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TheLesbianLeela
Liquid Emperor
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Without meaning to sound mean, but I have to agree with Cpt Lib. Your idea to make a parody of a movie is good, but you shouldn't "borrow" too much. You will need unexpected changes in the storyline ... that even people who saw that movie (or have read the comic series) still can feel a thrill and will be surprised. Also, knowing Fry - he would be boring as a plain brave hero. Remember how he acted being Cpt Yesterday. That's anyway a good idea: Watch that episode again or have a look at the episode capsules and framegrabs on Futurama sites. For example CGEF is a site full of good informations. So far for today. In case I have more ideas I'll post them tomorrow.
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EvilLunch
Professor
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Would that make Zoidy Robin? And I'm sure Leela could overcome the colour yellow.. Heheh, it's cute...
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bendersbud3000
Delivery Boy
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« Reply #10 on: 06-06-2004 09:41 »
« Last Edit on: 06-06-2004 09:41 »
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thanks to evreyone whos posted PLEASE do not call me lazy and such. The thread is for ideas and constructive critisim ONLY heres a spolier for the fic *CUT TO NNY STREETS: FRY SWINGS DOWN ONTO THE PAVEMENT FRY: looks like another bank robbery FRY SEES ZAPP BLOWING THE BANKS VAULT UP FRY AND ZAPP STARE AT EACH OTHER FOR A MOMENT FRY: SCREW THIS ! HE SWINGS AWAY AND KICKS ZAPP IN THE FACE RIPPING SOME OF HIS MASK ZAPP: OUCH! this velour dosent come cheap you know. FRY: sorry. * sorry if ANYBODY has been offended by this post keep your ideas coming bearing in mind what i said before thank you very much spacedale11 winna the lesbian leela evil lunch and mOle as for evreyone else (hiss) the fic goes ahead as planned also the fic only has the basic parts of spider man rest assured it will not turn out the way the film does after all he is fry
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Guineapig Trick
Professor
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I didn't think anyone was being harsh, and also, I would like to point out that winna said that he was lazy, not you. No one is being harsh, and if you think theyre harsh, then get the hell off of PEEL because, sometimes, just sometimes, we are harsh. Tjese are ideas, not harshness. Also, I think Spiderfry has already been done. Also, I have a shitload of free time, so if you want I can illustrate some of your people for you.
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bendersbud3000
Delivery Boy
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« Reply #13 on: 06-07-2004 10:56 »
« Last Edit on: 06-07-2004 10:56 »
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thanks evreybody whos posted p.s it was not winna that called me lazy it was digital dragon thanks for the offer guineapig trick id like to see some drawings also thanks winna for that nice peice of fan art as ive said before im gonna do it wether some people like it or not p.p.s if you do not like this fic please stop posting here and simply dont read it i want some ideas and CONSTRUCTIVE critisim which means please do not criticise me without giving an idea for improvment thank you. * *CUT TO COSTUME SHOP DOWNTOWN FRY AND BENDER HAVE BROKE INTO THE SHOP FRY: thanks for helping me get the spider man costume bender BENDER: dont worry skintube I havent burgeled in a loooooong time (STARING OF INTO SPACE) Ive missed the thril of the alarm the cops shouting STOP! but more importantly ive missed the smell of freshly stolen money (SIGHS) FRY: Bender dont tell anyone im spiderman okay BENDER: but ive already printed the t shirts (LIFTS UP A SHIRT WITH A FINGER POINTING TO THE RIGHT SAYING "IM WITH SPIDER MAN" ) CUT TO SHOP LATER AT NIGHT FRY HAS THE TRADITINOL SPIDER MAN COSTUME ON FRY: Thanks for helping me get this costume bender FRY NOTICES BENDER IS GONE FRY: bender BENDER BURSTS IN FROM THE ROOM NEXT DOOR HE IS WEARING THE BATMAN COSTUME BUT INSTEAD OF A BAT ON HIS CHEST HE HAS A B BENDER(SINGING):Bender nana nana nana nana nana nana nana nana Bender nana nana nana nana BENDER! FRY JUST STARES AT HIM BENDER: well i tried.
