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Shaucker

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« Reply #80 on: 06-14-2004 21:13 »
« Last Edit on: 06-14-2004 21:13 »

God, I never liked that musical...but it is more worshippable than Cats...

When we last left off:

 
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The assembled townspeople stared after the running cyclops, motionless. They slowly make way over to the Turangas. Raoul comforts them with his three arms, softly suggesting it was time to talk to Leela.

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It was still in Mutant Town, save for the sobbing of one woman and the futile attempts by her husband to comfort her. The whole afternoon had been a jolt back to past events that everyone tried to forget.
    When a mutant child is taken by the traders, there is nothing anyone can do. The child is declared dead, processions are held, and the parents go into mourning.
    Morris and Munda had been through the loss of a child to sub-sewer slave owners. Their first daughter had been dead to them for years; even attempted to be replaced by another.
   They had lost their other child too, a twist in kismet. She had been to perfect, too beautiful to be with them.
  Leela had only met her parents recently in her lifetime. And it had been the happiest moment of her life.
Morris and Munda had cause for rejoicing, too. After losing both children, one had been given back. It was enough to rejuvinate any waning beliefs in a god, if one believed in one.
  But now, with their other daughter back, the one that died rather than escaped, they didn't know what to do.
They just didn't know...

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(a quiet TOTPD)
EvilLunch

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« Reply #81 on: 06-14-2004 21:57 »

The two embraced in the blackness of the uncaring streets, the blackness of their inconsolable grief. And yet, shining down upon them, there was a sort of light. In that pit of despair, there was one small glimmer of hope.
One approached, heels clicking on the cold pavement, muffled splashes when they came into contact with any one of the many dark and sticky puddles that dotted the ground. She paused, shoulders straightening, a few yards from the two. A sort of anglerfish in the blackest sea, she offered up that hope to the little fishies hiding in the trenches.
"My dears.." Came that voice; a razor wrapped in velvet; one blink.. and another, and another, all in different places. "It is nice to see you. It looks as though you need my help again."
Shaucker

Professor
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« Reply #82 on: 06-14-2004 22:09 »

ooooooooh...I LIKE that..."razor wrapped in velvet"
EvilLunch

Professor
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« Reply #83 on: 06-15-2004 00:39 »

Thank you!  big grin
TheLesbianLeela

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #84 on: 06-15-2004 14:07 »

 
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Came that voice; a razor wrapped in velvet; one blink.. and another, and another, all in different places.
I like it  smile

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So... I think now it's time that Leela will appear and ... *realizes that she claimed to play Leela as well and did introduce her to the story already on the previous page*

From the previous page:
 
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Slowly she goes to her parents, awaiting answers to her questions.
Shaucker

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« Reply #85 on: 06-15-2004 14:54 »

Leela can be free domain for now, I guess...so everyone can use her and Fry in the story, I guess...

(happily watching Less Than Hero)
TheLesbianLeela

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #86 on: 06-16-2004 05:07 »

 
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Originally posted by Shaucker:
Leela can be free domain for now, I guess...so everyone can use her and Fry in the story, I guess...
That's a very good idea.  smile
Shaucker

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« Reply #87 on: 06-16-2004 12:51 »

Hooray, I'm helping!
Guineapig Trick

Professor
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« Reply #88 on: 06-17-2004 18:37 »
« Last Edit on: 06-17-2004 18:37 »

so what is this a funeral
lighten it up some
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Fry not knowing why leela left in such a hurry follwed her to the deepest darkest crevice of the sewers, seeing Leela in the arms of another infuriated him. Fry went down not knowing that it was infact Leela's mother she was hugging, anrily. Fry stopped upon a mutant no uglier than a mutant on the ground crying mumbling something about help and used condoms.

Nitsuj: (weakly) Help me.

Fry: Im buisy at the moment, aw what the hell.

Fry helped the sub-mutant up, looked him over and then he asked:

Fry: I think Ive seen you somewhere before, yeah, Im sure, did you do a guest spot on The Texas chainsaw massacre?

Nitsuj: No, but ever since I was a kid, Ive wanted to be in movies, or atleast an RP on some message board.

both characters look at camera, then look away.


