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bendersbud3000

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« on: 06-04-2004 11:38 »

I am writing a fan fic called spider fry
it starts with the crew making a delivery to a planet inhabbited by spiders when fry is bitten he recives all of spider mans powers and (with the help of bender)he steals the costume from a store downtown. Fry manages to keep his identity secret from evreyone apart from Bender and save the city from many crimes but when a D.O.O.P experiment goes wrong zapp brannigan becomes the velor goblin. So when zapp kidnapps Leela fry must save her and take down zapp but I need ideas for names and such if you have any suggestions please post them on this thread thank you for your time.
Sm@ Cpt. Libido

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« Reply #1 on: 06-04-2004 11:40 »

So basically the first Spiderman movie copied but with the characters changed! Gottit!
What exactly do you need help with?
bendersbud3000

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #2 on: 06-04-2004 12:09 »



copieng is such a mean word i prefer the term borrowing a few ideas in answer to your question
names jokes anything you want to suggest
P.S no need to be so harsh
TheLesbianLeela

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« Reply #3 on: 06-05-2004 21:59 »

Without meaning to sound mean, but I have to agree with Cpt Lib.

Your idea to make a parody of a movie is good, but you shouldn't "borrow" too much. You will need unexpected changes in the storyline ... that even people who saw that movie (or have read the comic series) still can feel a thrill and will be surprised.
Also, knowing Fry - he would be boring as a plain brave hero. Remember how he acted being Cpt Yesterday.
That's anyway a good idea: Watch that episode again or have a look at the episode capsules and framegrabs on Futurama sites.
For example CGEF is a site full of good informations.

So far for today. In case I have more ideas I'll post them tomorrow.
M0le

Space Pope
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« Reply #4 on: 06-06-2004 00:17 »

Maybe Fry doesn't actually know that he's a Super Hero, and just saves the day every time by plain accident.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #5 on: 06-06-2004 00:40 »

NO Fry wasn't that stupid in LTAH. He was aware that he had powers. But I love spider-man so I would love to read this fan fic.
Digital Dragon

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« Reply #6 on: 06-06-2004 00:53 »

I don't think this would work. Fry turned superhero has already been done and it sounds less like a clever parody of spiderman and more like you're too lazy to think up your own plot.
winna

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« Reply #7 on: 06-06-2004 01:01 »

I don't know that this helps... but it certainly is something:
EvilLunch

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« Reply #8 on: 06-06-2004 01:22 »

Would that make Zoidy Robin? And I'm sure Leela could overcome the colour yellow..
Heheh, it's cute...
winna

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« Reply #9 on: 06-06-2004 02:08 »

I made it a long time ago, when I wasn't lazy I think.....
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #10 on: 06-06-2004 09:41 »
« Last Edit on: 06-06-2004 09:41 »

thanks to evreyone whos posted PLEASE do not call me lazy and such. The thread is for ideas and constructive critisim ONLY heres a spolier for the fic
sorry if ANYBODY has been offended by this
post keep your ideas coming bearing in mind what i said before 
thank you very much spacedale11 winna the lesbian leela evil lunch and mOle as for evreyone else (hiss) the fic goes ahead as planned     evil laugh
also the fic only has the basic parts of spider man rest assured it will not turn out the way the film does after all he is fry
Digital Dragon

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« Reply #11 on: 06-06-2004 18:22 »

Just...no.
Guineapig Trick

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« Reply #12 on: 06-06-2004 20:14 »

I didn't think anyone was being harsh, and also, I would like to point out that winna said that he was lazy, not you. No one is being harsh, and if you think theyre harsh, then get the hell off of PEEL because, sometimes, just sometimes, we are harsh. Tjese are ideas, not harshness. Also, I think Spiderfry has already been done. Also, I have a shitload of free time, so if you want I can illustrate some of your people for you.
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #13 on: 06-07-2004 10:56 »
« Last Edit on: 06-07-2004 10:56 »

thanks evreybody whos posted p.s it was not winna that called me lazy it was digital dragon
thanks for the offer guineapig trick id like to see some drawings also thanks winna for that nice peice of fan art as ive said before im gonna do it wether some people like it or not p.p.s if you do not like this fic please stop posting here and simply dont read it i want some ideas and CONSTRUCTIVE critisim which means please do not criticise me without giving an idea for improvment thank you.
     
