fanfic i wrote...

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i started to write a fan fiction. i was thinking perhaps i could get some feedback on part1....such as if it should be ended immediately, or if it should be considered for continuation. its called Because Your Here...might turn into a shipper story...unless i figure out a better matter to reside my plot into.
anyways if you read it, thanks.
-LaPointe
 http://www.angelfire.com/space2/actionlapointe

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Uh, I put it up at FSAC, so it must not be too horrible.    At least now I know I got the title right.

[Reply #2 on:]

ahh hilarious turn of events

[Reply #3 on:]

ALaP,

You are off to a nice start! Let's see more please!

[Reply #4 on:]

don't use words that are outside the intention of the stories meaning...

but this is good stuff

[Reply #5 on:]

Oh, i'm really liking this. I for one want more!

[Reply #6 on:]

I'm fairly new here...please define shipper.

[Reply #7 on:]

Well first of all. Welcome to Peel unknown.

Ok. A shipper is a person who enjoys the relationships in futurama. This is normally just confined to Fry and Leela but can extend to Amy and Kif and other smaller relationships (Mom and Farnsworth? O_o). Anyway cut the start of relationship to make ship and add pper on the end and you get "shipper" or "shippy"

Anyway a shippy fic is a romantic fic. So there you go.

Woo i helped a noob.

[Reply #8 on:]

Thanks...btw I like what I've seen of this particular fanfic so far.

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Just noticed something. If Fry was standing outside of her front door, then how could he have heard her crying from her bedroom? If her front door was shut and her bedroom door was shut and her bedroom is located on the opposite side of the room as her front door there is no way he would have been able to hear her unless she was screaming her head off.

[Reply #10 on:]

perhaps she was doing just that, also the bedroom door was not shut

[Reply #11 on:]

i am readin it now, keep up the good work!

[Reply #12 on:]

Yeah LaPointe! Give us updates! Your cliffhanger is driving me nuts!