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Zed 85
Space Pope
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Well the initial one was 194,138 words long, or nearly 2 million, whichever you want, and also 368 A4 pages long. My betas were sort of split on the issue - most suggested trimming of some degree, some more than others. I've decided not to cut out huge chunks, just re-tell the story, which will require me re-writing it from scratch. Already I've missed out on a few parts of the story, skipping them over with brief explanations or discriptions (ones that still work of course). And then I may go add a few more lines to another scene, and it's only just gone under the word count of the original so far It'll still need to be beta'ed again, just to make sure I haven't been a complete pillock, but hopefully that stage will be completed in the next few months. And then, onto the next one, which I already started a bit of, and am very confident about already.
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DrThunder88
DOOP Secretary
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Wait a minute...194,138 is not almost 2 million, or did I misunderstand something?
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Spacedal11
Space Pope
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Jennifer Garner, cool. Again Fryfan, been there read that, was really there looking for something of mine. Nicely done as always, extra points for using Jennifer Garner. And for anyone else, call me a homo anyway, I'm trying to become a hippie.
Hopefully, hopefully, by tomorrow, Teral will put up my new fan fic. And I know I said it was a drama and it wasn't gory, guess what?
I LIED!
There actually will be some violence. But I still think it'll be different fromt my previous fics. And once I'm done with this one, back to my sequels!
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DrThunder88
DOOP Secretary
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So, I was looking at my finished script when I realized it was more than 70 pages long (movie script format). As soon as I figure out how to break it up into digestible chunklets I'll post it. Aside from sucking, improper divisions were one of the major flaws of the first one.
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Gorky
DOOP Secretary
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First off, I'd like to thank Kif White for being such an awesome writer...part four was great! Then, I'd like to thank him for putting my newest fic, "Single, Uptight Female", up at TLZ. And here it is...Hope you guys like it.
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Teral
Helpy McHelphelp
DOOP Secretary
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I've been skiing in Norway for the last 10 days, and only got back today. I'll get right back into the game but it might be a few more days before you'll see it on TLZ.
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fryfanSpyOrama
Urban Legend
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« Reply #181 on: 02-05-2005 18:16 »
« Last Edit on: 02-06-2005 00:00 »
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@Spacedal11 and anybody else. Part 4 of my SpyOrama/Kim Possible Crossover Crisis is available at TLZ. http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/crossover_crisis-4.shtml Here's what to expect: In this story, Kim has to deal with the fact her presence in the future is now known throughout the world. Fry and Leela will have to do what they can so Kim and Ron can meet the person who's their only hope of ever getting back to their time. Cubert tries to put the moves on Kim and this part marks the SpyOrama return of an old character from my first SpyOrama. Hope you enjoy.
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DrThunder88
DOOP Secretary
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So, yeah...I'm in the process of posting my latest fic on PEEL. Aside from having more spelling errors than I could shake a sizeable shaking stick at, it seems to be doing better than my first fic. Take a gander, if you like. I always love receiving critiques.
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fryfanSpyOrama
Urban Legend
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« Reply #190 on: 02-15-2005 13:15 »
« Last Edit on: 02-15-2005 13:15 »
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@ Spacedal11, KurtPikachu2001 and anyone else. You can read part 5 of my SpyOrama/Kim Possible CrossOver Crisis at TLZ. Here's what to expect: This one Kim has to deal big time that the future is different than her time. Fry tries to offer a few tips to Ron. Kim, Ron, Leela, and Fry have to work together to save Wade, but Kim meets Zapp along the way. And we see that there's more than meets the eye with Drakken and Ironfinger's plan. http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/crossover_crisis-5.shtml hope you enjoy
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fryfanSpyOrama
Urban Legend
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« Reply #197 on: 02-26-2005 17:11 »
« Last Edit on: 02-26-2005 17:11 »
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2 Spacedal11, KurtPikachu2001 and anybody else. I have the sixth and final part of my SpyOrama/Kim Possible Crossover Crisis available at TLZ. Secrets will be revealed. "I must say this opens my eyes! Another case closed my dear Watson. For I was blind but now I see! The cat's out of the bag now!" Something happens in this story that has never happened in any of my previous SpyOramas. One more thing, this story may reveal a secret, but the big secret won't be revealed yet. I'm saving that for the Kim Possible series finale, "So The Drama". That movie will air on Disney on April 8. I hope this fanfic will get people to watch the series finale of Kim Possible because Ron may pull a Fry in that movie. Hope you enjoy and please review. http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanfic/crossover_crisis-6.shtml
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