I am going to animate a futurama script in flash, i have already started and it's working good, but i am german, and the script is in english, so my first question is if you could check the language for me, and tell me where it is wrong, so that i can fix it.
My also need some "voice actors" because i can't do all the characters myself. so if you could help me, it would be great.
Ps: here comes the script:
" In the name of the can "
Story by phlame:
you see the plan ex building, from outside, with theFuturama music.
Leela, Fry, Bender are sitting on the sofa, with feet on the table.
Then you see the television. News with Morbo and Linda are running.
The company Lör-brew demands all bottles and cans with the production code Lb-gm46 back. They know the beverages in their supermarkets against not harmful commodity exchanges.
Consumers can die at a food poisoning.
(standart Morbo reaction)
Earthlings do not know the meaning of the word food poisoning yet.
(end of the TV scene)
professor Farnsworth and Hermes come purely.
good news, everyone.
Fry, Leela, Bender. The professor and I must tell you something.
Professor, say it to the crew, I do not bring it over my heart.
(runs crying into his office, the door closes with hissing)
well, I am sorry, haviing to say that, but we must all
search new jobs. Planet express is bankrupt.
Fry, Leela, Bender look astonished.
one Moment! That is no good message at all.
But how could that happen?
Exactly, where we work nevertheless, and always so hard
(fry winks at bender)
really, I thought that everything would go fine
yeah it did, but I was so dumb and have forget to let you make delivery. The contract is burst and now we stand here with the not supplied
Freight and do not know where to with it.
(rises and goes to the door)
Bender, wait! Where do you want to go?
I look for a job, robots are needed everywhere. I can try it at
Elzars or has the Robotmafia.
Hermes has already sold the building with spaceship and everything else. Until tomorrow we must be out of here.
we can still live a few days, with that money .
What? You probably are crazy! Until we completely reached the zero point?
It's not applicable at all.
Hey, moment! What is with the freight?
It stands over there.
(points to the freight)
An enormous pile of Slurmcans is located in the area
(at the same time)
Completely exactly. That is everything that we have momentarily. But ehat shall we do whit it?
That is garbage.
so, if nobody wants to have, I would take them. i could live on them for the next 10 years.
Nothing! The Slurm cans are our only rescue. How many have we?
This paper says...
(looks on a paper, which he holds in his hands.
its eyeglasses right.)
oh high 10
1,500,000 cans of Slurm? What shall we do with them?
throw them Into a river!?!
We must sell them.
That is correct, but until tomorrow the shop must be done. or do You want to
sell them on the road?
No. Then we make Fry's robot apartment cabinet to our new headquarter.
Oh no! Is not applicable!
Sudden scene change to the corridor of the robot apartments.
Bender pushes, with annoyed view, a pallet
Slurm cnas on a floating delivery van into its door.
In " the cabinet "
(" camera " zooming out and you see the apartment full, to to the celing with cans)
Oh, That there is no other possibility.
Short module (similarly as scene from 1acv04 in the club " Hip joint " see http://www.cwsurf.de/marki/zoidberg.jpg)
Zoidberg takes a box Slurm and lifts it to the mouth however, it comes nothing
out, because it crushed the can due to his shears hands. Then
it makes a disappointed face (as on the picture)
So, then we would have brought all Slurm doses here.
The camera shows only the delivery van with few doses and then zooming back, so that all cans can be seen.
without zoom shot Hermes again in close-up. he shows with a ball-point pen
in the direction of Amy and Zoidberg.
Amy and doctor Zoidberg, you both make a desk from Slurm doses for me.
Oh, which can make doctor Zoidberg also alone. Amy, you tries one
Egyptian music runs.
Amy begins to stack a pyramid. Those tilts again and again, and Amy
must again and again which hold and catch. Pass few
small time jumps. Once the pyramid stands - Amy develops it again -
the pyramid stands, falls down again - Amy is furious - and so on.
That can be able be done 20 second in such a way.
with music in the back.
If the pyramid at the conclusion is finished there comes egyptian music.
(runs in Aegyter movement once by the picture)
Scene change (small time jump)
Amy squats on a pile Slurm doses. Supports its head by their
Poor one off. Fry comes, with a small pallet of Slurmcans under his arms.
Fry bends to a cassette recorder and looks at it. The Egyptian
What is the matter Amy?
Oh, that is like that humiliating. Mars belongs to my parents, and I work in a
Enterprise, which stands briefly before the bankruptcy.
Fry sits down beside Amy. Hermes comes immediately jumped into the picture.
Hey, you putrefy bags! To the work, but fast.
This was it.