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KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #160 on: 11-26-2006 10:17 »
« Last Edit on: 11-26-2006 10:17 »

OOoh..you're gonna make this one colored? ell, this is what I can help you with:

Todd: Shoulder length brown hair, brown eyes. Dark blue jacket, light blue jeans, belt

Lauren: Blonde hair (ponytail) , blue eyes.
Military-esque green jacket, black pants. Boots (not as tall as Leela's, but still bigger than a regular shoe. The size you had in your battle drawing was perfect)

Caleb: Dirty blonde curly, poofy hair. Hazel eyes.
Long purple coat with peace sign on right-hand pocket, white shirt inside. Green pants.

Drake: Dark Blue eyes, lab coat...erm..green body.   :D no shoes

Dreyfus: Red eyes, short-sleeve 'army' shirt, re capris  no shoes.

Artimus: Foxy- orange fur, brown eyes, black ears, white-tipped tail. Reddish, longish spiky hair coming from forhead and down back.

That's all the specifications I will give you. The rest is up to you and that big ol' imagination of yours.   ;)


coldangel

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« Reply #161 on: 11-26-2006 11:19 »
« Last Edit on: 11-26-2006 11:19 by coldangel_1 »

I underestimated my own consientiousness.



That isn't the full-sized version because photobucket shrinks them a bit.
jle1993

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« Reply #162 on: 11-26-2006 11:55 »

Woah, wicked pic! That is all I can say as words do not do fair justice to this masterpiece
coldangel

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« Reply #163 on: 11-26-2006 11:57 »

It's supposed to be the title page or something so I thought I should go all out.
jle1993

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« Reply #164 on: 11-26-2006 12:01 »

And you have done well sire *bows*  ;)
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #165 on: 11-26-2006 14:17 »

Holy. Shit.
*faints*
Words simply cannot describe the beauty of this picture...God, that is the kind of title page I would have if I published it. But that sort of thing takes a lot of luck, and money. And although we could afford it, I'd still rather do things on my own.

3 words for you man: That. Is. Fantastico!  :D
jle1993

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« Reply #166 on: 11-26-2006 14:26 »

Wait, are you publishing it? If yeah then tell me when so I can buy a copy!
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #167 on: 11-26-2006 21:31 »

Sadly, I don't know if I will or not. Only time will tell.
coldangel

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« Reply #168 on: 11-26-2006 21:38 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by KitKatBar-Fry:
Holy. Shit.
*faints*
Words simply cannot describe the beauty of this picture...God, that is the kind of title page I would have if I published it. But that sort of thing takes a lot of luck, and money. And although we could afford it, I'd still rather do things on my own.

3 words for you man: That. Is. Fantastico!   :D


No worries luv.  :)
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« Reply #169 on: 11-27-2006 00:02 »

Coldangel is arguably the best artist on this board, and there's a lot of good artists on this board
coldangel

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« Reply #170 on: 11-27-2006 00:19 »
« Last Edit on: 11-27-2006 00:19 by coldangel_1 »

Quality in art is indefinable. Look at Sidney Nolan... or Rolf Harris. It is typical of me to excel in something where there is actually no real rating of worth or success... maybe because at some level I hate myself. Art is anything, and definitions as 'good' or 'bad' are merely personal impressions.

Nevertheless, your personal impression warms my heart, and I thank you for the compliment.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #171 on: 11-27-2006 06:52 »

Ah, but Tyraniak may very well be right. I mean, some of us can expand our artistic abilities to be able to make requests, but none of us can do it like you can. Do you know how many times I've tried to draw this stuff for my story and come up empty handed? That's party while I turned to you-everyone looks up to you, buddy.  :)
coldangel

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« Reply #172 on: 11-27-2006 07:03 »

Well they really shouldn't... I'm only around 160cm high... Most people look down on me.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #173 on: 11-27-2006 07:37 »

 :p you kow what I mean.
coldangel

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« Reply #174 on: 11-27-2006 07:40 »

 :p I know nothing!
jle1993

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« Reply #175 on: 11-27-2006 13:08 »

You know everything
Writer unit32

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« Reply #176 on: 11-27-2006 13:34 »

Nobody knows nothing!
Apple Tea

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« Reply #177 on: 11-27-2006 14:23 »

Cool ending!  *sigh* good to know everyone's ok
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #178 on: 11-27-2006 16:02 »

???
This is NOT the ending, dude. Far from it.  ;)
Apple Tea

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« Reply #179 on: 11-28-2006 16:32 »

Oh sorry, I thought it was cause you said "Peace it's over"
jle1993

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« Reply #180 on: 11-29-2006 15:55 »

Its NOT the ending? YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
*throws wild party with loud music*
I am SOOOOOOO happy now!  :D :D :D :D
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #181 on: 12-01-2006 18:40 »

