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Dr. Morberg

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« on: 04-30-2004 17:33 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2004 00:00 »

It seems that so many people are starting art threads these days, so I thought why not jump on the bandwagon. My art doesn't can't compare to EL's or Coilette's or those other amazinng artists out there, so I'll post my fanfic/ideas here too. I'll be uploading some drawings later. In the meantime, here's the first part of my fanfic, tentatively titled "Untitled Fanfic"

SCENE: The PE Television room. Fry and Bender are sitting on the couch, spread out to take up the entire couch. Leela is standing nearby, glaring at the couch, irritated that Fry and Bender wonít let her sit]

(The professor walks in)

Professor: Good news everyone! Iíve invented a device that allows us to deliver packages across the internet. Itís incredibly dangerous, and it very possibly will cause a huge explosion.

Fry: So youíre going to test it first?

Professor: Oh my yes. Incidentally, I need you all to come into my lab. I have something to show you... (He walks out of the room)

[SCENE: In the professorís work area. We see only Fry, Leela, and Bender. The professor is talking off-screen]

Professor: This thick glass dome will protect us in the event of an explosion.

[The view zooms out to reveal the professor talking to Hermes and Amy. Fry, Leela, and Bender are inside the glass dome, looking angry]

Professor: Now normally when you enter the internet, you wear these. (He holds up the virtual reality internet things.) But with my new invention, those wonít be necessary anymore. (He tosses them in a nearby trash can. A light starts flashing and there is a short, but loud, beep. Zoidberg runs in the room)

Zoidberg: Lunchtime! Ahhh, professor, you wonít be needing this fancy equipment anymore, I trust?

Hermes: Get a job, you mooching lobster!

Zoidberg: Iím a doctor.

Hermes: When was the last time you saved someoneís life?

Zoidberg: I killed a patient yesterday.

Hermes: Go home! Oh wait, you donít have a home! (mean laugh)

(Zoidberg starts crying)

Professor: Stop it you two! We have to test my invention. As I was saying, this machine uploads you into the internet as digital information. Then, you can deliver the package by going to the central mainframe of the internet and uploading yourself onto their computer. The button on your packs will allow you to deliver the package as well as leave the internet.

Leela: This seems unnecessary. Couldnít we just deliver the package with the ship just as fast?

Professor: No, this is marginally faster!

Leela: Well as long as itís safe.

Professor: I have tested it on some lab mice and a monkey.

Bender: How are they?
Professor: Iíll tell you when I find all the pieces.

Bender: Iíll kill you old man!

Professor: Oh yes, yes. Now to start the machine.

Fry: I donít feel that this is sa- (the professor presses the button on the controls.

(There is a bright light, and a loud explosion. An arm hits the side of the dome, and Professor, Amy, and Hermes flinch. The smoke clears, and the professor opens a door in the side of the dome. He walks in and picks up a monkey arm.)

Professor: Ah, here it is. The last piece. (He walks over to a bin that contains monkey body parts that look strangely like Guentherís. He drops the arm in.)
EvilLunch

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« Reply #1 on: 04-30-2004 19:15 »

It involves Zoidberg crying and a dead Guenter, therefore A+. Very nicely written!
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #2 on: 04-30-2004 20:33 »
« Last Edit on: 04-30-2004 20:33 »

Thanks EvilLunch.

Here's one I did in history class. If he looks a little out of proportion it's because I didn't have anything to look at while I was drawing, and I hadn't watched a Roberto episode in a long time:



Here's one which is clearly inspired by AOI 1. I didn't want to clutter it up too much so there aren't too many buildings. I was kind of experimenting with shading.



What do you think? I'm only 14, so there's room for improvement.
Gilby

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« Reply #3 on: 04-30-2004 20:42 »

Nice work with shading and all though, especially for 14. Great job.
Hope to see more from you!

