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Author Topic: On a Wong and a Prayer  (Read 798 times)
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PEE Poll: On a Wong and a Prayer
Good!   -10 (90.9%)
Bad!   -0 (0%)
Splunge!   -1 (9.1%)
Total Voters: 10

Kryten

Space Pope
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« on: 09-04-2001 23:43 »

Since Jeff did it, I thought I'd copy him and post a link to one of my fics. Read & review, folks!
 http://www.fanfiction.net/index.fic?action=story-read&storyid=382390

Sarge

Professor
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« Reply #1 on: 09-05-2001 01:07 »

"The page cannot be displayed"  frown
King George
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« Reply #2 on: 09-05-2001 10:30 »

Funny stuff. When will you und Allen continue with "the frylight staff"?
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #3 on: 09-05-2001 11:47 »

We write alternating chapters. Since it's his turn, he's the one you should ask.

Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #4 on: 09-05-2001 11:50 »
« Last Edit on: 09-05-2001 11:50 »

 
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Originally posted by Sarge:
"The page cannot be displayed"    frown

For some reason, clicking the above link leads to a password screen. Try going to

 www.fanfiction.net .

Click on "Cartoons", then "Futurerama" (sic).
You'll find my fic and two others by me) there.

EDIT: Forgetit. The site's screwed up right now.
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"I didn't ask to be Secretary of Balloon Doggies, the balloon doggies demanded it!"
FishyJoe

Honorary German
Urban Legend
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« Reply #5 on: 09-05-2001 13:22 »

D'oh...still not working.

Oh well, I read most of it last night. Pretty good...I liked that whole opening thing with Leela's allergic reaction, and Zoidberg's attempt to help. Funny. I'll read the rest when that site stops being such an ass.
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #6 on: 09-05-2001 13:39 »

 
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Originally posted by FishyJoe:
D'oh...still not working.

Oh well, I read most of it last night. Pretty good...I liked that whole opening thing with Leela's allergic reaction, and Zoidberg's attempt to help. Funny. I'll read the rest when that site stops being such an ass.

Give me an e-mail address, I'll send you the whole thing.

AstroZombie

Bending Unit
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« Reply #7 on: 09-05-2001 13:54 »

Still not working Kryten

Keep getting a password screen

 frown
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #8 on: 09-05-2001 14:04 »

 
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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Still not working Kryten

Keep getting a password screen

  frown

What the heck, I'll send it to you, too.

BTW, your latest was terrific!

FishyJoe

Honorary German
Urban Legend
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« Reply #9 on: 09-05-2001 19:50 »

 
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Originally posted by Kryten:
 Give me an e-mail address,

Read the profile, Evelyn Wood... Dr. Z?

*snaps claws*

Tweek

UberMod
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« Reply #10 on: 09-06-2001 04:05 »

FanFiction.net is down, yet again  frown their home page said it should be back up on Friday.
Mark

Bending Unit
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« Reply #11 on: 09-06-2001 12:13 »

Can you send it to me too?

monkey2000_mark@hotmail.com
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #12 on: 09-06-2001 13:04 »

Sure. As soon as I get home.

AstroZombie

Bending Unit
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« Reply #13 on: 09-06-2001 13:36 »

Got the fic Kryten, Thanks.

Its good,  smile wish I could do humour like you  frown
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #14 on: 09-06-2001 13:45 »

 
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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Got the fic Kryten, Thanks.

Its good,   smile wish I could do humour like you   frown

I wish I could do drama like you, so we're even.

  wink

Tweek

UberMod
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« Reply #15 on: 09-07-2001 04:57 »

Thanks for sending me a copy, it was very good, all the characters felt like they were true to their on screen personalities  big grin
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #16 on: 09-07-2001 09:47 »

OK, the link should work now, so try it out!

Langly
Starship Captain
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« Reply #17 on: 09-08-2001 04:44 »

Bravo Bravo!!! Very good. Although There was that steam pipe thing in one of the real ep, they siad lets go out the steam pipe, opened it and yell ed its full of steam. I belive it was loves labor lost in space.
Langly
Starship Captain
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« Reply #18 on: 09-08-2001 04:45 »

Oh and one thing to fix when you mating the radio station playing my heart will go on, you left one f off off. when you say they had to turn it off or they would have gone crazy
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #19 on: 09-08-2001 21:20 »

 
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Originally posted by Langly:
Oh and one thing to fix when you mating the radio station playing my heart will go on, you left one f off off. when you say they had to turn it off or they would have gone crazy

Thanks. Uh... mating the radio station? Wha? Is that even physically possible?  confused

Langly
Starship Captain
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« Reply #20 on: 09-08-2001 21:51 »

Whoa major typo, well i was 48+ hours without sleep when typing that. LOL
LilyRose

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« Reply #21 on: 09-08-2001 22:09 »
« Last Edit on: 09-08-2001 22:09 »

excellent! I especially liked the opening with Leela, the Taco Bell reference, and Bender's various switches. And the title was just as clever as the ones for the real episodes, which was a nice touch.

Only one very minor complaint -- Amy was a bit too nice/good/smart. Seeing as how you ARE "the original Amyholic," though, that's quite understandable.   wink

(edited for a Delivery Boy dance...)
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Bender! It's that guy you are!
Langly
Starship Captain
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« Reply #22 on: 09-08-2001 22:46 »

Welcome to delivery boy, and welcome to peel

And i think id rather be on wong, then on a prayer, LOL
rach_the_tall

Space Pope
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« Reply #23 on: 09-09-2001 08:48 »

well done kryters, it was very good.
Radijs

Bending Unit
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« Reply #24 on: 09-09-2001 13:45 »

It was a nice story.
Only I think you kept the bender steryotype a bit too much on the front in the first part. It felt like a overdose of funny.
Also Amy kinda went out her "normal" personality.
But I suppose thats needed when you put a sidechar into a lead role
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