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ooy

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« on: 05-03-2004 16:43 »
« Last Edit on: 05-03-2004 16:43 »

in Xmas, we at PEEL had this thread by poke_me_and_die, it had this fanfic which i made. and thiss is the  storyboardhttp://img8.imageshack.us/img8/7728/screenplay1.jpg   http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8521/screenplay2.jpg   http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1759/screenplay3.jpg   http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/9038/screenplay4.jpg   http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1839/screenplay7.jpg   http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2669/screenplay8.jpg 
 

more on the way
Dr. Morberg

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« Reply #1 on: 05-03-2004 17:18 »

Those are huge, could you resize them? There's not really enough there to tell if the story's good, and the pictures are... okay. But overall, good job.
ooy

Professor
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« Reply #2 on: 05-03-2004 17:24 »

i cammot resize them, sorry. and i have to upload more. and as for pictures, they arequick
Dr. Morberg

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« Reply #3 on: 05-03-2004 17:43 »

Why can't you resize them? Even if you don't have a good program, you can copy them on to paint and shrink them. Also, the third storyboard is missing, you might want to fix that.
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #4 on: 05-03-2004 22:26 »

If you can't resize them, then link them.
ooy

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« Reply #5 on: 05-03-2004 22:35 »
« Last Edit on: 05-03-2004 22:35 »

neither can i link to them. i'm using imageshack. could anyone else link them?
and paint makes them loose detail when shrunken. i've learnt this the hard way.
Dr. Morberg

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« Reply #6 on: 05-03-2004 22:41 »

But if you shrink it proportionatly, it should be okay, it's not like there's an incredible amount of detail there.
David A

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« Reply #7 on: 05-03-2004 23:07 »

 
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Originally posted by ooy:
neither can i link to them. i'm using imageshack. could anyone else link them?

You can link to imageshack, ooy.

 http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/7728/screenplay1.jpg
 http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8521/screenplay2.jpg
 http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1759/screenplay3.jpg
 http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/9038/screenplay4.jpg
 http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1839/screenplay7.jpg
 http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2669/screenplay8.jpg

Also, you might want to give credit where credit is due.
ooy

Professor
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« Reply #8 on: 05-04-2004 02:38 »

sorry david A, you had the idea, but i made the fanfic
David A

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« Reply #9 on: 05-04-2004 03:31 »

 
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Originally posted by ooy:
sorry david A, you had the idea, but i made the fanfic

From what I've seen, your fanfic is almost exactly word for word what I had written, but whatever.

The person to whom you should really be giving credit is Naoko Takeuchi, considering that the whole idea is just episode 60 of Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon with the characters replaced by the cast of Futurama.

Speak softly. Drive a Sherman tank.
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #10 on: 05-04-2004 18:58 »

My mama always told me, if you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all.

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That will be all.
ooy

Professor
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« Reply #11 on: 05-04-2004 21:27 »

any kind of feedback is appriciated Kryten.
newhook_1

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« Reply #12 on: 05-04-2004 21:38 »
« Last Edit on: 05-04-2004 21:38 »

Don't take this personally ooy, but it looks almost like you quickly cobbled the drawings together with a ball point pen. You need to take your time when drawing, make sure everything is in purportion, and everything is lined up properly.

If David A came up with the orginal idea, you really ought to give him credit even if he didn't write the fic itself.
ooy

Professor
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« Reply #13 on: 05-04-2004 21:40 »

i did do them with a ballpoint
newhook_1

Urban Legend
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« Reply #14 on: 05-04-2004 21:43 »

That's what I'm saying, you should use a pencil to draw your pictures, and a black felt tip or fountain pen to outline them afterwords. You'll still get nice dark outlines, but you can fix any mistakes.
leelaholic

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« Reply #15 on: 05-04-2004 21:48 »

Yeah, fleshing out the characters first will really help your stuff look its best.  <IMG SRC="http://peel.gotfuturama.com/ubb/smile.gif">
ooy

Professor
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« Reply #16 on: 05-04-2004 23:17 »

ok, that sounds good (note: this is only a storyboad) but using a biro is my style rushed ect. my fan comics prove it.
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