Mmmm giant tube pretzel. ^_^
tom123

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« Reply #4 on: 04-30-2004 21:11 »

I think it could be better if it was in color.
EvilLunch

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« Reply #5 on: 04-30-2004 22:06 »

I agree, the perspective there is very nice. Coloring it, shading the tubes properly and all, that would make it look very 3D! As it is, though, I like it.
zoidyzoid

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« Reply #6 on: 04-30-2004 22:22 »

This stuff is great! I haven't read many fanfics, but your one is my favourite so far- you've managed to make it flow really well, as well as being funny. I also like your art.

Incidentally, my new Futurama fansite is in need of fan fiction submissions...
AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #7 on: 04-30-2004 22:31 »
« Last Edit on: 04-30-2004 22:31 »

i love your art (im the same age as you) mine is much much worse but if i improve ill post it in my own thread, great job
Dr. Morberg

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« Reply #8 on: 04-30-2004 22:39 »

Thanks everyone

@EL and tom123: I'll make a different scene in
color. I never intended to color them, and I think I might make them worse by coloring it.

@Zoidyzoid: sure, you can put it on your site. I don't have a title for it yet, but if someone could give ideas or a title that would be great. It involves a virus taking over the internet and trapping the crew inside it. Can you copy and paste it or should I email it to you?
AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #9 on: 04-30-2004 22:44 »
« Last Edit on: 04-30-2004 22:44 »

if you want to try to color it then you could just scan it and color it in paint (thats what i do)
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #10 on: 04-30-2004 23:51 »

I've colored the Zoidberg one... and I agree that it does look much better.

AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #11 on: 04-30-2004 23:52 »

only one word can describe that: sweeet!
Nurdbot

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #12 on: 05-01-2004 02:01 »

Bloody awesome Morburg.
tom123

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« Reply #13 on: 05-01-2004 09:10 »

Yep. Looks WAY better with color. Awesome pic!
Sal

Starship Captain
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« Reply #14 on: 05-01-2004 09:20 »

I'm Lovin' it! Great Zoidberg Pic

[Dr.Z]Friends Help A Guine-Pig Tricked Me![/Dr.Z]
AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #15 on: 05-01-2004 10:10 »

yes, indeed, zoidberg finally got his much needed revenge
Sal

Starship Captain
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« Reply #16 on: 05-01-2004 12:00 »

WHAT REVENGE IT NEVER REALY HAPPENED, MWAHAHAHHA!
Nasty Pasty

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #17 on: 05-01-2004 12:48 »

I loved that first little sketch of Roberto.

Nice Style Morberg.
AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #18 on: 05-01-2004 12:57 »

i like the roberto you should color it and add a stiletto style switchblade
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #19 on: 05-01-2004 13:01 »

Thanks!

@AskmoreSexfully: There's a blade there, it's just hard to see.

Right now I'm working on a floating Bender from "Godfellas". That should be up later today.
AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #20 on: 05-01-2004 13:29 »

you should put the god star thing in the background
Coilette

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #21 on: 05-01-2004 13:52 »

Nicely done Morberg, you've got real potential.  <IMG SRC="http://peel.gotfuturama.com/ubb/biggrin.gif">
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #22 on: 05-01-2004 14:21 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2004 14:21 »

Here's another one, titled "God needs booze".
The blob in the backround is supposed to be a nebula.



For those who read the first part of my fanfic and were just dying to know what happens next, I have the next part of it written, I just have to type the rest of it.
Sal

Starship Captain
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« Reply #23 on: 05-01-2004 14:32 »

yey, fanfic!
AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #24 on: 05-01-2004 17:39 »

awsome work dr. morberg i think you should color your bender and roberto, though
Mouse On Venus

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #25 on: 05-01-2004 18:00 »

Nice pics Morberg. As for the fanfic, that's also pretty good thus far, but one criticism would have to be the exchange between Zoidberg and Hermes. It seemed a bit stilted and less well written than the rest of the gags that surrounded it. But that's just my opinion, and I thought the rest was well done.
Sal

Starship Captain
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« Reply #26 on: 05-01-2004 18:08 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2004 18:08 »

I like that gag it was a lot more of a childish argument, it shows that they hate each other for no reason, its funny!
AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #27 on: 05-01-2004 19:02 »

I also enjoyed the fic mostly because i cant write (or spell) worth shit
Sal

Starship Captain
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« Reply #28 on: 05-02-2004 07:54 »

me to!
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #29 on: 05-02-2004 14:57 »

Here's the much anticipated episode 2 of my internationally acclaimed fanfic, "Untitled Fanfic":

[SCENE: A black space with blue grid on it. Fry, Leela, and Bender are flying through it at a very high speed. Suddenly the space ends, and they are in a white space. A hole opens in the white nearby, and they fall through it. They land in a large lake of some sort.]

