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DOOP Secretary
« on: 09-08-2001 05:28 »

As you know im a Bender Maniac (He is the coolest Robot in all time!!!)I decided to make a fic when he meets the Fem-bot of his dreams,Dia4783nna or Dianna,Here the little clip in the begging

(Cut to the Hanger of PE building, a small tabble with,6 chairs surounding it,there is Bender,Nurdbot,Threepeo.Artwo ,K9 and Lost is space droid)
Bender:AHAAHAH losers i will win this game and then make love to the beutiful Fembots i won
Nurdbot;Lucks son of a...
Threepeo:Oh looks heheh
Artwo:Beep etc
Bender:Ahahahahahaha i beta you *lays card out*Straght.Flus
Threepeo:NOOO SOLO will kill me!!
Bender;To bad,Nurdbot,LISD kick this gays ass and steal all him money!!
Nurdbot:What it it for us
Bender:I got 5 Fembots behind me...you guys can have the spare two..
(Cut to PE exterior we hear sounds of thumping and kicking)
Threepeo:Ow i hate you Artwo
Artwo :(who cares)

I know that sucked....


Delivery Boy
« Reply #1 on: 09-08-2001 09:44 »

Aw...It's not THAT bad....Just needs a spellchecker, I suppose. Maybe you could collaborate with someone with a little more expierience? I can tell you have talent, you just aren't very good at expressing it.

Space Pope
« Reply #2 on: 09-08-2001 21:22 »
« Last Edit on: 09-08-2001 21:22 »

No, he was right the first time. That sucked. Learn to spell, learn some grammar, and learn the basic rules of coherence, and then we'll talk.


DOOP Secretary
« Reply #3 on: 09-09-2001 02:28 »

Maybe it the coffe makeing ma paranoid and typeing at 4A.M but i think you are all against me MwhahaahaHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAHH  evil laugh   evil laugh   evil laugh   evil laugh   puke ergghhh


« Reply #4 on: 09-09-2001 02:57 »

You live for this moment, don't you.

Space Pope
« Reply #5 on: 09-09-2001 08:15 »

kryten: me-ow!
nurdbot: if you are going to write a story, fanfic what ever and you aren't that good in the spelling/grammar/basic sentence structure/english language in general, you can use a handy program like word, or if you dont have microsoft, whatever your equivalent is. That has spell check, grammar check etc, then you can just copy and paste it here, and people can make sense of your story, and that way, edel won't die from reading your post.
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