Everything for her (Fanfic)

[Reply #480 on:]

I think one thing's certain - NO-ONE was expecting that to happen!

Wooo! my first TOTPD in a loooonngggg time 

[Reply #481 on:]

Wow, that was differant! LOL

And as much as I hate the idea of Fry dying: it worked well with the stroy. Well done!

[Reply #482 on:]

wow i am shocked........... don't get me wrong i think the whole story was amazing. i loved it. i can't wait to read more of ur writing.

[Reply #483 on:]

Why couldn't the Nibblonians kidnap Leela?
Fry's dead!I prefer Leela getting killed!
This was on of my four favourite fan-fics and you just had to end it so errrr...Whats the right word?

[Reply #484 on:]

Well, you did it. He's gone...
poor Fry, poor Leela, poor twins, poor Bender

What a way to thank the PE crew for the honey moon:
Fry& Leela: Great trip! Thanks we love you!
Fry: Suddenly, I feel suicidal-BOOM!

Anyway, great story, a bit melodramatic, but who doesn't love a little melodrama every now and then? Looking forward to a new (and hopefully lighter) fanafic from you in the future!

[Reply #485 on:]

I'm planning a new one, its called a push in the right direction, and its definatly in a lighter mood

[Reply #486 on:]

YOu killed Fry and you made Leela feel sad, the story was crappy. I have nothing to live for now.

*puts a magnum to the head*

BANG collasepes dead... eeeehhhh

Uses revive potion*

I'm just jk the story was amazing! Its just you took a whole part of leela, at least you didn't kill her... Great job overall can't wait for the rest.

          

[Reply #487 on:]

I loved that story... until you killed fry and made leela hate him (dead or not!)            Awww, it was good anyway...

[Reply #488 on:]

OKay, i have no ideas for my new story, so I'm reviving this one. I have a way for Fry to come back, if thats what people want. Or I could do Leela's life without Fry. You guys pick.

[Reply #489 on:]

yay! i dont really care which one you choose, but still, yay!

[Reply #490 on:]

I can do either one, I want you guys to pick, 

[Reply #491 on:]

umm, i want both, can you do two storys in one, (like you know that malcolm in the middle episode, [bowling], howw it has what would happen if two different things happened!)

[Reply #492 on:]

I can't, I'm crud at that sort. Heres an idea, would you like Fry to be alive?

[Reply #493 on:]

yes, but i also want to see what leela does next!

[Reply #494 on:]

I can do both I think, I think that there's a loop hole.

[Reply #495 on:]

okies, have a go, if its crap, i shall tell you

[Reply #496 on:]

Thats it, the gun!!

[Reply #497 on:]

wah..?

[Reply #498 on:]

You shall see

[Reply #499 on:]

ooh! was it just on stun! (thats my guess)

[Reply #500 on:]

Maaaaaaaaybe

[Reply #501 on:]

ans my other guess is that leela kills herself, and then they bring fry back but leela cant be...(that was just off the top of my head)

[Reply #502 on:]

That'd be cruel to myself and to everybody else

[Reply #503 on:]

true... but you did supposedly kill fry earlier

[Reply #504 on:]

And now I'm bringing him back

[Reply #505 on:]

oh...ok

[Reply #506 on:]

Yay Fry's coming back!Wooohhoo!I think Leela should want to kill herself but,Fry comes to the resque and...
Ok heres the crazy story-line I suggest(not really:
1.Fry ressurects
2.Leela tries to comit suicide
3.Fry saves
4.Zapp ressurects
5.Amnesia!
6.Big party at Amy's house
7.Doctor Flim Flam(the Miricle Cream seller) comes to party
8.Zapp comes to party
9.Fry and Leela DON'T come to party
10.Flim Flam vs. Zapp for Morgan Proctor's love
11.Morgan falls for Flim Flam
12.Flim Flam becomes the main character by takingn over Planet Express
13.Aliens Attack
14.Martian nativs kidnap Amy(again)
15.X-leutenant Kif Kroker comes to resque his wife
16.Doctor Flim FLAM and Morgan FLAM conquer Earth
17.Flexo becomes vice president
18.Bender(and Fry and Leela with him) tries to kill Flexo.
19.Whole PE crew,Kif and Zapp vs. Flim and Morgan Flam
20.Professor uses doom's day device and acsidently destrojes alkl his enemies including The Flams
THE END

