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coldangel
DOOP Secretary
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It's not a fanfic. It's just a couple of sentences. You and your friends are filling this forum with pointless crap. Please stop.
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TriggerHappyJim
Professor
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« Reply #2 on: 11-23-2006 08:34 »
« Last Edit on: 11-23-2006 08:34 »
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Here's what you need to do:
1. Buy two pick-up trucks. Something tough but cheap, like a couple of mid-nineties Broncos. Just make sure they have towing cables on the front.
Failing that:
1.(b) Get two friends and some rope.
2. Attach one Bronco/friend, via the cable/rope, to the beginning of your story.
3. Attach the other Bronco/friend, via the cable/rope the end of your story.
4. Start the engines/prod your friends.
5. Set the vehicles/friends in opposite motion. Stretch the damn thing. Stretch it like hell.
6. Once it has reached an acceptable length, stuff it of Content!(tm) remembering to include a Splash of wit!(tm) and a Sprinkle of imagery!(tm), all available at your local school.
Sorry to be harsh, and I realise that I know nothing about you or your age or… well, I don’t know you, put simply. I also realise that everyone has to start somewhere and I encourage him or her to do so, but this really isn’t anything. It’s a stump of a story. It’s even a stump of a chapter.
Good luck in the future, but right now you’ve got a long way to go.
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coldangel
DOOP Secretary
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Age is no excuse for being a suckfuck. I have no forgiviness for this creature.
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coldangel
DOOP Secretary
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Alright. I'll take fuckwhore then. Even swap.
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coldangel
DOOP Secretary
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Tisk. It's quite plain to see these abortions of posts are actually an intentional effort to disrupt and irritate. It's called trolling. Nobody in the developed world is really that stupid without trying to be. This is malicious and very intentional.
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coldangel
DOOP Secretary
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I never went to University, and I wrote a NOVEL! Bah! A POX on EVERYONE!!
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Writer unit32
Professor
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Originally posted by Benders_Fan: I'll say what I said in the offtopic section. It sucks! Second!If I even would start such a fic,I would make the first part long enough for the body switching to be complete!
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x-jeremy-x
Crustacean
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Originally posted by coldangel_1: It's not a fanfic. It's just a couple of sentences. QUOTE] that is because i done it at breaktime when i was at school and i didnt have much time to do it in. i am sure it will get better as it goes on though.its like a typical story they are always crap at first. (and by the way i am a girl)
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Writer unit32
Professor
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Weel,my was crap at first.And you shouldn't start a new thread for ideas for this fic.I'll give you a idea right here.Now wait before I come up with one of my wonderful story-lines that'll include time trawel,at least six parallel universes,Dark wizards,zombies,the terror from beyond,Gendalf The Grey,the Brainspawn,the real Santa,the waitress from the Hip Joint(spooky!),Xanfor & Katrina,A Bronco safe,Applied Gryogenics and a superior robot.
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x-jeremy-x
Crustacean
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is that what i should put in mine?
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Writer unit32
Professor
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« Reply #18 on: 11-23-2006 14:24 »
« Last Edit on: 11-23-2006 14:24 »
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My is a every day not too shippy fan-fic http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-001416-1/ .But the one I'm thinking on for you will be gruessom and sweet,happy asd cruel,with ship and break-ups... I know it'll have space bees,body switching and techonoly from the 30th century.And there is no happy ending for this story!MWAHHAHAHAHHAHA!
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Writer unit32
Professor
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I said I'm thinkind about a story-line for you!
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