So sorry it's been so long...been busy.  :DUpdate tomorrow, eh.
jle1993

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« Reply #182 on: 12-05-2006 16:00 »

*sings* tomorrow tomorrow, you'll update, tomorrow, its always a day awaaaaaaaay *bows*
Anywho, can't wait to see what you're gonna do next!
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #183 on: 12-05-2006 17:13 »

!!!
So, so sorry! I actually completely forgot about the update!
*blushes*
Tell you what, when I'm done eating dinner (MMM, PORK FRIED RICE!  :D ) I'll send you guys a nice long one.
Cheers!
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #184 on: 12-05-2006 19:43 »
« Last Edit on: 12-05-2006 19:43 »

Stupid, inconvenient delays!
Ah, well. One of my Aunt's birthday party. (56 and still going!)...Pretty much just sitting around at a table and...talking. But alas, here is the awaited update!

Todd watched through hazy eyes as a feathered figure ruffled beside him. The Vowl, now licking its scarred talons and preening its dirty wings, stared hard at him.

     “Captain.” It hooted. “The war is ended. We are presently on the opposite side of the Isle of Toxes and Kolves. Our enemies, at least, the ones who survived, are being held prisoner for their heinous actions. Many of us have not survived this slaughter, but those of us who have pay our dearest respects towards you. And the General.”

    The boy looked around at the animals crowding him. Although things seemed to be over, and all seemed to be well, his nose could still pick out the faint smell of burnt flesh and fur. The reek of it was tremendous, and burned the inside of his nostrils.

     “Thanks.” He replied, and tried to stand up.

The flurry of creatures around him backed up quickly, intent on doing whatever possible to keep their ally happy.  Their generosity was acknowledged by a quick nod of Todd’s head, before the teen fell back onto his ass.

Even getting up was a hassle to his bruised and battered body, so a second attempt was not requested. Instead, the Captain leaned back and sighed.

    What was the purpose of the last few days?

The explosion was really what made him angry and discontent. The terrible bomb had put an end to the fight so abruptly, completely demolishing all purpose of their struggles and hardships. He was dim-witted, but what little knowledge seeped into his mind was almost always accurate, and wise.

 But it was in the past now.

   Todd knew he had to get over it, and try to find his friends. Worrying would solve neither of those problems, so he instead looked around, trying to remember what had happened. A battle, an explosion, fire stuff, reindeer…no, owls. And Lauren.

    “LAUREN!” He exclaimed, shooting straight up. The teen had very nearly forgotten her, forgotten to see if she was alright. A faint memory of her being carried off with him filled his mind, making it difficult to concentrate on what he should do.

   “Todd?” A voice came from a few feet away. “Are you there?”

Dozens of animals stepped back to reveal the blonde sitting down almost beside him. She was wrapping a gauze bandage around her right ankle, carefully taking a moment to brush a lock of blonde, tangled hair from her eyes as she did so.

    “I saw you land on your ass,” She smirked. “and it looks as if you’re going to need some help.”

     The boy blushed at her, lost for words. True, he couldn’t get up, but it was embarrassing to know that someone else found it amusing.

    “I want to show you something.”

She rose and grabbed his hand quickly, giving him zero time to react before he was standing beside her. The boy stared at their two clasped hands for a moment, before looking up to meet her eyes.

     “Come on.” She said. “This might surprise you.”
     


Ok, ok. Not really that long, but I figured I'd cut out right as things were starting to look good. More shippy between these two-as I was writing I just couldn't resist. So cute, so cute...  :p
coldangel

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« Reply #185 on: 12-05-2006 20:42 »

So many animals...
*fires up the BBQ*
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #186 on: 12-06-2006 21:33 »

Ack, don't eat 'em!  ;)

Ouch. One reply? Must be losing it...ah, serves me right for keeping you all waiting so long anyways. My bad.

I won't update right now in the hopes that someone else may reply. But I definately will tomorrow, regardless as to who has read it.
jle1993

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« Reply #187 on: 12-07-2006 09:11 »

Not losing it, I just haven't been on. Lovely update Kitkat, I'm wait in aticipation for the big surprise thing Lauren mentioned. Also *takes massive breath*
SHIPPYSHIPPYSHIPPY!!!!!!!!
I have grown to love this ship dearly
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #188 on: 12-07-2006 17:06 »

Thank you. Yah, the ship has sailed....very corny. But I love it!

“Ummm…Ok.” He replied. Lauren would be with him, and that was enough reason in itself to go.

Still holding onto her intently, Todd began to walk towards the hilly area; the place where Trof had been plotting just a few hours before. The earth on the mounds was charred and burnt, but recognizable. And it actually looked…joyous.