[Reply #507 on:]

Soz WU32, it don't follow your story line, but heres the next update

Part fifteen

Leela slow walked back to the bridge, her heart heavy and her eye misty from held back tears. Fry dead, it just didn’t seem possible. He had been so full of life; Leela couldn’t understand why he’d done what he’d done.
“He promised he’d never leave me,” Leela murmured, “He promised,”

She entered the bridge and looked around forlornly.
“I…I have an announcement!” she called over the ruckus of activity. The noise instantly stilled.
“Your Captain, my husband, has, he has committed suicide,” she announced, bursting into a fresh set of tears. A buzz of gossiping voices erupted as Leela walked over to the Captain’s seat and sat down heavily.
“How did he do it?” one of the crew demanded.
“With a laser pistol, the same one he used to kill Branigan,” answered Leela wearily through her sobbing.
“How long ago did he do it?” another voice called out.
“I’m not sure, sometime within the last hour,”
“What did he look like?” yelled yet another voice. Leela couldn’t take it.
“What the hell do you think he looked like, he was death damn it, DEAD!” she screamed, her voice filled with anguish. The noise settled to a gentle hum of chat and Leela stared out at the stars.
“You were reaching me Fry, I wasn’t gonna burn you this time, I swear it. Why did you have to go?”

Deep in the bowels of the ship, the cold corpse of Zapp Branigan began to move. He slowly blinked to clear his vision, and lifted his aching head up slightly. Then he began to sit up, little bit by little bit, so he didn’t pass out. After he managed to sit up, he attempted to stand. Carefully getting to his feet, he leaned against the wall for support. Getting his balance, Zapp walked out of the Love-nasium and headed for the bridge.

Leela was still staring out of the window at the stars; attempting to see them the way Fry had use to.
Flashback
“It’s about why I kept trying to get you. I want you to look at the stars for me,” commanded Fry softly.
“Ok,” said Leela staring up at the sky.
“Now to someone in the future, who can fly among them, the stars look plain and boring. To someone like me, the stars are beautiful. Even though I know I might end up getting burned, I keep reaching out for them, because I want to know what its like,” explained Fry.
“I don’t understand,”
“You are my stars Leela. To some people, you look wrong or strange, but to me you’re beautiful and I can feel a deeper side. The more I reached out, the more I got burned, but I kept trying because I wanted to know what that deeper side was. Do you understand what I mean?”
“I think so,”
End Flashback

“To him the stars were beautiful, and so was I,” sobbed Leela softly. She closed her eye and thought back to all the wonderful things Fry had done for her.
“I miss you Fry,” whispered Leela as she wiped her eye. Suddenly, one of the crew members started screaming.
“IT’S BRANIGAN!”
Leela opened her eye and looked towards the direction of the screaming, and sure enough, there stood Zapp Branigan. He smirked and looked around.
“Did ya miss me?” he asked.

[Reply #508 on:]

Aww poop. The Jackass resurected.

[Reply #509 on:]

ooh! leelas sad and branigans alive! good twist!

[Reply #510 on:]

So you like?

[Reply #511 on:]

yes very muchly, (btw, that simpsons was scary because i too am allergic to nuts...)

[Reply #512 on:]

I liked it, the star wars music was  put to good use.

[Reply #513 on:]

star wars music...? oh! i get it! i think

[Reply #514 on:]

When Bart was fighting Seymour

[Reply #515 on:]

nevermind i understand now... i thought you were talking abot the fafic **realises what an idiot shes been**
(i'm halfway through my next installment of 'Changes'! woopwoop)

[Reply #516 on:]

The bit with the peanut on a stick and the prawn on a stick, and I can't wait for your next installment

[Reply #517 on:]

yh i just edited my other post because i realised, i thought you meant that i'd read it wrong, and that seymour the dog was fighting bart simpson...

[Reply #518 on:]

Nah, though its an idea...

[Reply #519 on:]

hehe, i am an idiot though