You're doing a What if fic?  So am I!
And what's freakier, the first question's kinda like that.  Weird huh?  'Cept in mine, she meets her parents when she's in high school and there's a LOT of confusion. You can read the preview at my website...
Okay, shameless, promotion there.   

wouldn't it help if you posted the address of this website? you may think i know everything but sometimes i don't 

[Reply #122 on:]

Check her profile.

[Reply #123 on:]

Just a reminder that Mind's Apart Part 2 is in writing as well as a new solo fic by me called Mission : Invisible.

[Reply #124 on:]

hmmm... I think ill make me a custom Avy and Sig... Ill have to wait 'till I get home, tho I already know what they're going to be...

heh heh...  mmmmm /me zones out, imagining the glory.

/EDIT

Actualy I can give you a peek at what the Avy's gonna be 
 

Originally posted by ShineyMetal@$$:
ASS SHOT!
 

Good one, erdrik.

Im going to color it in and the ass shot will be my Avy 

[Reply #125 on:]

looks nice, heh heh

edit: then we can call you ass!   

[Reply #126 on:]

so long as the ladies call me 'nice ass'  lol

[Reply #127 on:]

i reckon it's gonna be the guys saying that, as it's Leela's ass

[Reply #128 on:]

  yer ruinin' mah fun ... 

[Reply #129 on:]

 

Originally posted by BumbleBeeTheta:
You're doing a What if fic?  So am I!
And what's freakier, the first question's kinda like that.  Weird huh?  'Cept in mine, she meets her parents when she's in high school and there's a LOT of confusion. You can read the preview at my website...
Okay, shameless, promotion there.   

You Have a web site BBT?

WHY WAS I NOT INFORMED OF THIS EARLIER!!

 

[Reply #130 on:]

If anybaody cares, I posted part 3 of "Amy's Wedding".

[Reply #131 on:]

where at?! I don't think Ive seen part 2 yet

[Reply #132 on:]

It's on ff.net. They've finally managed to spell Futurama right, by the way...

[Reply #133 on:]

Hee hee yay! part 2 looks good I'm reading 3 now   

/EDIT AAAAH! damn you!    where is part 4 gimmie gimmie gimmie!!!!!

.... Please? 

  good fic 

[Reply #134 on:]

So... you're saying it didn't suck? 

[Reply #135 on:]

 

Originally posted by Kryten:
So... you're saying it didn't suck?   

Where would you get that idea?!
It was good. 

[Reply #136 on:]

 

Originally posted by Astro Zombie:
You Have a web site BBT?

WHY WAS I NOT INFORMED OF THIS EARLIER!!

Didn't you get the memo? 

And Kryten, people do care that you posted Part Three.  I just read it at ff.net and I think it was awesome.  Awesome to the max.     The jokes were just as good if not better than the first two chapters.  It was well worth the wait.

[Reply #137 on:]

Hey Paul is Minds apart 2 gonna be the last part of that series or are there gonna be more?  Im gonna read no matter what, but im just curious as  to the number of parts your thinking about having?  ( If you havent read this Fic you should Its REALLY GREAT)

[Reply #138 on:]

 

Originally posted by Tzlk:
Hey Paul is Minds apart 2 gonna be the last part of that series or are there gonna be more?  Im gonna read no matter what, but im just curious as  to the number of parts your thinking about having?  ( If you havent read this Fic you should Its REALLY GREAT)

It's only planned for two parts due to the Real World workloads of me and Andy.

I may sometime in the future do a follow up, and then again may not.   Also Comic #8 is doing a body swap issue, with Fry and the Prof swapping, should be interesting.

[Reply #139 on:]

Mmkay?.. Ive worked out how 'The Juicy Details'
will play out   

It'll have 3 parts:
1) Amy gets Leela to gossip about Fry. Which gives Amy an idea to get back at Zapp, and thus invites the crew to the Cerimony in DOOP's honor for 'Zapp saving the Buggalo'

2)Bender cancells Fry's plans, to go off and have fun on his own. Which leads Fry to wander NNY on his own. He sees movement down a dark alley, and goes to check it out... something grabs him and drags him away! Bum, BUm, BUuUuUmmmm!

