OC_James
Liquid Emperor
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« on: 08-11-2003 01:31 »
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Since George Lucas and Stephen Spielberg have taking it upon themselves to alter some of their classic hits and not counting all the other classics now being altered digitally, I thought I'd make a slight change to the worst Star Wars movie ,Episode One: The Phantom Menace. I replaced Obi-wan with myself and I have changed all of Obi-wan's lies into something I would say. I have not changed anyone else's lines and have not given myself any extra parts. Insert yourself into your favorite or least favorite movies and post 'em here. Try and keep them short. I'm not posting the entire movie, just the beginning and finally, yes I did remove the "In a Galaxy Far Away" introduction. Not because I didn't like it, but the thing's long enough.
PAN DOWN to reveal a small space cruiser heading TOWARD CAMERA at great speed. PAN with the cruiser as it heads toward the beautiful green planet of Naboo, which is surrounded by hundreds of Trade Federation battleships.
INT. REPUBLIC CRUISER - COCKPIT
In the cockpit of the cruise, the CAPTAIN and PILOT maneuver closer to one of the battleships.
QUI-GON (O.S.) Captain.
The Captain turns to an unseen figure sitting behind her.
CAPTAIN Yes, sir.
The CAPTAIN looks to her view screen, where NUTE GUNRAY, a Neimoidian trade viceroy, waits for a reply.
CAPTAIN With all due respect for the Trade Federation, the Ambassadors for the Supreme Chancellor wish to board immediately.
NUTE Yes, yes, of coarse...ahhh...as you know, our blockade is perfectly legal, and we'd be happy to recieve the Ambassador...Happy to.
The screen goes black. Out the cockpit window, the sinister battleship looms ever closer.
EXT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - DOCKING BAY - SPACE (FX)
The small space cruiser docks in the enormous main bay of the Federation battleship.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - DOCKING BAY - SPACE
A PROTOCOL DROID, TC-14, waits at the door to the docking bay. Two WORKER DROIDS, PK-4 and EG-9 watch.
PK-4 They must be important if the Viceroy sent one of those useless protocol gearheads to greet them.
The door opens, and the Republic cruiser can be seen in the docking bay. Two darkly robed figures are greeted by TC-14.
TC-14 I'm TC-14 at your service. This way, please.
They move off down the hallway.
EG-9 A Republic cruiser! That's trouble...don't you think?
PK-4 I'm not made to think.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - CONFERENCE ROOM
A door slides open, and the two cloaked shapes are led PAST CAMERA into the formal conference room by TC-14.
TC-14 I hope you honoured sirs with the most comfortable here. My master will be with you shortly.
The droid bows before OCTAVIUS JAMES and QUI- GON JINN. He backs out the door and it closes. The JEDI lower their hoods and look out a large window at the lush green planet of Naboo. QUI-GON sixty years old, has long white hair in a ponytail. He is tall and striking, with blue eyes. JAMES is twenty five, with very short brown hair, pale skin, and blue eyes. Several exotic, bird-like creatures SING in a cage near the door.
OCTAVIUS JAMES Oops...I just let gas.
QUI-GON I don't sense anything.
OCTAVIUS JAMES Good, is there a bathroom on here?
QUI-GON Don't center on your anxiety, Octavius. Keep your concentration here and now where it belongs.
OCTAVIUS JAMES But I've really gotta go. I mean REALLY. Do you think they'd notice if I went in my pants? I guess it wouldn't be to bad an expense...
QUI-GON ...but not at the expense of the moment. Be mindful of the living Force, my young Padawan.
OCTAVIUS JAMES (Pacing back and forth) How long is this gonna freakin' take?!
QUI-GON These Federation types are cowards. The negotiations will be short.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - BRIDGE
NUTE GUNRAY and DAULTRAY DOFINE stand, stunned, before TC- 14.
NUTE (shaken) What?!? What did you say?
TC-14 The Ambassadors are Jedi Knights, I believe.
DOFINE I knew it! They were sent to force a settlement, eh. Blind me, we're done for!
NUTE Stay calm? I'll wager the Senate isn't aware of the Supreme Chancellor's moves here. Go. Distract them until I can contact Lord Sidious.
DOFINE Are you brain dead? I'm not going in there with two Jedi! Send the droid.
Dofine turns to TC-14, who lets out a squeaky sigh.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - CONFERENCE ROOM
OCTAVIUS JAMES So, you don't think Peppermint Patty's a lesbian?
The door to the conference room slides open, and TC-14 enters with a tray of drinks and food.
QUI-GON No. I sense an unusual amount of fear for something as trivial as this dispute.
James takes a drink.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - BRIDGE
Nute, Dofine, and Rune Haako are before the hologram of Darth Sidious, a robed figure whose face is obscured by a hood.
DOFINE This scheme of yours has failed, Lord Sidious. The blockade is finished! We dare not go against these Jedi.
DARTH SIDIOUS You seem more worried about the Jedi than you are of me, Dofine. I am amused.. Viceroy!
Nute, looking very nervous, steps forward.
NUTE Yes, My lord.
DARTH SIDIOUS I don't want that stunted slime in my sight again. Do you understand?
NUTE Yes, My Lord.