   The remaining beasts had set up a sort of camp in the few hours that Todd had been passed out, which they were readily attending to.

      “Todd! Ah, Captain Todd. It seems as though you are finally awake.”

A green crocodile slithered beside the two, lab coat fluttering gently in the wind.

      “So good to see you alive and well. We have Artimus back at the spaceship, over there-”       
      He pulled their shoulders around and pointed one long finger towards a blackened
hill. “-who will all but momentarily undergo the process of reconstructing his lost body. I am afraid to state, however, that after this one last recovery, the LTM will be destroyed. The technology stored within itself could potentially become dangerous. We already saw what happened when I tried to bring back the, um…’other’ Todd. Who knows what lurks in other parallel universes? As for the dead animals leftover from the fight…”

    He paused and sniffed quietly.

     “Those that were lost have been burned down to nothing. There are no other bodies left to rebuild.”

This struck Todd like a knife to the heart. All of those animals were just, gone? With no hope of ever getting them back? The Fear he had seen go down, the one that had questioned Artimus’ rights earlier on, would never be alive again? It was almost too much to bear the pain of the losses. All he could be grateful for was that his Tox friend was alive.

      “How are the others?” The teen questioned the Frocodilian.

      “Alive.” He replied. “Dreyfus and Caleb escaped with minor burns and wounds, nothing too serious. Kit, however, was not quite so lucky. I’m afraid that what is left of our DNA transplanting machines cannot build back as much tissue as he lost. The Tox will have to live out the rest of his days as a half-machine, with a body made of metal. Strangely enough, he didn’t seem all that upset when I told him he was going to be a cyborg. It matches his eye, I guess.”

 Todd could imagine that quite clearly.

      “The other animals, the ones that survived, have all been treated already to the best extent possible. The troublemakers are also healed, but kept aside. We will consult with a higher court to reach a decision as to what their punishment shall be.”

    The teenaged boy nodded his head soundly. Not that this wasn’t particularly interesting; his mind was simply too focused on what Lauren wanted to show him to pay much attention.

    “And you said the LTM is going to be chopped up? So, no more coming back to life stuff?”

Drake sighed wearily.

    “That’s what it means.”

The scientist looked down as he breathed out, and caught a glimpse of the two sets of intertwining fingers. Immediately, he shot a startled glance at Lauren, whose expressions remained placid. She revealed no anger towards his surprise, and no hurt. Only a smile crept across her lips, a soundless motion that seemed to swell with happiness. Drake too grinned, leaving Todd very confused at what messages the two were conveying. The Biological Engineer left him no time for questioning, though.

   “Well, I’m off.” He chuckled deeply. “I can see you two wish to be left alone. Professional help is needed to revive our friend Artimus, anyways.”

He turned around quickly and headed towards a nearby camp, his scaled tail dragging noisily across the grass after him. Once he had left, the blonde turned back to her comrade.

    “Let’s go.” Was all she said.

Todd tried to read her face, sneaking glances every now and then to see what emotions were on it. But he couldn’t. Finally, unable to restrain himself any longer, he dared question.

     “Lauren?” He asked. “Lauren, pleeeeeeease tell me where we’re going.”

All she could do was shake her head.

     “Pretty please?”

     “No.”

     “What if I gave you a marshmallow?”

     “What’s a marshmallow?”

He stopped for a moment, flabbergasted. How could anyone not know what that was or how it tasted?
     “Well, it’s this big, puffy square of white stuff that tastes really good.”

She listened intently, glad that he was preoccupied enough not to ask her anymore about where they were going. As her partner had begun to plunge into full-fledged hand motions to help with the story, they had reached their destination.

     “Underneath the ship?” He breathed.

The sun shining down cast their shadows across the glinting metal, revealing a large door on the bottom of the hull.

     “Mmmhmm.” Lauren mumbled. “We don’t often come here.”

Her reply confused the teen. Why wouldn’t they go into a certain part of their very own ship? Maybe there were lions hiding in there. Yah, that had to be it. Lions on tricycles…Cool.
 Saying nothing, the woman gripped Todd’s hand tightly, and opened the door. Inside it was dim, too dim to see the lions. As she pulled him into the room, however, he could see that there were no animals inside, even in the darkness. A light was turned on, casting a glow over what truly filled the room.

     “Wow.”


