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JDHannan

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« Reply #320 on: 09-30-2003 17:36 »

Anarchist> in order to cheer yourself up, what were you doing until you were sweaty all over and ur hands were numb?
  flirt
Melllvar

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« Reply #321 on: 09-30-2003 17:36 »

Drumming works for me too, anything to take the focus off what's going through the head.  I've been down both routes (medicated and non-medicated).  It's all good stuff.
Killerfox

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« Reply #322 on: 10-01-2003 22:33 »

mhhh Jesse i hope your depression is out but if its not ill just quote somthing
 
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"There cant be sweet if there is no souer"

remember we all love you!  love
beck

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« Reply #323 on: 10-02-2003 03:13 »

So.
Where are you now Jesse? I havent been here for a while, but felt I miss you, had a look at this thread, found U R going to kill yourself or something??? Hope it didnt happen yet, if yes - just let me know how's it out there?
You are way too nice for US girl, I'd be sorry if find out your nice body is rotting and being eaten by worms. And I mean bad kind of worms.
FemJesse

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« Reply #324 on: 10-03-2003 00:17 »


Graphic Design homework.  Help me because my composition sucks...  tongue
LAN.gnome

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« Reply #325 on: 10-03-2003 00:25 »

Maybe a color other than red for the Japan bit; it really makes it look as if the chopsticks are stabbing it and it's bleeding. I can tell you were trying to work the Japanese flag in there, but it still looks creepy.
FemJesse

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« Reply #326 on: 10-03-2003 00:49 »

Maybe a flat tone of red?
NoAPOlogies

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« Reply #327 on: 10-03-2003 01:15 »

Shift the image of Japan a little to the left so the chopsticks aren't grabbing the red spot
FemJesse

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« Reply #328 on: 10-03-2003 01:45 »

How about now? =D
Bobby King

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« Reply #329 on: 10-03-2003 02:01 »

some how, i just want to...  laff, ist very nice Jesse  big grin
Luis

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« Reply #330 on: 10-03-2003 03:32 »

hmm... nope, sorry, everyone on this thread (especially Jesse) will be after my blood, but i don't think it's up to your quality. It's an assignment, i know, but you've done things that are WAY better than that pic, sorry, but that's what i feel.
Jesse X Barboza

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« Reply #331 on: 10-03-2003 08:21 »

Hey, she feels bad enough as it is.

I think it looks great, FJ.
Anarchist

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« Reply #332 on: 10-03-2003 09:52 »

It's good, but it's a bit... plain. There's that big empty space in the to left corner. Maybe you should add another picture or a slogan or something, I dunno...
Oh, and I love the image of stabbing the world with a fork. It's creepy, but in a good way.
green-gesus

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« Reply #333 on: 10-03-2003 10:51 »

It looks akin to a socialist propaganda poster than an advertisement for a fair.
The broken flag represents destruction of Japan
the cracking world? we are so tough, we will 'eat it' metaphor for taking over. This is what I see though, sorry no time for constructive ideas now.
Farnsworth38

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« Reply #334 on: 10-03-2003 10:56 »

If that’s not done in layers, you’re going to kill me for this... how about if the fork hand was rotated so that the globe was clear of the chopsticks, and ‘Tokyo’ was vertical in the top left? Just a thought...
Just Chris

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« Reply #335 on: 10-03-2003 11:40 »
« Last Edit on: 10-03-2003 11:40 »

Jesse, that poster is shaping up well. But I agree with the others, the background is too plain.

For the red region, I suggest doing a flat shade and make a bold outline around the region. It would look less stab-worthy that way. I'm not sure, but it looks like you intended the chopsticks to pick up Japan like a piece of meat   wink
FemJesse

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« Reply #336 on: 10-03-2003 12:14 »
« Last Edit on: 10-03-2003 12:14 »

Well Luis, I don't really care that its plain because the teacher seems to like simplistic styles.  As per the background, I'm thinking of using the OLD japanese rising sun flag pattern.  I'm reluctant to turn the text vertical because my target audience is my art class, which is a bunch of stupid people.  I can tell you exactly what they'd say if I did that
"It looks like you did that just to cram it in there"
And I don't want to have to deal with that.  As far as moving stuff around goes, All the linework is on one layer...  But I can go back to scratch and redraw the whole thing in illustrator.  The comp isn't due until next week anyway... and the final the week after that...
Killerfox

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« Reply #337 on: 10-03-2003 14:25 »

good poster, it looks fine to me, it doesnt have to be very complicated its good a sit is  smile
hope you get an A+
FemJesse

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« Reply #338 on: 10-03-2003 15:42 »
« Last Edit on: 10-03-2003 15:42 »

Bah screw it, you're right its crap,
its too militaristic, I'm redoing the whole thing with a lighter touch.
PCC Fred

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« Reply #339 on: 10-03-2003 19:38 »

I thought it looked okay...
Melllvar

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« Reply #340 on: 10-03-2003 19:39 »

Ditto, didn't see much wrong with it.

