Yet Another Fanfic Plug / Feedback Request

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OK OK Everyone seems to be asking people what they think of their Fan Fiction and surprise, surprise I'm not going to be the exception.

First off I just want to know if anyone read them

And secondly were they any good   

Hmmm I suppose I better tell you which fanfics they are eh   

1 "Crash Course In Love" (My First Fic)

And

2 "Precious Memories" (My, uh, second fic)

They can be found on TLZ, LIC and FSAC, (I'm still waiting on Slimmy posting them on CGEF)

Note: Beware I'm a postman and as such I know where you all live, if you post a bad review   

[Reply #1 on:]

Firstly, your fics are immense, mate. They are absoloutley brilliant. I loved crash course in love to bits, its definetely one of my favoutire futurama fanfics.

And secondly:

 

Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Beware I'm a postman

That has got to be one of the least daunting threats i have ever been issued in my life 

[Reply #2 on:]

 

Originally posted by nasteve:
Firstly, your fics are immense, mate. They are absoloutley brilliant. I loved crash course in love to bits, its definetely one of my favoutire futurama fanfics.

And secondly:

 That has got to be one of the least daunting threats i have ever been issued in my life   

In the US, saying you're a postal worker is like walking up to someone with an axe and screaming "THE TIME OF PURIFICATION HAS ARRIVED!"

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Unfortunately I'm not a fan of much romance in Futurama, unlike many of you. I also have a short attention span. To date, I've only read 2 full FanFics. But I've started "A Crash Course in Love" and its very well written. I'm also working on one of my own.

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I agree with Chump.  It's assembled very well, and I liked it until about three-quarters of the way through.  Then it seemed to become very contrived, turning to lacy (dare I say 'trashy'?) near the end.  I find drama in fanfics to be palatable.  I find romance in fanfics to be acceptable in moderation.  The unbridled (explicit) passion (sex) of your story nearly made my hair curl.  Not that there's anything wrong with that, I suppose, I guess I'm not accustomed to that kind of content in a Futurama fanfic.

I haven't started "Precious Memories" yet.  I think I'll wait until someone else reviews it.

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I like Trashy, the sex is better, and if you think that one was explicit wait till you read my next one,

'Leela and the Large Breasted Lesbian Women of XXX-HOTORAL 5'

Where Fry has to rescue his true love Leela and battle sex mad buxum wenches with his enourmous weapon!

 

[Reply #6 on:]

Only Kidding!!, 

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And BTW DrThunder

THE TIME OF PURIFICATION HAS ARRIVED!!

:: gets out his axe

 

[Reply #8 on:]

Homeland Defense agents fear no axemen.

[Reply #9 on:]

Did I say AXE I meant TAX. The IRS always get their man, 

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Uh huh.
Sex can be good, but if you want me to be brutaly honest: It isn't funny. It has a plot and storyline and good writing, but its not funny, and Futurama is technically a comedy. It was all sentimental, and some of the only funny things were references to other episodes.

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Originally posted by Chump:
Uh huh.
Sex can be good, but if you want me to be brutaly honest: It isn't funny. It has a plot and storyline and good writing, but its not funny, and Futurama is technically a comedy. It was all sentimental, and some of the only funny things were references to other episodes.

I could be wrong so don't hold me to this but I don't think it was ever intended to be a script, mate.

Just a story written by someone with both a love for writing and for the show.

[Reply #12 on:]

Your right Steve it wasn't intended to be a script.

And I know I can't do comedy, I tried and failed miserably 

::slopes off depressed

[Reply #13 on:]

Astrozombie, I love your fics! They could always use work, but good just the way they are.

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:: percs up a bit   

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I absolutely love both of your fics, AstroZombie.  Very sentimental AND well-written.  I appreciate both those factors in fanfics. 

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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
(I'm still waiting on Slimmy posting them on CGEF)

He was some busy with studying. But they are both up for voting and reading now:
crashcourse in love and precious memories

[Reply #17 on:]

Now why didn't I see this post earlyer?

Astrozombie I love your fics  Are you doing anymore?

[Reply #18 on:]

So if I can ask, what are those fanfics about?

[Reply #19 on:]

[Philisophical]
Human(and Mutant)kinds eternal search search for True love, and a sense of belonging, Winna.
[/Philisophical]

 

Yes I'm doing more Juli, when I get some of my college work out of the way, and when my wife lets me   

:: rubs the thumb mark on his head and puts more ice on his groin 

I got the strangest feeling that they'll be romance's too   

And if you don't like it, don't read it, simple.   

Course you could give them a try you might like them.   

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You haven't written any that don't feature romance yet anyhow. Not that it's a bad thing

[Reply #21 on:]

Wow Allen your quick!  ,

Yeah, I think I'm what you call a LFR...FRL, no LRF, RFL, ah screw it, I want Fry and Leela to get together.

 

[Reply #22 on:]

You said it correct the first time. LFR

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I know, I was trying comedy again, and... and ... and I failed, ooooooooh god! The shame of it!

:: Runs off Sobbing

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

[Reply #24 on:]

Hey, don't feel bad, I've tried comedy too and no one's told me they picked up on the jokes. My favorite was in TDTFSiD.

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:: stops short of leaping off the stool and takes the noose off his neck.

You did? cool, I'll go check later. 

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ROTFL! That WAS funny Astrozombie!

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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
:: stops short of leaping off the stool and takes the noose off his neck.

Seriously man, i'm worried about you. Please give the heavy metal a rest and try some Travis  for the love of god please!
but try and avoid 'The Man Who' it can be a bit depressing, 'Good Feeling' and 'The Invisible Band' are safe bets though 

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PEEL: A Community that cares about its members

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Originally posted by [-mArc-]:
 He was some busy with studying. But they are both up for voting and reading now:
crashcourse in love and precious memories

I seem to remember telling Slimmy some time ago, that he could post Destiny's Child on CGEF as well.  Anyhoo, I've another couple of fics in the planning, so the scan-art king hasn't given up scan-fiction yet.

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That's cool Paul.

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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Wow Allen your quick!   ,

Yeah, I think I'm what you call a LFR...FRL, no LRF, RFL, ah screw it, I want Fry and Leela to get together.

 

You also did Amy and Kif Romance on your first fiction too 

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Originally posted by Allen:
PEEL: A Community that cares about its members 

I don't know why i should, the bastard threatened to kill me 

[Reply #33 on:]

Don't worry about it Steve, your way down the list.

After my boss, the government, the Taliban,....

:: Drones on for hours on end

...the tooth fairy- tight fisted bastard, Pacman, and the bloke from the Remington razors add.

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Your boss must be terrible to be first

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Yeah, he like tells me what to do, and stuff, can you believe that, the nerve of the guy.

 

[Reply #36 on:]

Oh your god! How terrible! Wait doesn't that disqualify you from working at almost any job if you hate bosses?

[Reply #37 on:]

AstroZombie: Your fics are really quite good. They could do with a little grammar check but that's about it 

[Reply #38 on:]

Bah, I run a spelling and grammer check, in Word, so blame Microsoft, I also use British spelling.

 
   

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Yeah, the spelling is fine, and microsoft certainly isn't perfect