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Starship Captain
« on: 06-29-2004 22:26 »
« Last Edit on: 06-29-2004 22:26 »

so my friend and i were bored so we wrote this ( he wrote most of it )

Proffesor: Good news everyone we've been hired us to deliver a package to the library

Fry: Does that mean we have to go today

Proffesor: (sarcastically) No,I'm just telling you this

Fry: (now standing up) Wahooo

Leela: He was being sarcastic moron (Fry falls asleep) Fry wake up ..... Fry

Fry :(waking up) oh sorry (falls asleep again)


Fry :(now relaxing with feet on table) How come you complain now you don't usually

Bender: Hey how bout you all just Shut-up

Fry: See Leela, That's the kinda attitude i like , Hi five Bender

Bender :(punches Fry) you know i'm affended by how many fingers i have I do hi threes.

Proffesor: Anyway the new books need to be delivered right away

Fry: Fine but i ain't doing any more library gigs

Bender: same here buddy , hi three Fry!

Fry: but i have five ....

Bender :(punches Fry) heheheheha

Library scene

Leela: were here

Fry:ZZZZZ!!! oh yeah finally

Bender :(now in library) hey im gonna not steal something over there.

Fry: It's quiet, too quiet.

Leela: duh were in a library

Fry: yeah well uh it's still pretty quiet

Bender: heheheha (stealing a book on how to steal a book)

Leela: well come on Fry we have a package to deliver

Fry: Do we have to

Leela: No, what do you think of course we have to

Fry: ok ok calm down

Fry and Leela walk over close up on name it reads "Mrs. Anita Bath"

Fry starts laughing

Leela: what

Fry :(still laughing) nothing

Fry: (to leela) What a stupid job

Anita: What?

Fry: (nervous) oh um uh nothing

Leela: I am the captain of P.E we have a package for you (hands it over)

Anita: oh thanks

Leela: Fry,Bender we have to go

Fry: (pounding slurm machine) stupid machine

Leela: you have to put money in first , idiot

Fry: What (leela leaves starts pounding it again) ugh

(twilight zone thing)

person: Will fry ever get his slurm by pounding the hell out of the machine? Will bender get away with the book ? The world may never know

(fades back to normal)

Fry: (has one hand still on the slurm machine) Shut up!

ok that was it post your thoughts here
Guineapig Trick

« Reply #1 on: 06-29-2004 22:31 »

Uhh, it's ok, it may be a bit better than my fics, but thats not saying much, the name jokes belong in the simpsons, and the only part I found funny was the book on how to steal a book, also, work on your spelling and capitalization, and edit your post and click 'disable smilies.'

The Listmaker
Urban Legend
« Reply #2 on: 06-29-2004 22:33 »
« Last Edit on: 06-29-2004 22:33 »

Not bad as a start although I have to agree with GPT.

A little note beside: Fry has four fingers   wink

edit: I'm too tired to spell correctly

Starship Captain
« Reply #3 on: 06-29-2004 22:49 »
« Last Edit on: 06-29-2004 22:49 »

Originally posted by *germanfryfan*:
*A little note beside: Fry has four fingers*

My friend wrote that (kinda stupid) joke he wrote  the whole beggining and middle and most of the jokes in the end    roll eyes he just wanted me to post it anyway

Bending Unit
« Reply #4 on: 06-30-2004 18:52 »

good fan fic but it just kinda rambles for awhile good job though

Urban Legend
« Reply #5 on: 06-30-2004 19:27 »

you really shouldn't have a fic that is all dialogue. Even actual scripts have written action.
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