I don't know a lot about art, but I know what I like.
winna

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« Reply #341 on: 10-03-2003 19:53 »

looked fine to me... Blood splattering?  Where?
FemJesse

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« Reply #342 on: 10-03-2003 21:34 »

Here's the new concept for the poster.  The chopsticks are going to be lifting up the written information in a loop, pasta colored so it resembles food.

In case it doesn't hotlink: http://www.angelfire.com/pa2/femjesseart/handisp.jpg

What do you think?  Less threatening I hope?
Just Chris

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« Reply #343 on: 10-03-2003 22:18 »

The style is totally different, but it's not bad. The thumb looks too fat, however.

Now I just gotta wait and see how it looks with the pasta-lettering. If I were you, I would place 'Tokyo Food Fair' on the left empty space, and have the date be the pasta noodle.
Margarita

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« Reply #344 on: 10-03-2003 22:25 »

i like the first pic better. this one is kinda creepy.
Futurama_Hil

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« Reply #345 on: 10-03-2003 22:48 »

I like the texture on the hand. I can't color like that for my life.
mazaite

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« Reply #346 on: 10-04-2003 01:38 »

My only complaint is that this is a Japanese Food Fair. Yet there is no Japanese food. Some of the most beautifull presentations I have ever seen were Japanese. The art of the food should take precidence. You gotta entice the stomach for something like that. But then again you know the teacher and in art it's really about what the teacher wants to see.
Luis

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« Reply #347 on: 10-04-2003 01:42 »

I can't really say anything since it's not complete, but it seems to be going well. Nice!
FemJesse

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« Reply #348 on: 10-04-2003 02:32 »
« Last Edit on: 10-04-2003 02:32 »

   
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Originally posted by mazaite:
My only complaint is that this is a Japanese Food Fair. Yet there is no Japanese food. Some of the most beautifull presentations I have ever seen were Japanese. The art of the food should take precidence. You gotta entice the stomach for something like that. But then again you know the teacher and in art it's really about what the teacher wants to see.

Wrongo.  Its an INTERNATIONAL food fair that TAKES PLACE in Japan.  So by showing the arbitrary noodle, I leave the ethnicity of the food open to interpretation (Italian, Chinese, Mediterranean... whatnot)I could even throw a meatball in there if I really wanted to fuck with some minds...

Edit:
Plus, some of the other students are focusing on the "Japanese presentation" aspect.  So that's OUT.

Bowl?  Background color?
evan

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« Reply #349 on: 10-04-2003 16:29 »

It looks like it needs something on the left side, underneath the thumb. There's too much white space, IMO.
FemJesse

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« Reply #350 on: 10-04-2003 16:35 »

Speli

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« Reply #351 on: 10-04-2003 16:38 »

...I love you.
Asylum-Fry

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« Reply #352 on: 10-04-2003 16:44 »

That picture is so cool!

I wish I could draw and shade like that...
wu_konguk

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« Reply #353 on: 10-04-2003 16:55 »

What the devil. I'm sure that pic was differnent a second ago, no editing either hhmmmm.
Anyway very cool.
Bobby King

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« Reply #354 on: 10-04-2003 17:12 »

 
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Originally posted by FemJesse:


oooooh shit that looks gooooooooooood  eek
Jamesbondcja

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« Reply #355 on: 10-04-2003 17:21 »

*picks jaw off keyboard*

That is fucking extreme exellence Jesse.
Nurdbot

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« Reply #356 on: 10-04-2003 17:58 »

ROXXOR! PH33R!

I like it.
Futurama_Hil

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« Reply #357 on: 10-04-2003 18:00 »

That is among the most awesomest.  wink
The Names Nick

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« Reply #358 on: 10-04-2003 18:54 »

The vampire pic looks great! I don't think I have ever seen you color anything like that before, Jess. What did you do differently?
Venus

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« Reply #359 on: 10-04-2003 19:08 »

that is frikkin awesome.
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