* crap I know but im doing it any way thanks to winna whos peice of fan art inspired this piece
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Guineapig Trick
Professor
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I have a thread with my art its called ' I was bored" look it up, thats my art and i just thought of this to go with me other post: you cant spell futurama without FU
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Spacedal11
Space Pope
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Here is something:
Leela: Ok Fry now just breath!
Fry is panting because the bite is very poisonious and he is fainting out.
Fry: *Moans*
Bender: Is Fry alright?
Leela: I don't know, his breathing rate is low and he's losing blood presure.
Bender: Oh...well I get first dibs to sell his crap when he craps out.
Leela: Bender! Keep the auto-piolet busy and try to get us home as fast as we can!
Bender: Fine!
Fry: Lee...la?
Leela: Fry, are you ok? Fry!?
Fry passes out still breathing but is like in a short coma while Leela keeps him company. Scene shows Zoidberg and Farnsworth working on him, making sure he'll be alright while Leela and the rest of the crew watches through the window. Both Zoidberg and the Professer walk out.
Leela: Is Fry alright?
Farnsworth: Surprisingly yes!
Everyone sighs.
Farnsworth: But he did suffer some major blood loss so his memory might be a slight bit fuzzy at first. So don't alarm him.
Everyone walks back in while Fry wakes up in the bed. (Don't ask how that got there it just is.) Fry's eyes merely open.
Fry: *moans*
Zoidberg: Hello Fry, we come help you. Do you member us?
Fry: uh...I want only one person at a time.
Farnsworth: Who my ignorint uncle? Who?
Fry: *groans* L-Lee...la.
The crew nodds as they all walk out of the room leaving only Leela. They all feel better that Fry remembers someone.
Leela: Why me?
Fry: I...have...to...say..somethin g.
Leela: Yes?
Fry: I...I...feel...different Leela. Like that bite changed me. *moans in pain*
Leela: Uh-sure Fry. I don't want you to be in pain anymore so I'm gonna leave you to rest ok?
Fry: F-fine. But have I told you that I love you?
Leela stares at Fry in guilt: Yeah, you did. An-and thank you.
She leans over and pecks him on the cheek trying not to hurt him. He doesn't (or tries not to) moan.
The next day...
Fry is feeling better, his blood presure and breathing has raised backed to normal and he is walking and talking and doing everything like before. He just doesn't remember talking to Leela the day before. Farnsworth tells Fry to take some days off and to stay home. One night while at Robot Arms Apt., Fry discovers something very weird.
Bender: Glad your feeling better meatbag! I could use a hand reaching that crappy can opener.
Fry walks over to the can opener and grabs it. He hands it to Bender but it doesn't let go. They both try to pull it out of his hand,
Bender: Let go Fry!
Fry: I can't!
Finally it's jerked out of his hand as a long stick web-like substence string is attached to his palm and the opener.
Fry: What-the-hell?
Bender: Ok that's just stupid Fry. Silly String is for Hooker Paries not for everyday cooking! But while you're their can you-ahh! Damn flies!
Fry: Oh, I'll get it.
He grabs the swater and runs through the apartment swating at the fly. It's not until Bender dropps a glass that Fry realizes he upside-down on the ceiling!
Bender: Fry, get down from the ceiling right now!
Fry: Wait! This reminds me of something from the 20th century.
He runs to his room still on the ceiling and comes back on the floor after falling down with a SPIDER-MAN comic.
Fry: See this Bender? This is Spider-Man, he was bitten by a radioactive spider and got these powers like me! Maybe I was bitten for a reason!
Bender: Blah, blah, blah no one cares. Time to eat!
Fry: But Bender, we could find his costume and steal it. You could help. Won't you?