Ozor Mox

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« Reply #14 on: 06-07-2004 13:46 »

It was quite funny. I'm afraid I have nothing to suggest though.

bendersbud3000

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« Reply #15 on: 06-07-2004 14:47 »

 
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Originally posted by Ozor Mox:
It was quite funny. I'm afraid I have nothing to suggest though.


thanks thats fine its just nice that some one posted without anythindg bad to say its quite rare on this thread   smile
Guineapig Trick

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« Reply #16 on: 06-07-2004 15:04 »

I have a thread with my art its called ' I was bored" look it up, thats my art and i just thought of this to go with me other post:
you cant spell futurama without FU
Spacedal11

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« Reply #17 on: 06-08-2004 02:11 »

Here is something:

Leela: Ok Fry now just breath!

Fry is panting because the bite is very poisonious and he is fainting out.

Fry: *Moans*

Bender: Is Fry alright?

Leela: I don't know, his breathing rate is low and he's losing blood presure.

Bender: Oh...well I get first dibs to sell his crap when he craps out.

Leela: Bender! Keep the auto-piolet busy and try to get us home as fast as we can!

Bender: Fine!

Fry: Lee...la?

Leela: Fry, are you ok? Fry!?

Fry passes out still breathing but is like in a short coma while Leela keeps him company. Scene shows Zoidberg and Farnsworth working on him, making sure he'll be alright while Leela and the rest of the crew watches through the window. Both Zoidberg and the Professer walk out.

Leela: Is Fry alright?

Farnsworth: Surprisingly yes!

Everyone sighs.

Farnsworth: But he did suffer some major blood loss so his memory might be a slight bit fuzzy at first. So don't alarm him.

Everyone walks back in while Fry wakes up in the bed. (Don't ask how that got there it just is.) Fry's eyes merely open.

Fry: *moans*

Zoidberg: Hello Fry, we come help you. Do you member us?

Fry: uh...I want only one person at a time.

Farnsworth: Who my ignorint uncle? Who?

Fry: *groans* L-Lee...la.

The crew nodds as they all walk out of the room leaving only Leela. They all feel better that Fry remembers someone.

Leela: Why me?

Fry: I...have...to...say..somethin g.

Leela: Yes?

Fry: I...I...feel...different Leela. Like that bite changed me. *moans in pain*

Leela: Uh-sure Fry. I don't want you to be in pain anymore so I'm gonna leave you to rest ok?

Fry: F-fine. But have I told you that I love you?

Leela stares at Fry in guilt: Yeah, you did. An-and thank you.

She leans over and pecks him on the cheek trying not to hurt him. He doesn't (or tries not to) moan.

The next day...

Fry is feeling  better, his blood presure and breathing has raised backed to normal and he is walking and talking and doing everything like before. He just doesn't remember talking to Leela the day before. Farnsworth tells Fry to take some days off and to stay home. One night while at Robot Arms Apt., Fry discovers something very weird.

Bender: Glad your feeling better meatbag! I could use a hand reaching that crappy can opener.

Fry walks over to the can opener and grabs it. He hands it to Bender but it doesn't let go. They both try to pull it out of his hand,

Bender: Let go Fry!

Fry: I can't!

Finally it's jerked out of his hand as a long stick web-like substence string is attached to his palm and the opener.

Fry: What-the-hell?

Bender: Ok that's just stupid Fry. Silly String is for Hooker Paries not for everyday cooking! But while you're their can you-ahh! Damn flies!

Fry: Oh, I'll get it.

He grabs the swater and runs through the apartment swating at the fly. It's not until Bender dropps a glass that Fry realizes he upside-down on the ceiling!

Bender: Fry, get down from the ceiling right now!

Fry: Wait! This reminds me of something from the 20th century.

He runs to his room still on the ceiling and comes back on the floor after falling down with  a SPIDER-MAN comic.

Fry: See this Bender? This is Spider-Man, he was bitten by a radioactive spider and got these powers like me! Maybe I was bitten for a reason!

