On a Wong and a Prayer

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Since Jeff did it, I thought I'd copy him and post a link to one of my fics. Read & review, folks!
 http://www.fanfiction.net/index.fic?action=story-read&storyid=382390

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"The page cannot be displayed" 

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Funny stuff. When will you und Allen continue with "the frylight staff"?

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We write alternating chapters. Since it's his turn, he's the one you should ask.

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Originally posted by Sarge:
"The page cannot be displayed"   

For some reason, clicking the above link leads to a password screen. Try going to

 www.fanfiction.net .

Click on "Cartoons", then "Futurerama" (sic).
You'll find my fic and two others by me) there.

EDIT: Forgetit. The site's screwed up right now.
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"I didn't ask to be Secretary of Balloon Doggies, the balloon doggies demanded it!"

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D'oh...still not working.

Oh well, I read most of it last night. Pretty good...I liked that whole opening thing with Leela's allergic reaction, and Zoidberg's attempt to help. Funny. I'll read the rest when that site stops being such an ass.

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Originally posted by FishyJoe:
D'oh...still not working.

Oh well, I read most of it last night. Pretty good...I liked that whole opening thing with Leela's allergic reaction, and Zoidberg's attempt to help. Funny. I'll read the rest when that site stops being such an ass.

Give me an e-mail address, I'll send you the whole thing.

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Still not working Kryten

Keep getting a password screen

 

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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Still not working Kryten

Keep getting a password screen

 

What the heck, I'll send it to you, too.

BTW, your latest was terrific!

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Originally posted by Kryten:
 Give me an e-mail address,

Read the profile, Evelyn Wood... Dr. Z?

*snaps claws*

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FanFiction.net is down, yet again  their home page said it should be back up on Friday.

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Can you send it to me too?

monkey2000_mark@hotmail.com

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Sure. As soon as I get home.

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Got the fic Kryten, Thanks.

Its good,  wish I could do humour like you 

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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Got the fic Kryten, Thanks.

Its good,    wish I could do humour like you   

I wish I could do drama like you, so we're even.

 

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Thanks for sending me a copy, it was very good, all the characters felt like they were true to their on screen personalities 

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OK, the link should work now, so try it out!

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Bravo Bravo!!! Very good. Although There was that steam pipe thing in one of the real ep, they siad lets go out the steam pipe, opened it and yell ed its full of steam. I belive it was loves labor lost in space.

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Oh and one thing to fix when you mating the radio station playing my heart will go on, you left one f off off. when you say they had to turn it off or they would have gone crazy

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Originally posted by Langly:
Oh and one thing to fix when you mating the radio station playing my heart will go on, you left one f off off. when you say they had to turn it off or they would have gone crazy

Thanks. Uh... mating the radio station? Wha? Is that even physically possible? 

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Whoa major typo, well i was 48+ hours without sleep when typing that. LOL

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excellent! I especially liked the opening with Leela, the Taco Bell reference, and Bender's various switches. And the title was just as clever as the ones for the real episodes, which was a nice touch.

Only one very minor complaint -- Amy was a bit too nice/good/smart. Seeing as how you ARE "the original Amyholic," though, that's quite understandable.   

(edited for a Delivery Boy dance...)
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Bender! It's that guy you are!

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Welcome to delivery boy, and welcome to peel

And i think id rather be on wong, then on a prayer, LOL

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well done kryters, it was very good.

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It was a nice story.
Only I think you kept the bender steryotype a bit too much on the front in the first part. It felt like a overdose of funny.
Also Amy kinda went out her "normal" personality.
But I suppose thats needed when you put a sidechar into a lead role