Bender walks over to a drawer and pulls out his breaking-in-kit (seen in 300 Big Boys).
Bender pulls over his mask: Let's roll!
The two head out while Bender leaps over the buildings like in Less Than a Hero, as Fry practices his web-slingning and keeps slamming into billboards. They find a museum that has all of the comic book hero stuff in it. Bender opens the glass roof with a knife and Fry lowers them both in with his web. Bender finds the security system and deactivates it. They walk around until they find Spider-Man's original costume. Bender opens it up as Fry pulls the mask with the 1-way linceses. The two fly out in the night as Bender and the new Spider-Man. The next few scenes show Fry working in the day as a loser delievery boy and at night as Spidey (Like in th movie). One day while finishing a delievery Leela pulls Fry aside,
Leela: Fry, you seem very tired lately. Is something wrong?
Fry: I'm fine Leela. I guess it's just a reaction to the bite.
Leela staring down at the floor: Yeah, about that Fry, I'm sorry that I put you through all that pain. I feel bad.
Fry: It's alright Leela, I mean it's not your fault that I got hurt on MY part of the job. I mean it's not like I'm Spider-Man.
He pauses realizing Spider-Man was NOT Superman.
Leela: I guess not. But Spider-Man has really been coming out of his web lately. I-
The ship shakes as something rattles the ship. It's Space Pirates. They come aboard to take the "riches" on the ship. Bender has his arms up as they search him and Leela fights back kicking and punching with her martial art skills. Fry runs off to hide so Leela wouldn't see him, he rips his jacket and shirt off showing the spider symbol (like in the movie [again]). He comes back as Spider-Man.
Fry/Spider-Man: Hey! You pirates are waisting your time trying to rob this ship!
Leela: Spider-Man? Where did Fry go?
Fry/Spider-Man: You heard me get out of here before it gets ugly.
Pirate #2: And if we don't?
Scene shows the pirates floating into space with transmission fluids leaking and big dents all over their bodies.
Leela: Thanks. How did you know that we were in trouble?
Fry/Spider-Man: UH- I have my senses.
Leela: Well thanks. Uh you should go.
Fry/Spider-Man: Yeah.
He leaps on the ceiling and crawls off into the storage. Fry takes his costume off and returns to his normal look. He returns to the front of the ship.
Leela: Fry, where were you?
Fry stammering: Uh, I was going to go get something to help stop the pirates and I whammed my head. I just woke up.
Leela stares at him but returns to driving the ship. How long was Fry and Bender going to be able to keep his secret night life from the woman of his dreams?....
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bendersbud3000
Delivery Boy
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OK this is my other idea it starts off with fry learning that he has magical powers(because he is the mighty one) and the lord of the brains attacks earth fry destroys him easily but fry starts to act strangely and he finally snaps killing most of the nibblonian elders and by doing so turing himself evil can the crew and nibbler find a way to save fry or is he doomed to darkness they must find an answer quickly as fry wants to destroy the thing that has caused him so much pain...leela and his destroying evreything in his way but to stop him they must find out what turned him. any way heres a part *CUT TO P.E H.Q MEETING ROOM THE P.E GANG AND NIBBLER ARE AT THE TABLE WHEN A NIBBLONIAN ELDER APPERES NIBBLER: lord nibble snossh what happenes NIBBLE SNOSSH TURNS TO LEELA AND THROWS A FIRE BALL AT HERE LEAVING HER UNCONCOUIS NIBBLER LOOKS ON IN HORROR AS THE ELDER MORPHS INTO FRY FRY: A THOUGHT YOU WERE SMARTER NIBBLONIAN ! FRY FLICKS HIS HAND SENDING NIBBLER CRASHING OVER TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE ROOM HE MOTIONS HIS HAND AT LEELA AS SHE DISSAPERS IN FLAMES FRY SMILES AND DOES THE SAME NIBBLER GETS UP NIBBLER: we must save him soon or we will lose him forever. * Yes i got a few ideas from charmed.
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