Help I need some ideas !

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You have some good Ideas I will admit that!
But (and this is a big butt) they all seem to be based around something that has already been done! Spiderman, Halo and that movie! (I can't remember what it is called but I am sure there is a movie like your second idea)!
If you carefully used these Ideas and edited them into new stories with new twists there should not be a problem but if you follow too closely to the original storylines and plotlines then they will fall into the Rip off category I am afraid!
By the way I did not mean to be harsh in my first post of this thread!
By the way again! Halo Rocks! Halo 2 screenshots look awesome! Official release date for Halo 2 here in the UK is 9th of september!
EDIT: What with the dancing and the top of the Page and the Glayvin'!

[Reply #41 on:]

 

Originally posted by Sm@ Cpt. Libido:
You have some good Ideas I will admit that!
But (and this is a big butt) they all seem to be based around something that has already been done! Spiderman, Halo and that movie! (I can't remember what it is called but I am sure there is a movie like your second idea)!
If you carefully used these Ideas and edited them into new stories with new twists there should not be a problem but if you follow too closely to the original storylines and plotlines then they will fall into the Rip off category I am afraid!
By the way I did not mean to be harsh in my first post of this thread!
By the way again! Halo Rocks! Halo 2 screenshots look awesome! Official release date for Halo 2 here in the UK is 9th of september!
EDIT: What with the dancing and the top of the Page and the Glayvin'!

will do any ideas post them heres a spoiler for the halo fic

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*CUT TO PILLAR OF WINTER FRYS QUARTERS NIGHT
FRY IS PACEING IN HIS QUARTERS HIS MIND FULL OF IMAGES OF LEELA THE WOMAN HE LOVED AND HATED HE PUNCHED A MIRROR AND SHATTERED IT IT WAS THE ONLY EMOTION FRY EVER SHOWN...FURY
KIF(OVER INTERCOM): sir we have nearly reached are target
FRY: good send the troops excellent work kroker
WE HEAR KIF HAVING A HEART ATTACK OVER THE INTER COMM
FRY(IN RADIO): can I have a medic down to the bridge please
 *

and another for my fry turning evil fic

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*CUT TO UNDER WORLD NIGHT
FRY HAS LEELA TIED TO A STONE TABLE AND HE IS WEARING A BLACK ROBE WITH A HOOD COVERING HIS FACE LEELA IS TRIYING TO GET FREE
FRY:  the dagger of darkness
A BLACK DAGGER APPERS IN HIS HAND HE LIFTS IT UP WHEN NIBBLER AND THE SURVIVING NIBBLONIAN ELDERS APPER THEY START TO CHANT AND FRY BLOWS UP
NIBBLER: we couldnt save you
A COLD LAUGH FILLS THE AIR AS FRY SLOWLY REFORMS HE LIFTS UP HIS HOOD TO REVEAL HE LOOKS LIKE DARK JAK FROM JAK 2 BUT WITH THE LOOKS OF FRY AKA PURPLE SKIN BLACK EYES AND LONG BLACK CLAWS
FRY: you cant kill me... nothing can.  *

[Reply #42 on:]

*Audiences ohhhhhs and awwwwwwwwws* Very gooD!

[Reply #43 on:]

thanks heres another spoiler for my fry turning evil fic which I have now named the darkness within

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*CUT TO UNDERWORLD NIGHT FRY HAS ALL THE NIBBLONIAN ELDERS TRAPPED
LEELA: fry I love you
FRY TURNS AND HIS SKIN STARTS TO RETURN TO NORMAL UNTIL HE IS BACK TO NORMAL FRY THEY ALL STARE AT EACH OTHER
NIBBLER: ehh lets go
CUT TO P.E H.Q NIGHT
THE CREW ARE GATHERED AT THE MEETING TABLE
FRY GETS UP
NIBBLER: were are you going your mighty ness
FRY: ill be back soon
HE LEAVES AND AS SOON AS HE IS OUT OF SIGHT HE FALLS TO THE GROUND AND BEGINS TO SWEAT A SNAKE LIKE VOICE IN THE BACK OF HIS HEAD BEGINS TO TALK
DARK FRY: you can not run or hide from me soon we will be one and I will enjoy killing them all
FRY: if you dare
DARK FRY: I wont WE will
FRY: NO
DARK FRY CACKLES
HE FELT HIS LEGS MOVING BACK TO THE MEETING ROOM HE SEES THE CREW AND FEELS HATE START TO TAKE OVER
NIBBLER: IT CANT BE
FRY FEELS HIS ARM LIFT ITSELF UP AS IT FIRES BOLTS OF DARK PURPLE THUNDER
HE PICKS BENDER UP WITH AMAZING STRENGTH AND PLUNGES HIS HAND THROUGH THE ROBOTS HEAD FRY SEES IN THE MIRROR THAT HE HAS TRANSFORMED BACK INTO TO DARK FRY
DARK FRY: we are one     *

[Reply #44 on:]

duh  duh dunnn tune in next week for the conclusion of dark fry!!!!
very good

[Reply #45 on:]

Not bad, tell me when your done though.

[Reply #46 on:]

its been a while since I posted here so heres anthor part to my halo fic

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*CUT TO PILLAR OF WINTER METTING ROOM DAY
MILLONS OF SOLIDERS ARE IN THE ROOM THE P.E CREW ARE LOOKING AT A STAGE AT THE FRONT FRY APPEARS
FRY: hello ladies,gentelmen,manbots,fembots,femputers, manputers,germs,aliens,(VERY QUICKLY AND VERY QUIETLY)mutants(NORMAL)mercanerys,hitmen and mafia members
CLAMPS: yo M.C you da man
FRY: thanks lets roll
TIME SKIP LATER
there all covered in covonent blood
FRY IS WALKING DOWN THE SHIPS HALL
TEACHER: sir
FRY: yeah
TEACHER: could you take my class there in there
FRY: but
TEACHER: thanks bye
FRY: DAMN!
FRY WALKS IN
ALL WE CAN HEAR IS KIDS SCREAMING FOR ICE CREAM
FRY: THATS IT ALL OF YOU BEHAVE
7 GUN SHOTS GO OF
FRY: and be thankful that was the roof      *

[Reply #47 on:]

Hey guys sorry for bringing back this thread and double posting but It hit me a few days ago my ideas are crap. So I said ill prove im not as crap as I sound I relaise that my ideas are kame but now im trying hard so please show mercy O.K
Alright the idea is along the lines of star wars BEFORE you all run away it's like this *ahem* in an alternate universe there is a war between the smith and the gedi fry and leela used to be great gedi under training of master farnsworth. Fry and leela had a son called philp J fry Junior leela has always told her son his father was mudered by the sith ruler dark nader. 20 years on and fry's son is out for vengance he and his friends and his parents friends live on the one planet dark nader hasn't conqured earthduring fry jnr's training dark rader attack's capturing his mother now fry jnr must avenge his father and save his mother with plenty of bender on the side. As I said please be gentle. Special thanks to spacedal who inspired me to try writing agian through her great fan fics.