Fry: Thats a great dream but, I really must be going, I think my girl is cheating on me.

Nitsuj looks at him for a sec.

Fry: Ok, ok, I just stalk her and I work with her, what is this judge mathis!

Nitsuj: Youre not going anywhere, Ahe, Pythagorus, seize him!

They grab Fry and throw him into a room; the door has a sign with the words laundry scratched out and now says brig.

Leela sees fry through a window, gets out of her mother's arms, and goes to see whats happening.

Leela: cant you wait 5 minutes before I have to rescue you again?

Fry: Sorry this jerk was trying to take over the sewers.

Leela breaks him out, tells him that she has to go, fry begging finally convinces her to let him go, for the pure fact that she has no idea whats through that toilet. They kiss, just for a few seconds, hold their breath and take a dive.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #89 on: 06-17-2004 19:17 »

i am so confused. At what point did Leela meet her sister? I don't remember reading that segment. It seems to cut from Leela about to be told about her sister to leela hugging her sister with no in-between part to tell us how they got there.
Shaucker

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« Reply #90 on: 06-17-2004 20:01 »

Venus, you are quite right.

GPT, the fuck? Stay in continuity!
Guineapig Trick

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« Reply #91 on: 06-17-2004 20:44 »
« Last Edit on: 06-17-2004 20:44 »

It sounds like thats what happened in Evil Lunch's post, correct me if Im wrong.

"The two embraced in the blackness "
"One approached"-- showing there are 2

aw shit, goddam i just realized leela and one of her parents hugging and 1 of them is her parent, shit, god im dumb, lemme fix.
EvilLunch

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« Reply #92 on: 06-18-2004 00:57 »

I believe it was that Morris and Munda were hugging, and my character, Kobold, approached. You might like to read the topic from the beginning, Mister Trick.
Guineapig Trick

Professor
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« Reply #93 on: 06-18-2004 16:09 »

Yall is too vague, i mean you put loads of detail but, one approached and the 2 embraced doesnt help me.
EvilLunch

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« Reply #94 on: 06-19-2004 17:38 »

Reading it from the beginning will help e.e;; Shaucker said before that she was playing Morris and Munda, and I said before who my character was. Now, I'd like to keep this going, but I can't go again until Shaucker does, so..
Shaucker

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« Reply #95 on: 06-19-2004 18:52 »
« Last Edit on: 06-19-2004 18:52 »

Really? Am I that crucial?   smile Fiiine, if Lunchie is gonna go all "blame-Rebecca" on me, I'll go again   big grin i love you EvilLunch, really

EDIT: Daniela has just informed that she, in all her greatness, has set up a Mutant Town accout at FSAC. Go submit things, all of you.
EvilLunch

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« Reply #96 on: 06-20-2004 00:49 »

Shaucker, as I mentioned in my thread, I'll be leaving for a week this Wednesday.. So I hope to get in one more RP post here before then.. If I can continue abroad, I will, but it's no guarantee. Things were slow moving here anyway ^^;; But I'm afraid I might have to withdraw for a lil bit.
Guineapig Trick

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« Reply #97 on: 06-20-2004 00:56 »

 
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orriginally posted by EL:
abroad
or two.
NO in all seriousness, I did read it, but am easily confused, and just plain slow.
EvilLunch

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« Reply #98 on: 06-20-2004 01:02 »

Continue a broad or two? Doesn't even make sense. It's STUDY abroad or two. Anyway..
M0le

Space Pope
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« Reply #99 on: 06-21-2004 06:53 »

Well, I've drawn a picture of my character, the mutant doctor. I'll join in when the story gets rolling a bit more, it would be a bit strange for a her to come in for no real reason.
Shaucker

Professor
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« Reply #100 on: 06-21-2004 09:49 »

"In my perfessional opinion, as an ear, ear, ear, nose, and throat doctor..."

