Thank you very much you 3, still though we need voices, I have some animation in GIF form so I could post that somewhere. (Suggestions?)
Heres the first draft of the start of the script, its pretty terrible, no-one scream!
(In the Planet Express locker room)
(Bender has his arms in his locker violently thrusting them at something, while he’s doing this we can hear Nibbler squealing)
Fry: I'm so nervous Bender. I'm going to go on my first date with Leela... finally.
Bender: Aw what do you have to be nervous about meat bag? Just because you’re going to have your one big chance to impress the woman you've been in love with for years that is far smarter and better looking than you?
Fry: I guess when you put it like that Bender I really don't have anything to worry about.
(Go from the locker room to Leela who is sitting next to a window on the videophone)
Morris: And that’s the meaning of life.
Leela: Wow Dad, I never would have guessed that was the real meaning of life (looks disgusted).
Leelas Mom (Whats her name again?): So Leela are you looking forward to your big date with Fry tonight?
Leela: Oh mom.
Leelas Mom: My daughter- dating an earth boy- *sniffles*. I'm so proud of you sweetie.
(Leg Mutant and Three Armed Mutant walk in.)
Leg Mutant: Have U got any shin pads? I'm going fencing.
3-armed Mutant: (Looks at video screen) What is that!
Morris: That’s the sun.
Leelas Mom: We've felt it, its wondeful.
3-armed mutant: I've had enough of seeing this gastly sun! (Throws leg mutant at Video receiver and transmission cuts out.)
Leela: That was weird.
(Bender and Fry walk in, Fry avoids Leela gaze)
Bender: Well, me and Fry are going out to steal you a gift.
Leela: Aw how thoughtful.
(Leela smiles at Fry and Fry blushes.)
Zoidberg: And Zoidberg will come too!
(Zoidberg walks in and hugs Bender and Fry.)
Bender: Sure never hurts to have an extra accessory to thievery.
(Go to the Proffessor in his lab- he has a huge gun infront of him and he's using a tiny tiny tool ((screwdriver?)) he makes a tiny tiny adjustment and yells.
Proffessor: Huzzah! Now its perfect!
(Amy walks in)
Amy: Whatchya doing Fessor?
Proffessor: I can't remember dammit!
(Proffessor walks away mumbling angrily)
We see Fry Bender and Zoidberg walking th streets, They walk past a shop called Squid, Lobster and Beyond, where there is all manner of horrible sea creatures in the window)
Zoidberg: The one-eyed female would love these!
(Zoidy points to some very horrible little blue creatures. Bender hits Zoidberg and he screams)
Fry: Are you crazy Zoidberg?
Bender: Yeah theres way to much security to steal something like that!
(They walk past a shop called Diamonds Are A Rich Guy Looking To Get Somes Best Friend)
(Fry looks in the window at a ring with a pretty little diamond in it)
Fry: Its perfect! Leela will love it!
Zoidberg: You humans show love with rocks? Hurra! People have been throwing rocks at me for years!
Bender: Fry don't be such an idiot. She' d love THIS!
(Bender gestures at an enormous diamond ,we go to a close up of Fry.)
Fry: I don't know...
(Sirens wail and we see Bender holding the diamond)
Bender: Cheese it!
(Bender Fry and Zoidberg run/scuttle away)
(As Zoidy and Fry and Bender run past a drain we go down into it to see the mutants in there town square discussing something.)
Duayne: And no that was not chocolate milkshake. Any more business?
3-armed mutant: My fellows. Today I have seen.... the sun!!
3-armed mutant: And I think its about time we made it ours!
(We go back to Planet Express and here a knock on the door. The proffessor is sitting in an armchair.)
Smitty putting on a girly voice: Helloo. I'm selling candy.
Proffessor:Get my gun.
(Amy looks out the window)
Amy: Proffessor its the police.
Proffessor: THe police? Oh God!
Hermes: The police!! Er... do they have a sniffer dog?
Hermes: Jahs dreadlocks!
(We see the Proffessor behing him with lots of weapons in his arms He goes and starts flushing them down the toilet and Hermes is next to him pouring white powder into tap water that is already running.)
Proffessor: Good idea Hermes! With that talcum powder the sewers won't smell of toxic nuclear weapons.
Herme: Er, yes.... talcum powder...
(Leela opens the door for the police.)
Leela: What seems to be the problem officers?
Smitty: Officer Bones followed the stench from the scene of a big robbery earlier to here.
URL: So if you don't mind we'd like to do an illegal search of your property.
(Smitty and Earl smash Leela to the floor and are pulled into the building by the police dog. They are pulled by the dog to Zoidbergs office who has a fold-out ((a-la porne mags)) and on the cover it says “Nemos Fish Stores” Zoidberg is drooling over this when the dog gets to Zoidberg ((The source of the stench from the crime scene)) The dog takes one sniff at Zoidberg and runs away whimpering.
Smitty: That’s it punk! Your going down! You just made my best friend run away!
(URL looks hurt)
(As Zoidberg is put in the back of a police van we go down into the sewers, again, and we see, all the weapons the proffessor flushed landing near the mutants town center where they are still plotting to overthrow society. The mutants see the weapons and walk towards the as they are washed up by their feet, the mutants begin to laugh maniacally, the leg mutant takes a little longer to start laughing after they've done laughing)
Leg Mutant: I don't get it.
((Another act break opportunity> ))
(The mutants are cocking there guns and looking at the weapons, in the background we see Leg Mutant step on a mine and when it explodes the old blackness trick (the cartoony thing- you know what I mean)
Leelas Mom: No you can't go up there
Morris: We won't let you kill our little girl!
3-armed Mutant: We're not going to kill them. We're simply going to drive them into the sewers so they live with this fowl stench and we live with the sun.
Leelas Mom: But we promised she would have the life of a human on Earth!
Duayne: And the life of a human right now is to be pushed into the sewers its time for us to take the land above!
Morris: They've got us there.
(The mutants shove Morris and Leelas Mom out the way of a ladder they were standing in front of and start climbing it with their weapons. They emerge in Zoidbergs cell from his toilet)
(Duayne ((the first mutant out of Zoidys toilet)) and Zoidberg faces are right next to each other and as they look at each other they both scream horribly)
(More mutants come out of Zoidbergs toilet.)
Zoidberg: You toilet people came to rescue me?
Leg Mutant: No get in the sewer!
Zoidberg: Disappointed sigh*
(Black screen from that scene to the People in the PlanEx building looking out the window at a scene of carnage. Mutants are running around blowing things up and throwing people down drains.)
Proffessor: Oh I knew this was going to happen! Armageddon was either going to be those damned magic teddy people or sewer mutants.
(Everyone except Amy look at Farnsworth as if hes deranged.)
Amy: Hey Leela- isn't that you parents?
(Amy points at Leelas parents- Morris has a small gun that he’s shooting cars with a small gun and Leelas Mom is looking around worried.)
Leela: Hey yeah it is!
(Leela runs outside and even as shes shouting “Hey” she is shot and starts to get dragged by mutants.)
Fry: They’re not taking her! Not before I’ve even had a shot at blowing my chances!
(The remaining plan ex crew run outside and are all tranqued and collapse. We scroll back up to the window where we see Scruffy.)
Scruffy: Your not taking Scruffy alive!
(A grenade is thrown and lands behing Scruffy scruffy shrugs and jumps onto a car roof.)
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