Not to sound negative, but this gets an official rating of 1 for me.
bad design, this looks terrible;
Trust me, you do not want to use frames or have a background like that.
too little content
-I know this can grow but my point remains valid
Popups and advertising.
-There is no bigger put off than this.
You need to buy a domain name and pay for better hosting.
-This may sound a bit harsh but if you have a domain name people remember your address better, also if you pay for hosting you don't have popups or ads (unless you want them.)
if you haven't got the pocket money for this fair enough;
However, judging that you're new to this stuff, i can forgive you, you will get better and I'll be happy to see any improvements in the future.
I also think that making a site about a character who didn't appear much is a bad idea, there isn't really much to go on or to expand apon, it is a good start though.
I'm likely to be far more harsh than other people since I am a veteran to websites hehe
Check out my website,
http://www.sayargh.net/, it suffers from the lack of content guiltyness too right now so i'm one to preach.