Here is where you can read it. You guys be the judge, it is third of three stories I have on this link. So, you'll have to either read the first two or just move your mouse down to read my third story.
Is my story a rip-off or a parody? Many people have said it was a good funny clever story, but there was one person who said it was a rip-off and that is something I don't understand. And I too had done a matrix parody, "Ironfinger: Reloaded" It can be read at that very same website.