3)The DOOP Cerimony. Its been 3 days, and neither Fry, nor Bender have been seen. Leela is a bit worried, but the crew reassures her that they're probly just being there good ol' selves, and having fun.
Leela relents, and turns to Amy complaining that Fry is messing up 'the plan'.
the Wongs are presenting the award to Zapp when suddenly a tall leathery black creature leaps out of a closet, charges Zapp, and knockes him out! Bum, Bum, BUuUuUuMMmmmm!

This creature is from a Novel/Story I was writing. I stopped writing it because its on a Jazz Disk and I can't get my hands on a Jazz Drive!    eh. anyways, what do ya t'ink?     

[Reply #140 on:]

    :BBT stands with her mouth open:

After regaining the ability to speak...
Yay!  It sounds awesome!  I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

[Reply #141 on:]

Hee Hee I like this bit ^_^

   

Soon, down in the sewers.
He walks up to Leela’s parents house, and knocks on the door. There is a sound of movement
and the door opens. Leela’s Mother stands in the doorway.

FRY: (Nervous) umm, Hi. I..

MOTHER: Oh I know you. Hey Morris! Its that nice young man from the surface!

MORRIS: What, that Nixon fellow?

MOTHER: No, no. The one that works with Turanga.

MORRIS: Oh, the short flabby one.

MOTHER: Yeah, that’s the one.

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Call me Erdrik
--hvErdrik
-[DRK]Erdrik
-Erdrik

[Reply #142 on:]

Yea Erdrik im Def looking forward to reading that fic, it sounds really cool! You have peaked my interest!

[Reply #143 on:]

As well as doing my art and Minds Apart Part 2, I'm also writing my second solo fic - Mission : Invisible, so keep eyes PEELed for it sometime in the near/far future.

[Reply #144 on:]

very cool Paul...Im looking forward to those as well!! 

[Reply #145 on:]

Hee Hee I'm just full of ideas today   

This will be in a third, yet to be fully thought out fanfic:
 

PE Hanger. Leela, Fry, and Amy stand next to the PE ship. Leela and Fry are arguing, whilst Amy watches.

FRY: No way! I’m deciding where we’re going tonight!

LEELA: No! You’ll just pick some stupid place that only you like!

FRY: I will not!

LEELA: Yes you will! I know how you think! I’m deciding!

FRY: (Thoughtfully) Hmmm… Wrestle ya for it.

Amy, and Leela get a surprised look on there face. Leela slowly smiles mischievously.

LEELA: Sure, ok. If I win I’ll decide, and If you win you decide.

FRY: Now Leela, If yer… wait did you just say yes?!

LEELA: Yep.

FRY: Reminds me of our first date…

Leela positions herself ready to pounce.

Fry: Wha, wait! I didn’t think you’d actually agree to it!

LEELA: Yeah, well I did. So you best get ready for a poundin’ cause her I come!

With that Leela charges Fry, who promptly turns and runs out of the hanger.
Leela gives chase following him out of the hanger. Amy sits down on a crate and watches them go.

AMY: (Thinking) I wonder if I could do that with Kif…

In the Kitchen. Bender has just finished mixing a drink when Fry bursts into the room.

BENDER: Hey, Meatbag.

Fry looks around the room desperately searching for a place to hide. But before he can find
one Leela leaps into the room and tackles him. Leela wrestles him onto his back but before
she can pin him he wriggles free and runs out of the room. Leela stands and gives chase,
a happy smile on her face. She is actually enjoying the chase now.

LEELA: Come back here, you!

BENDER: Pff. Idiots.

Fry runs into the TV room, and looks around. Spying the door he quickly moves toward it,
but is again too late as Leela charges in and slams into him. This time he turns and grabs her
arms trying to push her back. They push and pull at each other, each trying to gain an advantage.
Of course, Fry’s struggles doesn’t last long as Leela wrestles her arms out of his grasp.
She quickly darts in close, wraps her arms around his waist and lifts him up off his feet.
She then moves to body slam him down onto the couch, but she slips and they both fall onto it
knocking the couch over. Entangled together over the back end of the couch and floor,
Leela continues her attack.

LEELA: (Laughing) Ha! I got you now!

FRY: AAH!