Bender: Blah, blah, blah no one cares. Time to eat!

Fry: But Bender, we could find his costume and steal it. You could help. Won't you?

Bender walks over to a drawer and pulls out his breaking-in-kit (seen in 300 Big Boys).

Bender pulls over his mask: Let's roll!

The two head out while Bender leaps over the buildings like in Less Than a Hero, as Fry practices his web-slingning and keeps slamming into billboards. They find a museum that has all of the comic book hero stuff in it. Bender opens the glass roof with a knife and Fry lowers them both in with his web. Bender finds the security system and deactivates it. They walk around until they find Spider-Man's original costume. Bender opens it up as Fry pulls the mask with the 1-way linceses. The two fly out in the night as Bender and the new Spider-Man. The next few scenes show Fry working in the day as a loser delievery boy and at night as Spidey (Like in th movie). One day while finishing a delievery Leela pulls Fry aside,

Leela: Fry, you seem very tired lately. Is something wrong?

Fry: I'm fine Leela. I guess it's just a reaction to the bite.

Leela staring down at the floor: Yeah, about that Fry, I'm sorry that I put you through all that pain. I feel bad.

Fry: It's alright Leela, I mean it's not your fault that I got hurt on MY part of the job. I mean it's not like I'm Spider-Man.

He pauses realizing Spider-Man was NOT Superman.

Leela: I guess not. But Spider-Man has really been coming out of his web lately. I-

The ship shakes as something rattles the ship. It's Space Pirates. They come aboard to take the "riches" on the ship. Bender has his arms up as they search him and Leela fights back kicking and punching with her martial art skills. Fry runs off to hide so Leela wouldn't see him, he rips his jacket and shirt off showing the spider symbol (like in the movie [again]). He comes back as Spider-Man.

Fry/Spider-Man: Hey! You pirates are waisting your time trying to rob this ship!

Leela: Spider-Man? Where did Fry go?

Fry/Spider-Man: You heard me get out of here before it gets ugly.

Pirate #2: And if we don't?

Scene shows the pirates floating into space with transmission fluids leaking and big dents all over their bodies.

Leela: Thanks. How did you know that we were in trouble?

Fry/Spider-Man: UH- I have my senses.

Leela: Well thanks. Uh you should go.

Fry/Spider-Man: Yeah.

He leaps on the ceiling and crawls off into the storage. Fry takes his costume off and returns to his normal look. He returns to the front of the ship.

Leela: Fry, where were you?

Fry stammering: Uh, I was going to go get something to help stop the pirates and I whammed my head. I just woke up.

Leela stares at him but returns to driving the ship. How long was Fry and Bender going to be able to keep his secret night life from the woman of his dreams?....
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #18 on: 06-08-2004 11:46 »
« Last Edit on: 06-08-2004 11:46 »

