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Cedric

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« on: 04-05-2004 14:06 »

nobody in another topic want's to anwser my question about how my script is . So i will make my own topic.
Afroman a pixie from space comes to earth and grants the whole pe crew 1 wish (but not without impact)
Wishes
Fry becomes a fembot
Leela becomes a Ghost
Bender Becomes a teen-robot gazalionair with strict parents
Amy becomes a diamant thief
Zoidberg becomes human but know he can taste and he hates it
Farnsworth want's pe to be de best delivery service in the galaxy but is ambushed with bomb letters
Hermes becomes boss and is stranded with farnsworth and the bom letters
Zapp becomes ghost
Kiff wishes Guts but ends up in prison

Now he has collected enough Negative energy to grant himself a wish.To be the Dictator of the universe

The end of part 1
TheLampIncident

Urban Legend
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« Reply #1 on: 04-05-2004 14:26 »
« Last Edit on: 04-05-2004 14:26 »

Put it in the Fan Fiction forum, bub.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #2 on: 04-05-2004 14:27 »

how do i move and now that were busy what do you think you like my fanscript ?????
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #3 on: 04-05-2004 15:04 »

You don't. I do.

That'll be $2.50.
Mouse On Venus

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #4 on: 04-05-2004 15:12 »

It's nice to know that the PE crew have such sensible wishes. Fry a fembot? Leela and Zapp as ghosts?  roll eyes And why does a pot smoking rapper suddenly take it upon himself to grant wishes?

 Stick with the mail bomb idea, the only really palatable idea on the list.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #5 on: 04-05-2004 16:31 »

from what i understand those aren't actually the wishes the PE crew make. This 'afroman' takes their actual wishes and twists them horribly out of context and grants them in such a way that makes the wisher miserable, at which point 'afroman' feeds off of their negative emotions. I kinda like it.
Mouse On Venus

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« Reply #6 on: 04-05-2004 16:43 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
This 'afroman' takes their actual wishes and twists them horribly out of context and grants them in such a way that makes the wisher miserable, at which point 'afroman' feeds off of their negative emotions.

Sounds like Polymorph from Red Dwarf.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #7 on: 04-06-2004 03:19 »
« Last Edit on: 04-06-2004 03:19 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
from what i understand those aren't actually the wishes the PE crew make. This 'afroman' takes their actual wishes and twists them horribly out of context and grants them in such a way that makes the wisher miserable, at which point 'afroman' feeds off of their negative emotions. I kinda like it.
You got it right.And why afroman is a pixie will be explained in part 2.i'm goin to make a list of the wishes and you can see the impact above
    Wishes
Fry wishes to be a Robot
Bender wishes to be a gazillionair
Hermes wishes he was head of Pe
Farnsworth wishes Pe is the best delivery company in the universe
Amy wishes for a diamant
Kiff wishes more courage
Leela wishes she had a happy life
Zapp wishes he was with leela
Zoidberg wishes he was human


Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #8 on: 04-06-2004 13:11 »

what's a diamant?
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #9 on: 04-06-2004 14:54 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
what's a diamant?
Srry that's dutch diamant= diamond

Young_and_Angry

Professor
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« Reply #10 on: 04-06-2004 18:31 »

Why would Fry want to be a fembot?
Erdrik

Professor
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« Reply #11 on: 04-06-2004 20:22 »

Sounds ok, though I think something a little less genie in a bottle would be better. Like Afroman got ahold of an invention of somekind instead of granting wishes... Maybe you could even have Afroman not even know at first the devise syphoned off the negative energy, then hee likes it and goes on a power trip  big grin lol
Cedric

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« Reply #12 on: 04-09-2004 15:26 »

 
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Originally posted by Young_and_Angry:
Why would Fry want to be a fembot?

He was hart broken by leela and whises he was a robot without feelings.

Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #13 on: 04-09-2004 15:27 »

 
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Originally posted by Erdrik:
Sounds ok, though I think something a little less genie in a bottle would be better. Like Afroman got ahold of an invention of somekind instead of granting wishes... Maybe you could even have Afroman not even know at first the devise syphoned off the negative energy, then hee likes it and goes on a power trip   big grin lol

Sounds good anyone have any comment
Write something like this please and i will see
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #14 on: 04-10-2004 11:41 »
« Last Edit on: 04-10-2004 11:41 »

Part 2

Afroman reveals himself als the space fighter Neil Aldrin.Wich ship crashed in to the sun.Butt durin the crash he wishes himself out and in return must be a fairy. after 600 years of being a tiny fairy and granting evrybody wishes he becomes evil and enters the pixie side.Leela is sure good is greater than evil.And dare's him to a fairy-pixie duel.Afro man accepts and makes Leela and Zapp Fairy's.There counters are set to zero and the one who grants the most wishes by sunrise is the winner and can wish for anything Even being his slaves.Butt the more the Pe Crew feels unhappy the more higher Afroman's counter becomes.So evrybody has to become happy.

Fry becomes a Playbotstar
Bender Starts studying
Leela and zapp begin there wish quest
Hermes and Farnsworth recrute army DOOP people to help de-bom the letters
Amy and Kiff go back to prison and begin there defense.
Zoidberg Gets tasteless food
 
Gocad

Space Pope
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« Reply #15 on: 04-10-2004 13:14 »

*sigh*

cedric, don't double or triple-post.

use the button.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #16 on: 04-10-2004 15:24 »

???? what do you mean ?????
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #17 on: 04-11-2004 05:41 »

which is beter Part 1 or 2
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #18 on: 04-11-2004 14:39 »

That. What you just did. That's double-posting.  Don't do it. Use the "edit" button (that little icon at the bottom of every post) instead.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #19 on: 04-11-2004 14:49 »
« Last Edit on: 04-11-2004 14:49 »

what do you mean what is double posting i only posted something once I know how to edited.But what is double posting the second question is not for Him but for the visitors.P.S you like my script
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #20 on: 04-12-2004 06:19 »

Part 3

Leela and zapp grant 100 wishes before afroman.And he becomes insane.He flyes to Pixielvania.Where he forms a gang to take over the universe.He Flys To fairytopia To destroy the Fairy ball A.K.A the hart of the Universe.The nibblonians sense this and nibbler tells fry and Leela that there the only hope for the universe.
Mouse On Venus

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #21 on: 04-12-2004 15:05 »

Double-posting is posting two messages in a row. Triple-posting is posting three messages in a row. Within the course of this thread you have double-posted twice and triple-posted once.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #22 on: 04-12-2004 15:23 »

O.K now back to reviewen my script anyone want to try and make drawings of the characters
pokemaster

Crustacean
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« Reply #23 on: 05-14-2004 15:02 »

Actually I think Leelas wish would be either to find the perfect guy or to relive her childhood but whith her parents.

gottalovebender

Bending Unit
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« Reply #24 on: 05-14-2004 20:19 »

i liked it, sorta strange though, you should make an accual script for it, i would read it

My hair smells like avocado
Agony04

Crustacean
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« Reply #25 on: 05-14-2004 22:33 »

Me too... I really haven't got anything better to do with my life
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #26 on: 05-15-2004 01:00 »

I like the ideas so far, you should get to writing it.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #27 on: 05-15-2004 10:49 »

i need help
Kazzahdrane

Starship Captain
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« Reply #28 on: 05-15-2004 13:34 »

My God....what have you done the show I love?

I'd already made my judgement about this idea when you mentioned "Afroman"...and the rest only served to convince me.

As constructive critisism though, start again with a slightly less cliched storyline.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #29 on: 05-16-2004 05:13 »

you think it's cliche ????????????
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #30 on: 05-16-2004 09:01 »

What concerns me is the use of Afroman. Is he that guy that sings the 'Because i got high' song? If so why would you want to bring him into the Futurama universe? If you need a fairy of somesort, use katrina, at least she's already been introduced into that universe.
Cedric

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #31 on: 05-19-2004 09:07 »

ok i will change the Name to afrodude ps it's not afroman
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