It's kinda weird the mindset I used when I wrote it, because though I worked very hard on it and went through countless drafts, I wrote it as if the writing staff of Futurama would be working over it and improving upon it. Seat of my pants sort of stuff...
If it's true what you say FemJesse, I'm glad it wouldn't take more than a couple of lines re-written to jive with that. After all, they did seem quite adept a killing rats
(even though I've logged rats in 4 episodes now)
Anyone else? It's already gotten at least 10 votes over at TLZ, which is a lot from what I've seen, but I want more! I'm beggin' ya'all to read it! What character's did I nail? What voices didn't seem quite right? Did the lack of a "B" story bother anyone?