Fry: Help! I canít swim!

Bender: Iíll save myself! (He swims to shore)

(Leela grabs the flailing Fry and starts slowly swimming to shore.)

Bender: Hurry! Faster! Faster! Do have lead in your pants?

(Leela drags Fry on shore. They both get up, gasping for air)

Bender: What took so long? I was starting to rust!

(Leela rolls her eyes and turns away.)

(The crew turns to go towards the internet city, and the walk right into a large crowd. The people start yelling at them. These people have the blue internet glow around them, while the crew doesnít)

Man: Stop skipping!

Another Man: Yeah, wait your turn.

Woman: Weíve been waiting all day. Think of the children! (The view pans out to reveal that sheís    holding the hand of a small child. The child looks sad)

Child: (about to cry) I havenít eaten for days. Weíve been in line and I donít even wanna!

Fry: (to woman) Whatís the line for?

(She points to a sign that says ďSurf the webĒ with small letters reading ďFree! Just give us your credit card numberĒ)

Fry: Ooooohhh. Leela, letís do that!

Leela: We have no time for games.

Fry: Please?

Leela: We have work to do! Donít be stupid!

Fry: Awwww...

Leela: Now letís go.

(Fry, Leela and Bender take off and fly towards a large city. In the background, there is a large black cloud, which is growing slowly.)

Fry: Looks like itís gonna rain. We better go inside.

Leela: It doesnít rain in the internet, you buffoon. Now letís land here. The central mainframe should be    around here.

(They dive down and land in the city. The buildings in this part of town are old, the paint is peeling, and the walls are cracked. The crew walks past a building that says ďHemplandĒ. The crack guy from ďMy Three SunsĒ is outside, rubbing his hands together. They keep walking and they pass a building that says ďFree Money!Ē. A hillbilly alien is walking through the door. In the window, you see a silhouette holding a bat. They continue walking)

Leela: This is a really bad neighborhood.

Bender: Awww itís not so bad. You get good business.

(They walk past a building that says ďHonest Benderís Wallets, Watches, and MoreĒ)

Leela: Bender! Is that legal?

Bender: Of course not! What kind of guy do you think I am?

Fry: Well I donít like this place. (They walk past two men holding knifes at each otherís throats.) Letís go    over there. (He points to a much nicer area of the internet city.)

(They keep walking and they pass eBay.)

Auction Man: Does no one want to bid more for this jar of human flesh and blood?

(The view moves over to a jar that is about half the size of the man. There is a red liquid inside, and a lifeless face presses against the side.)

Auction Man: Sold! To the crazy creature in the back.

(The view moves from the auction man, traveling past terrifying and large aliens. It stops and focuses on a  boy that looks to be about 12)

Boy: (in a high pitched voice) Yea! I won! (He rubs his hands together and licks his lips.)

Bender: Awww, kids these days are so cute.


I'm kind of lazy, but I'll have the next chapter up by Tuesday, along with a picture or two.
Sal

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« Reply #30 on: 05-02-2004 15:04 »
« Last Edit on: 05-02-2004 15:04 »

More I need more NOW!, why dosnt anyone have ebay selling a £1 coin "going once...twics...Sold for £3,000,000 to the incredibly rich, and stupid, baboon!"