Ooooh....cliffhangar. What is inside? Haha, when I was writing this I actually remember typing out Lauren wanting to show Todd something before I even knew what it was. Just made stuff up as I went along, I guess.
 :D
coldangel

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« Reply #189 on: 12-07-2006 19:50 »

Haha; marshmellows and tricycles. Very droll.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #190 on: 12-07-2006 20:21 »

Thanks. Yah, some last minute crap I decided to add in. I walked into my brother's room that day to find him watching some show (Looney Tunes, maybe?) and as I got some stuff he had stolen, and lions on tricycles happened to flash by. The result: A very stupid comment on what lurked within Todd's brain. The marshmallows were just my idea. Random and stupid enough to work, I guess.  :laff:
coldangel

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« Reply #191 on: 12-07-2006 22:29 »

It's very Fry-esque. I like it.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #192 on: 12-08-2006 16:00 »

Hehe, thankies. Yah, this dude seems to have the same brain pattern and way of thinking, or at least very similar. Using resources like that can really make things work sometimes.
jle1993

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« Reply #193 on: 12-08-2006 17:19 »

*splutters* Another Cliffy? Its almost too much to bear...but I will anyway because I LOVE this story. I won't tell you what I thought when they went under the ship, damn my imagenation
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #194 on: 12-10-2006 09:24 »

Haha! I think I get hat you mean...and I find that really funny!  :laff: But if you knew me better, you'd know I would never encourage pre-marital sex. I'm 16 and still a virgin, dammit! (Go me!)  :p

I've been taking so long because I finally got around to drawing a decent version of the ship. Here's a little excerpt from around the beginning to refresh your memories:

   Todd shoved all upset thoughts out of his mind as he saw the ship; it wasn’t like anything he had seen in movies or cartoons. No, it was much cooler than those cheesy looking UFOs he read about in the newspapers he bought from the joke shop. The craft stood at least 30 feet tall, and 50 feet long, larger than his school. Its navy blue body was shaped roughly like a cone, although the edges were much sharper, and much more deadly-looking. Two long triangular points poked out of the sides near the back of the ship, both of which were curved slightly upwards. On the top of these two points were small turrets. At that moment Todd assumed they were for shooting out lasers, but was soon told they were actually for receiving incoming transmissions. Looking to the top of the ship, the teen spotted a clear glass bubble sitting on top of the ship. He squinted, trying to see inside of the dome. When that failed, he shifted his eyes over to the sleek side of the ship. It was lined with one bright orange line that really stood out against the rest of the blue surface.





I managed to draw the:
-dome thingie
-cone-ish shape
-wings with pointed tips
-radars that kinda look like cannons.
-Earth (uncolored?) ith Isles floating around it.

I watch too much Star Trek...
coldangel

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« Reply #195 on: 12-10-2006 09:32 »

Cool ship KKB-F. I like it. And you can NEVER watch too much Star Trek.

Re virginity: I know a 23-year-old virgin, so 16's nothing.
jle1993

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« Reply #196 on: 12-10-2006 16:20 »

Brillient ship Kitkat, love the details.

Re Virginity: I'm 13 and a virgin (and I intend to stay one till I'm married, a guy should want me for my personality, not my body) but some girls in my year have already lost it, I don't know whether to be worried for them or sickened
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #197 on: 12-10-2006 18:09 »
« Last Edit on: 12-10-2006 18:09 »

Re: Virginity: Hmmm, 23? I'm thinking that would take a lot of self control to be able to hold onto it fr that long. But then, I'm gonna hang in there even longer if that's as long as it takes to find the right man. And good on ya, jle, for not straying afar. Ew, 13 and already there are sluts? It only just started to become known that some people had had sex in my first year of high school. Which is pretty much 14, 15...so not that far off. And I feel both disapointed in them and yet sorrowful.

@jle: Yowza, 13? I actually assumed you were older than me. (I've never seen a picture of you.)   :D
Shit then, jle, you're a helluva good writer for 13. Ever thought of making a novel?

Thanks for the comments too, you guys. Support support support, I always say.

But still, I've been looking around my school for someone I can sucker into drawing a 'good' version for me-more detailed, effecient, that stuff. And I know a sci-fi geek, but haven't yet asked him if he will. I can only hope.
coldangel

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« Reply #198 on: 12-10-2006 18:20 »

KKB-F, don't go getting married just so you can have sex. That's the wrong reason to get hitched.
*sigh* There must be a healthy medium between slutty immorality and prudish religious fanatacism, surely? One would have to hope.
The 23-year-old virgin I know doesn't have self-control, he's just a patheric loser.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #199 on: 12-10-2006 18:28 »

@coldangel_1: Aw, man, is that what my post sounded like? Like I wanted to get married to have sex?  :hmpf: If it did I'm gonna have to change it, because that's not what I meant at all. I just meant I'm going to prove that my love is only worthy of one person; my husband. And I will not allow any one else to use me until I find him. Hell, even if I did get hitched, if my spouce didn't want to, I would wait. But no matter what, I will not have sex until I am ready. And if I get married then my husband would have to respect that. I mean, if he didn't he's not worth it, right?

Ha, 23 and a loser. Poor guy.
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