Me and my friend's exuse for writing

[on:]

so my friend and i were bored so we wrote this ( he wrote most of it )

Proffesor: Good news everyone we've been hired us to deliver a package to the library

Fry: Does that mean we have to go today

Proffesor: (sarcastically) No,I'm just telling you this

Fry: (now standing up) Wahooo

Leela: He was being sarcastic moron (Fry falls asleep) Fry wake up ..... Fry

Fry :(waking up) oh sorry (falls asleep again)

Leela:Fry!

Fry :(now relaxing with feet on table) How come you complain now you don't usually

Bender: Hey how bout you all just Shut-up

Fry: See Leela, That's the kinda attitude i like , Hi five Bender

Bender :(punches Fry) you know i'm affended by how many fingers i have I do hi threes.

Proffesor: Anyway the new books need to be delivered right away

Fry: Fine but i ain't doing any more library gigs

Bender: same here buddy , hi three Fry!

Fry: but i have five ....

Bender :(punches Fry) heheheheha

Library scene

Leela: were here

Fry:ZZZZZ!!! oh yeah finally

Bender :(now in library) hey im gonna not steal something over there.

Fry: It's quiet, too quiet.

Leela: duh were in a library

Fry: yeah well uh it's still pretty quiet

Bender: heheheha (stealing a book on how to steal a book)

Leela: well come on Fry we have a package to deliver

Fry: Do we have to

Leela: No, what do you think of course we have to

Fry: ok ok calm down

Fry and Leela walk over close up on name it reads "Mrs. Anita Bath"

Fry starts laughing

Leela: what

Fry :(still laughing) nothing

Fry: (to leela) What a stupid job

Anita: What?

Fry: (nervous) oh um uh nothing

Leela: I am the captain of P.E we have a package for you (hands it over)

Anita: oh thanks

Leela: Fry,Bender we have to go

Fry: (pounding slurm machine) stupid machine

Leela: you have to put money in first , idiot

Fry: What (leela leaves starts pounding it again) ugh

(twilight zone thing)

person: Will fry ever get his slurm by pounding the hell out of the machine? Will bender get away with the book ? The world may never know

(fades back to normal)

Fry: (has one hand still on the slurm machine) Shut up!

ok that was it post your thoughts here

[Reply #1 on:]

Uhh, it's ok, it may be a bit better than my fics, but thats not saying much, the name jokes belong in the simpsons, and the only part I found funny was the book on how to steal a book, also, work on your spelling and capitalization, and edit your post and click 'disable smilies.'

[Reply #2 on:]

Not bad as a start although I have to agree with GPT.

A little note beside: Fry has four fingers   

edit: I'm too tired to spell correctly

[Reply #3 on:]

 

Originally posted by *germanfryfan*:
*A little note beside: Fry has four fingers*

My friend wrote that (kinda stupid) joke he wrote  the whole beggining and middle and most of the jokes in the end    he just wanted me to post it anyway

[Reply #4 on:]

good fan fic but it just kinda rambles for awhile good job though

[Reply #5 on:]

you really shouldn't have a fic that is all dialogue. Even actual scripts have written action.