I love the fics and the pics more!!! please?
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AskmoreSexfully

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #31 on: 05-02-2004 18:22 »

sweet story man you should include my unoffical zapp brannigan t-shirt site in it from this thread that got closed: http://peel.gotfuturama.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-000777-1/
Dr. Morberg

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« Reply #32 on: 05-02-2004 22:54 »
« Last Edit on: 05-04-2004 00:00 »

Here's another picture. I took a stab at drawing Leela, which I'm not too good at. I think it turned out okay, though. 50 points goes to the first person to guess which episode it's from.

Jamesbondcja

Professor
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« Reply #33 on: 05-03-2004 07:01 »

Wow Morberg they are really great pics and even better when coloured!
Your fan-fic is also very good, keep up the work.
Sal

Starship Captain
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« Reply #34 on: 05-03-2004 07:04 »
« Last Edit on: 05-03-2004 07:04 »

Picture is from A Byclopse Built for Two! BAM! What prize do i get, is it cash?

i love the pic, more fanfic, more!!!
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #35 on: 05-03-2004 22:46 »
« Last Edit on: 05-03-2004 22:46 »

Here's another picture, inspired by "Teenage Mutant Leela's Hurdles"

zoidyzoid

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« Reply #36 on: 05-04-2004 05:50 »

 
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Originally posted by Dr. Morberg:
@Zoidyzoid: sure, you can put it on your site. I don't have a title for it yet, but if someone could give ideas or a title that would be great. It involves a virus taking over the internet and trapping the crew inside it. Can you copy and paste it or should I email it to you?

Thanks!
Copy and pasting is fine, I'll do it now  <IMG SRC="http://peel.gotfuturama.com/ubb/smile.gif">

3/4 of a Jesus

Starship Captain
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« Reply #37 on: 05-04-2004 16:57 »

Morberg, I absolutely love the pic from ABBF2.  If I may say so, I think your sense of color and proportion are impressive.
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #38 on: 05-04-2004 18:40 »

Zoidyzoid, I viewed your site, and I noticed that you don't have much fanart. If you want, you can put my pictures on there, too. That is, if they're good enough.

To all my fans out there (There's gotta be someone...) the next part of the fanfic will be up tonight.
Dr. Morberg

Professor
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« Reply #39 on: 05-04-2004 21:50 »

*Bump*

Here's chapter 3 of my immensely popular fanfic:

(They keep walking and get to a very tall office type building. There is very little security around it. Leela rings the bell. The door opens and a tipsy man in a guard uniform walks out.)

Gaurd: Come on in. Weíre having a party, but if youíre a hacker or youíre here to spread a virus, you canít come in. You wouldnít do that, would you? Because you know this building has access to every computer in the known universe.

Leela: Shouldnít you be watching the gateways?

Guard: Pfft, no one ever does anything illegal on the internet. Come on in, and feel free to go wherever you want!

(They enter a long corridor that is lined with blue doors. Over each door there is a name. They walk a little farther down the corridor. Thumping music gets louder as they walk. They reach a large open area, still lined with doors. There are criminal types, shady looking people, and otherwise dishonest appearing people running around amongst men wearing guard uniforms and suits. They all look very oblivious to the chaos around them. The criminals a jumping in and out of doors, carrying numbers as they exit.)

Bender: Ooooohhh. Hehehehehehe. (He leans through a door and comes back out holding a small card Which he puts in his compartment.)

Fry: Whatís that, Bender?

Bender: Nothing! Iím innocent! Stop asking! Itís a credit card number.

(They keep walking and they pass a door that reads ďZapp BranniganĒ

Fry: (to Bender) I wonder what Zappís doing.

(They both stick their heads through the doorway)

(We see Zapp Brannigan staring at the computer screen. The light is off and heís basked in a blue glow.)

Zapp: Oohh yeah thatís nic - Ahhh! (He falls backwards on the chair)

(We see the computer screen. It is a picture of Leela, topless. However, Fry and Benderís heads are covering the chest area. Fry and Bender look at each other, chuckling)

(cut to Leela standing outside the doorway, with Fry and Benderís heads still in the doorway. She pulls them out.)

Leela: Come on, we have a package to deliver! You can (she pokes her head in the gateway, then pulls it out again) (angry) Hey!

Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
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