thanks for your post it was great space dal11 it inspired this part*CUT TO TRANTULON 2 [THE PLANET IN 300 BIG BOYS BUT INHABETED BY SMALLER SPIDERS]
THE P.E CREW LAND AND EXIT THE SHIP AND HEAD TOWARDS A GLASS DOME
CUT TO TRANTULON 2 GLASS DOME
THE CREW LOOK ON TO SEE A BIG SPIDER HOSTING A SCIENCE EXIBITION
BIG SPIDER: as you can see this new technology [POINTS TO LARGE LASER] will end starvation on this planet by attracting more space flys to our planet [SPIDERS CHEER] ZOOM UP ONTO LASER
A TINY SPIDER CRAWLS INTO THE BEAMS PATH
CUT TO GLASS DOME INSIDE
FRY SEES THE INVENTIONS
FRY: NO im am never going to learn agian
HE TRYS TO RUN BUT LEELA PULLS HIM BACK
FRY: oh man
LATER ON
LEELA IS LOOKING AT SOME THINGS WHEN FRY WALKS UP TO HER
FRY: leela about that whole oprea thing
LEELA: fry i have not changed my mind we will NEVER be more than freinds
FRY WALKS AWAY AND SIGHS THEN THE SPIDER BITES HIM
FRY: OW!
BENDER: meatbag
LEELA: fry
FRY FAINTS
CUT TO P.E HQ ZOIDBERGS OFFICE
FRY WAKES UP FEELING BETTER THEN HE HAS EVER FELT BEFORE EVREYBODY IS THERE
ZOIDBERG: ahh his awake well i know vhat to do now
ZOIDBERG REACHES FOR A BLADE AND GETS READY TO CUT FRYS ARM OFF
FRY: AHHH
FRY HOLDS ZOIDBERGS ARM AWAY WITH AMAZING STRENGTH ZOIDBERG STUMBLES
ZOIDBERG GETS THAT FIN ON HIS HEAD MAKING HIM STRONGER
FRY DODGES EVREY ONE OF ZOIDBERGS CLAWS AND SENDS HIM FLYING INTO THE WALL WITH 1 PUNCH
THE CREW STARE AT HIM IN AMAZEMENT
FRY: err gotta go
HE RUSHES OUT OF THE ROOM
CUT TO FRY AND BENDERS APARTMENT NIGHT
FRY IS PACEING IN HIS ROOM WHEN A WEB LIKE FLUID SHOOTSOUT OF HIS WRIST PULLING A CUPOARD INTO HIS DIRECTION
FRY: AHHHH
FRY DOES A BACK FLIP AND STICKS TO A WALL
FRY: I get it now i am spider man
BENDER STANDS IN THE DOOR HAVING SEEN THE WHOLE THING
FRY: bender i need the costume
NOTE SEE MY LAST POST FOR THAT SCENE CLIPS OF FRY SAVING MANY PEOPLE ARE SHOWN
CLIPS OF FRY SAVING MANY PEOPLE ARE SHOWN
CUT TO:NNYC STREETS DAY
FRY WALKS DOWN THE STREET WHEN HIS SPIDER SENSE GOES OFF HE SEES LEELA BEING MUGGED SHE TAKES A FEW OF THEM DOWN BUT ONE HAS A GUN ON HER FRY RUNS INTO A ALLEY RIPS OFF HIS SHIRT [HE HAS THE SPIDER MAN CLOTHES ON]
THEN HE SWINGS IN KNOCKING DOWN ALL THE MUGGERS AND WEBBING THEM UP
FRY/SPIDER MAN: are you okay ?
LEELA: fine thanks who are you really
FRY/SPIDER MAN: I can't say
SHE LIFTS UP PART OF HIS MASK AND KISSES HIM
HE SWINGS OF SHOCKED LEELA WATCHES HIM WITH A SMILE.

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Spacedal11

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« Reply #19 on: 06-08-2004 18:39 »
« Last Edit on: 06-08-2004 18:39 »

That's the shorter version. But I like it! I guess I should of haved that mugging part in mine. I can go back and edit it later. Why am I the only one here who likes this idea?
Venus

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« Reply #20 on: 06-08-2004 19:03 »

Because the odds of it turning into a total ripoff of the movie are high.
Spacedal11

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« Reply #21 on: 06-08-2004 19:14 »

Yeah but it's a fan fic NOT a movie. We can do whatever we want with it.
Venus

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« Reply #22 on: 06-08-2004 19:19 »

If he calls himself Spiderman, wears the official Spiderman costume and pretty much parallels the plot in the movie, to the extent of using scenes from the movie then it's a rip. I might as well just go watch the movie. Parodies are great, rehashes are not.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #23 on: 06-08-2004 19:21 »

So, haven't you seen T.V. shows that rip off movies too? I mean we can do some different things to make it our own. It's not a rip off cause it's not offically a movie and not everyone will read it.
Venus

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« Reply #24 on: 06-08-2004 19:26 »

...It doesn't matter that it's not a movie. Or that not everyone will read it. A rip off is something that follows another source to closely. It really doesn't matter the format. A movie can rip off a book, a comic can rip off a movie. It's about the plot not the way the plot is delivered.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #25 on: 06-08-2004 19:34 »

Ok fine. It doesn't really matter to me. I've met lots of people who have ripped off movies before and this won't be the last! Besides I love Spider-Man so I don't care.
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #26 on: 06-09-2004 11:02 »

thanks for trying to defend me spacedal11 im going to do the fan fiction no matter what anybody says if you do not like the idea i respect that but must you tell me any way venus does have a good point and im taking any suggestions for names P.S thanks for your support spacedal11 because of you im defenitly doing it
Ozor Mox