Ha! You really can pick 'em!
Guineapig Trick

Professor
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« Reply #101 on: 06-21-2004 10:44 »

I wish I could write some more right now but Im in summer school, so I dont have the time.
Shaucker

Professor
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« Reply #102 on: 07-01-2004 15:18 »

Hey all, thought this needed a bump.
I'm on vacation, burning through the skin on my upper body in the Keys, and can't really take the time to post much till I get back. But I damn well won't let this thread die...
EvilLunch

Professor
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« Reply #103 on: 07-01-2004 20:59 »

Where should we go with this?
Black_Rose

Crustacean
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« Reply #104 on: 07-11-2004 02:51 »

It is good make more!
Quolnok

Starship Captain
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« Reply #105 on: 07-11-2004 06:05 »

Just wondering something...
Since when are Leela's parents names "Turanga Munda" & "Turanga Morris"? Wouldn't they be "Munda Leela" and "Morris Leela" and also didn't the orphanarium name Leela making her name completely different to those of her parents?

I admit I haven't seen the episodes with her parents in a while and even then only once or twice, but that's how I thought it was...
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #106 on: 07-11-2004 06:47 »

nope. They left Leela with a "hello my name is" sticker on the front of her jumper. So she was named by her parents and not the orphanarium. And for mutants the family name comes first so their names are Turanga Morris, Turanga Munda, and Turanga Leela.
Quolnok

Starship Captain
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« Reply #107 on: 07-11-2004 07:35 »

Ah, well like I said I haven't seen those episodes in a while...

"The combustion part is fine,
it's the spontaneity that I have a problem with."
Shaucker

Professor
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« Reply #108 on: 07-11-2004 17:04 »

Hah...I guess it is my sworn duty to continue, then  smile
Lemme take the time to say that all spelling and continuity errors are due to my being half asleep.
WHEN WE LAST LEFT OFF: Leela has just started the trek to her parents (who are now alone with Miss Kobold)

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The sewers were dark, and moist in a hot way. Leela and Fry (who had opted to join her) slowly made way through the mutant streets. The gazes of the crowds around them varied from shock ("What's Leela doing here NOW?" )to pity ("Oh, the poor girl. She's got a lot to deal with right now" ).
    The looks bothered Fry. Usually, he was the type not to notice anything, but Leela seemed deaf and blind to everything around her. All she wanted was to find her mother and father.
   Their brisk walking turned to running, and Fry could hear Leela becoming hysterical as they got closer to the square of Mutant town. Goddamn, how he wished he had the ability to comfort her at a moment like this. Leela had slowed down, wheezing, and began to play with the end of her ponytail- a sure sign she was scared.
     They had almost made it to the shadowed square when a cloaked figure jumped out and held Leela against a wall, a knife at her throat...

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You have three guesses who. First two don't count  big grin
TheLesbianLeela

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #109 on: 07-11-2004 17:59 »

 
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Originally posted by Shaucker:
They had almost made it to the shadowed square when a cloaked figure jumped out and held Leela against a wall, a knife at her throat...

You have three guesses who. First two don't count   big grin
Hmmm, cloak, knife ... Kali?

Bender: "Am I right? What did I won? Cash?"

The story is going on nice and in case that it is Kali - I'm somehow sure about that - I really have to think what I should write as a next part.

Meanwhile, I have a question. In my opinion there are a lot logical brakes in our story. For example GuineaPig's subsewer mutant was introduced and then it is as if he never appeared ... Not sure why, but it looks like.
Fry is there too? Hmm, since it is a good idea I'll change the part where I told about Leela's way down to the sewers ...
Also I think I do remember that I did wrote how Leela did arrive and did fight against one of this imperialistic sub sewer guys. Probably you just have forgotten that part, ... I was just wondering.
(Then again I'm already tired and maybe just confused  big grin)
Shaucker

Professor
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« Reply #110 on: 07-12-2004 08:45 »

First,
Kali is quite correct. I almost meant that ot be obvious.

Second,
I just read back, and yeah, quite a lot of gaping holes. We'll have to fix that. I say, get rid of Tricky's stuff. It's mean, but he's not here to defend himself.

Third,
Fry is present because Fry always seems to be present. Plus, I like to think that the mutant world is a link from the present to his past. And he likes that.

Fourth,
I'm very, very tired. I rarely can make sense of anything I've said.
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