Fry crawls away trying to climb back over the couch, but Leela grabs him by his pants
and turns him around, she stands pulling him up with her. But on the way up Fry slips,
and falls back down onto the front of the up-turned couch. As he falls he pulls Leela
with him and her momentum knocks them both back over in front of the couch and onto
the floor. Fry lands on his ass and rolls back pulling Leela over him, causing Leela to
tumble ahead of him and roll onto her back. Fry, tumbles after from the momentum and
lands sitting on Leela’s hips. He slumps down exhausted, and places his hands on her
shoulders. (ie: ‘The Lion King’ 
Leela’s eye widens in shock. Bender walks in, looks down at them and then the couch.

BENDER: Dammit! How many time do I have to tell you kids?!
No rough housing when I’m watching “All my Circuits”!

LEELA: What the hell!??

FRY: huh?

LEELA: (Incredulous) You pinned me!?

FRY: I did? (Looks at His Hands) Well, what’a ya know…

Leela sighs angrily and pushes Fry off her. She stands and storms out of the room.
PE Hanger. Amy is still sitting on the crate and is now reading a magazine. Leela
storms in picks up a wrench, and walks over to the ship. Amy watches as Leela
practically rips a panel off the ship and starts working.

AMY: uhhh… somethin’ wrong?

LEELA: (Stops Working) He pinned me!

AMY: Pu’ah?! How’d he do that!?

LEELA: I dunno! Stupid lucky, cute assed bastard.

AMY: Well maybe he has something nice planned.

LEELA: Yeah right. Fry couldn’t plan his way out of a paper bag!
He probably has a room at some stupid sleazy hotel reserved…

Meanwhile, in the TV room.
Bender and Fry, sit on the couch watching TV. Fry looks a little worn from his tussle
with Leela.

BENDER: So what was all that about?

FRY: Leela doesn’t think I can think up a good place for us to go tonight.

BENDER: Sounds like a reasonable conclusion.

FRY: Well, yeah normaly, but tonight I got her something nice.

Fry pulls his hand out of his pocket revealing to tickets. He shows them to Bender.

BENDER: Two tickets to the Blernsball game? So what. Big deal.

FRY: Except there ‘Space Box Seats’! I’ve been saving up for months!!

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Call me Erdrik
--hvErdrik
-[DRK]Erdrik
-Erdrik

[Reply #146 on:]

Damn Erdrik, that sounds cool definantly gonna read that, only question I have is why is Leela so angry about being pinned.  I get the feeling that she is actually quite mad about losing.  Are you suggesting that shes upset because fry beat her or because she doesnt get to choose the place for the date, or both?  I think its important to make a distinction.

[Reply #147 on:]

Both, tho mostly that she doesn't get to decide.

[Reply #148 on:]

Sounds even more awesome, Erdrik.  I can't wait to read it...  Now, if I could just finish IDoL...

[Reply #149 on:]

Yes come on Bumblebee!! work work work!! just kidding..Take your time!!

[Reply #150 on:]

Yes come on Bumblebee!!
DittO!
I'm with ya!!
Kee-p 'er movin'!
Burn some rubber!!
Strike that match!
umm,.. er... damn. can't think... ow brain, hurts.. nehh.. 

[Reply #151 on:]

Okay, which fic first?
Anthology of Interest III or IDoL?

[Reply #152 on:]

I vote for IDoL cause i wanan know what happends damnit!!!

[Reply #153 on:]

IDoL!!!

[Reply #154 on:]

IDoL it is then...   Watch my site for updates.

[Reply #155 on:]

:and there was much rejoycing among the masses:   

[Reply #156 on:]

LOL

[Reply #157 on:]

Erdrik, I like the idea of posting so much a fic on these threads, but can you limit the amount, as although it gives a taster of the fic, they are a little long.  Do what I and others do, just write the thing, and the surprise release it on the slavvering masses who may/may not be waiting for it.

[Reply #158 on:]

No!! DONT LISTEN TO HIS EVIL TALK OF JERKING US AROUND.... he he im just kidding.  But that is a good idea i suppose, surprises are nice.  Erdrik I think its safe to say that people generally like your writing so you dont need to advertise as much, however i still enjoy reading them on these posts... so whatever you do, youll be succsesfull!

[Reply #159 on:]

Actualy I post them here becuase of 2 reasons:
1) They give me feedback, and ideas
2) Motivates me to write becuase I said I would. And if I don't Ill get reamed a new one.    This is important becuase I can be a very lazy person at times