Nute gives Dofine a fierce look, and Dofine, terrified, rushed off the bridge.
DARTH SIDIOUS This turns of events is unfortunate. We must accelerate our plans, Viceroy. Begin landing your troops.
NUTE Ahh, My Lord, is that, Legal?
DARTH SIDIOUS I will make it legal.
NUTE And, the Jedi??
DARTH SIDIOUS The Chancellor should never have brought them into this. Kill them, immediatly.
NUTE Ye..Yes, My Lord. As you wish.
INT. REPUBLIC CRUISER - COCKPIT - DOCKING BAY
In the Cockpit of the Cruiser, the Captain and Pilot look up and see a gun turret swing around and point directly at them.
PILOT Captain !? Look !!
CAPTAIN No! Warn...
EXT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - HANGER BAY
The battle gun fires. The Republic Cruiser explodes.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - CONFERENCE ROOM
Gui-Gon and James leap up to a standing position with their light sabers drawn. TC-14 jumps back, startled, spilling the drinks tray.
TC-14 Ahhh, Sorry, sir. The Viceroy...
Gui-Gon and James turn off their swords and listen intently. A faint hissing sound can be heard.
QUI-GON Gas!
Qui-Gon and JAMES each taken a sudden deep breath and holding it. The exotic bird-like creatures in the cage dorp dead.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - HALLWAY
A hologram of NUTE , surrounded by BATTLE DROIDS, appears in the conference room hallway.
NUTE They must be dead by now. Blast, what's left of them.
The hologram fades off, as a BATTLE DROID, OWO-1, cautiously opens the door. A deadly green cloud billows from the room. BATTLE DROIDS cock their weapons as a figure stumbles out of the smoke. It is TC-14 , carrying the tray of drinks.
TC-14 Oh, excuse me, so sorry.
The PROTOCOL DROID passes the armed camp just as two flashing laser swords fly out of the deadly fog, cutting down several BATTLE DROIDS before they can fire.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - BRIDGE
The bridge is a cocophony of alarms. NUTE and RUNE watch OWO- 1 on the viewscreen.
OWO-1 Not sure exactly what...
OWO-1 is suddenly cut in half in mid-sentence. RUNE gives NUTE a worried look.
NUTE What in blazes is going on down there?
RUNE Have you ever encountered a Jedi Knight before, sir?
NUTE Well, not exactly, but I don't... (panicked) Seal off the bridge.
RUNE That won't be enough, sir.
The doors to the bridge SLAM shut.
NUTE I want destroyer droids up here at once!!!
RUNE We will not survive this.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - HALLWAY - OUTSIDE BRIDGE
QUI-GON cuts several BATTLE DROIDS in half, creating a shower of sparks and metal parts. JAMES raises his hand, sending several BATTLE DROIDS crashing into the wall.
QUI-GON makes his way to the bridge door and begins to cut through it.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - BRIDGE
The CREW is very nervous as sparks start flying around the bridge door.
QUI-GON and OBI-WAN are on the view screen.
NUTE Close the blast doors!!!
The huge, very thick blast door slams shut, followed by a second door, then a third. There is a hissing sound as the huge doors seal shut. QUI-GON tabs the door with his sword. The screen goes black as a red spot appears in the center of the blast door.
RUNE ...They're still coming through!
On the door, chunks of molten metal begin to drop away.
NUTE Impossible!! This is impossible!!
RUNE Where are those destroyer droids?!
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - HALLWAY - OUTSIDE BRIDGE
Ten ugly destroyer WHEEL DROIDS roll down the hallway at full speed. Just before they get to the bridge area, they stop and transform into their battle configuration. QUI-GON can't see them but senses their presence.
QUI-GON Destroyer droids!
OCTAVIUS JAMES They're like a lethal and evil kind of rolly-polly bug... I call them: Unholy Rolly-pollies.
The WHEEL DROIDS, led by P-59, rush the entry area from three hallways, blasting away with their laser guns. They stop firing and stand in a semi-circle as the smoke clears. JAMES and QUI-GON are nowhere to be seen.
P-59 Switch to bio...There they are!
The Jedi materialize at the far end of the hallway and dash through the doorway that slams shut. The WHEEL DROIDS blast away at the two JEDI with their laser swords.
OCTAVIUS JAMES Well, my bathroom dilemma's solved.
QUI-GON It's a standoff! Let's go!
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - BRIDGE
NUTE and RUNE stand on the bridge, watching the view screen as the WHEEL
DROIDS' POV speeds to the doorway.
RUNE We have them on the run, sir...they're no match for destroyer droids.
TEY HOW Sir, they've gone up the ventilation shaft.
INT. FEDERATION BATTLESHIP - MAIN BAY
QUI-GON and JAMES appear at a large vent in a giant hanger bay. They are careful not to be seen. Thousands of BATTLE DROIDS are loading onto landing craft.
QUI-GON Battle droids.
OCTAVIUS JAMES (Drops his lightsaber while QUI-GON is looking the other way) Oh shit-monkeys... QUI-GON It's an odd play for the Trade Federation. We've got to warn the Naboo and contact Chancellor Valorum. Let's split up. Stow aboard separate ships and meet down on the planet.
OCTAVIUS JAMES How expensive are lightsabers?
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