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« Reply #27 on: 06-09-2004 12:11 »

The full stop

It sounds interesting, but I won't read it without any punctuation. I'll get a headache!  no no

Spacedal11

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« Reply #28 on: 06-09-2004 12:17 »

 
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Originally posted by bendersbud3000:
thanks for trying to defend me spacedal11 im going to do the fan fiction no matter what anybody says if you do not like the idea i respect that but must you tell me any way venus does have a good point and im taking any suggestions for names P.S thanks for your support spacedal11 because of you im defenitly doing it

Aw shucks! That's so sweet, no one has ever done anything beacause of me. Except this one friend of mine who did a sculpture based on something I wrote for her dead dog. Good luck man!~  big grin  tongue  smile  roll eyes
P.S. Still am I the only one who wants this to be a fan fic?
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #29 on: 06-10-2004 14:03 »

im also writing something else that is NOT a "rip off" i have not thought of a title yet but  a summary about it is the prof makes a time machine and with fry fealing depresed about leelas regection after the oprea fry wants to return to his own time but when leela trys to stop him at the last minite the crew along with mom and zapp brannigan are transported to the wild west before the crew can get back to there own time they must stop mom and zapp brannigan from destroying the universe! the crew have to become cowboys and girls and cross the wild west to find were zapp brannigan and mom are. P.S this will not be a rip off of any western film     
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #30 on: 06-10-2004 14:29 »

Hmm, sounds interesting. Again, I would be honored to read it.
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #31 on: 06-12-2004 13:28 »

OK this is my other idea it starts off with fry learning that he has magical powers(because he is the mighty one) and the lord of the brains attacks earth fry destroys him easily but fry starts to act strangely and he finally snaps killing most of the nibblonian elders and by doing so turing himself evil can the crew and nibbler find a way to save fry or is he doomed to darkness they must find an answer quickly as fry wants to destroy the thing that has caused him so much pain...leela and his destroying evreything in his way but to stop him they must find out what turned him. any way heres a part
Yes i got a few ideas from charmed.
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #32 on: 06-12-2004 20:48 »

I like. You have good ideas bendersbud3000. I would like to read all of them, specially the Spider-Fry one.
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #33 on: 06-13-2004 07:47 »

thank you
zomit

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« Reply #34 on: 06-13-2004 10:25 »
« Last Edit on: 06-13-2004 10:25 »

Yeah, these are some really cool ideas bendersbud3000. I can't wait to see how the stories turn out.   big grin
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #35 on: 06-13-2004 14:02 »

thanks zomit
Spacedal11

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« Reply #36 on: 06-15-2004 19:44 »

We're just all one big fan fiction family. Bendersbud3000, put your soon-to-be fanfics on my site! www.freewebs.com/spacedal101 

I'm looking forward to it!
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #37 on: 06-16-2004 11:11 »

will do spacedal11 okay I got another idea after playing the great halo on pc ive thought of this (set after TDHAIPT) after leela has an affair with chaz again fry leaves planet express a year later zapp brannigan is kicked out of D.O.O.P by a mysteroius man in the master cheif from halos costume. finally the universe is protected by this man and his army and when the P.E gang make a delivery to the new D.O.O.P station leela (whom has been depressed ever since fry left) is delighted to meet such a hero as are the rest of the crew even bender but during the delivery the man is especily cruel to leela when she confronts him he snaps and lifts up his visor to reveil frys face leela is shocked as are the crew then leela makes a desprate attempt to remind fry of his humanity and the crew a drafted into war with the covenant under frys command meanwhile kif must adjust to frys respect to him while zapp must find a job.
   
Spacedal11

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« Reply #38 on: 06-16-2004 23:24 »

You have like some of the best ideas. I'm not just saying this to get on someones good side I mean it. Please I'd be honored if you'd post it on American Fry. Thanks!
bendersbud3000

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« Reply #39 on: 06-17-2004 10:55 »

sure will do
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