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bish

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« Reply #720 on: 04-30-2004 12:21 »

 
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Originally posted by Kif White:
I'll field this all in spoiler space...



yes maybe thats a good idea, however it is your fan fic and therefore, by my simple yet twisted logic, it is your view that counts. this is why i believe that you should do a sequel if you can be bothered. so please visit this topic and see what others think http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-000778/
Rhodan

Bending Unit
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« Reply #721 on: 05-09-2004 10:36 »

Courious that nobody doesn´t mention new great part of "The Other" saga.
bish

Starship Captain
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« Reply #722 on: 05-09-2004 14:03 »

well it appearde i had killed this thread earlier, thats probably why, however it is very good and leaves me wanting to know what will happen now
Allen

Professor
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« Reply #723 on: 05-09-2004 17:33 »

Wow, this thread is a year old and finally on it's last page(s). Lots of good times were had here. I know I want to start the next one! <IMG SRC="http://peel.gotfuturama.com/ubb/wink.gif">

Anyway, the latest chapter of "The Other" was pure goodness. My sympathies to Rye Guy for all the stuff he went through. I'll give a more through review later if I find anything to comment on. Everyone needs criticism! <IMG SRC="http://peel.gotfuturama.com/ubb/wink.gif">
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #724 on: 05-09-2004 20:30 »
« Last Edit on: 05-11-2004 00:00 »

I just finished UoM.

Let me start off by saying congrats to Ken for the brilliant fic. It has to be one of the greatest fan fics out there, and it was much fun to read.  All throughout you've hit the characters dead on, had me hanging to read the next part, and even had me laugh a few times as well.  The story was unique and detailed incredibly.

Now, the ending... can't say it was my preference, but that is because I'm a shipper mostly Otherwise, it was a great ending to a great fic.

Haha, editedbecause I obviously was tired when i posted this... life, laugh, what a differnce  laff
SpaceCase

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #725 on: 05-10-2004 21:25 »

^What she said!
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #726 on: 06-11-2004 00:38 »

Whoa! HUGE bump up of this thread. It seems to have been forgotten.   hmpf

Anyway, I'm here with an overall review of Missy's fanfic Delicious Surprise, which I recently finished reading. I was commenting to Missy at the Groening Fanworks Central for every chapter, and just reviewed it there overall, so I thought I'd post those final thoughts here too, since many of you were fans of her saga. I'll put it below in spoiler space for the benefit of those who haven't read it (all) yet.  smile


- Kenneth White

"Television is filled with wacky people, and wacky was invented by people who aren't funny ." -- Billy West




Thanks to Daniela (TheLesbianLeela) for the neat signature.
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #727 on: 06-28-2004 22:00 »

Sorry to double post, but this thing really needs bumped (Come on... review stuff, people!) and I've just read the first part of Dave Vincent's Background Noise  smile

fryfanSpyOrama

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« Reply #728 on: 07-01-2004 00:11 »

I just read "Futurama Spin-offs part 1", by ELF at TLZ and it was good and I'm speaking on behalf as a follow fanfic writer who does spin-offs.

Zoidberg in "OR"  (Operating Room) was quite good.  Though it does use some jokes from the Simpsons, it manages to keep my eye open in waiting for the next spin-off.

I've also read "Futurama Outtakes" written by a Dwayne and it is good.  It is just a collection of random scenes with clever bloopers.  I also recommend looking at that story as well if you happen to be visiting the fanfic section of TLZ.
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #729 on: 07-01-2004 11:27 »

 
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Originally posted by Kif White:
Sorry to double post, but this thing really needs bumped (Come on... review stuff, people!)

I would... but there has been quite the lack of shipper fics lately  tongue
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #730 on: 07-01-2004 18:45 »

Well, just so you know, the almost-finished "The Chronotons of Fry-nia" will actually have a fairly high Shipper content. Moreso than I originally planned for  big grin
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #731 on: 07-01-2004 18:58 »

Yes! And another is ours! Join usss! Joooooin usssss!!! To fight us would be a useless waste of your energy! And ours. And we're lazy. So don't make us chase you.
EvilLunch

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« Reply #732 on: 07-01-2004 21:07 »
« Last Edit on: 07-01-2004 21:07 »

Has anyone reviewed mine here? [Too conceited for her own good.]
Edit: No, it hasn't. Okay, different question.. Why not? ^^;
newhook_1

Urban Legend
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« Reply #733 on: 07-01-2004 23:34 »
« Last Edit on: 07-01-2004 23:34 »

Eh, they mostly only review ones by Kryten and Kif White here(Well some others, but for the most part, they are the two most popular writers). Outside of a few comments, no one ever reviews any of mine either. It's nothing personal, there are just so many fan-fictions. But I promise that I will read and review yours once I have enough time to sit down and read it EL.    smile

*Edit* And if Kif White or Kryten read this post I don't mean to sound bitter towards you. I'm not, you guys deserve all the praise you get,and then some...... you attention whores.  tongue
fryfanSpyOrama

Urban Legend
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« Reply #734 on: 07-01-2004 23:46 »

I get moderate reviews sometimes.  I don't as many as Kryten, but I do get reviews now and them.  Though so far I haven't received a comment for part one of my fanfic, "You Should Have Snoo-Snoo Only Once".  I would like to know if I did well with it, and was is as good as any of my previous work?
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #735 on: 07-02-2004 07:34 »
« Last Edit on: 07-02-2004 07:34 »

 
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Originally posted by Kif White:
Well, just so you know, the almost-finished "The Chronotons of Fry-nia" will actually have a fairly high Shipper content. Moreso than I originally planned for    big grin

Good, because I've been suffering from shipperficlessitis.Or maybe it's that Canadian water...
Ol´coot

Bending Unit
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« Reply #736 on: 07-03-2004 13:29 »

 
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Originally posted by EvilLunch:
Has anyone reviewed mine here? [Too conceited for her own good.]
Edit: No, it hasn't. Okay, different question.. Why not? ^^;


Hmmmmmm, what is it called and where is it to be found
  confused

Set ye Zapp in the forefront of the hottest battle, and retire ye from him, that he may be smitten and die.

II Yosemite 11:15
JBERGES

Urban Legend
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« Reply #737 on: 07-03-2004 14:19 »
« Last Edit on: 07-03-2004 14:19 »

I’m helping!

It’s untitled, and can be found here:
 http://www.peelified.com/ubb/Forum4/HTML/000840.html#0


And I guess I’ll give reviewing a go as well:   

Untitled by Evil Lunch:



 Roberto Strikes Back, Part 1 by Newhook_1



Oh, also, everything by Kryten is awesome.  I'd read UoM...but geez...it's long!  Looks like I became a Futurama fan too late to get into that story.  Looking forward to "The Chronotons of Fry-nia" though.

Now, to complete the cycle of reveiw whoring (because it's fun), everone go review my new fanfic:The Bearer of Bad News        big grin

Well, everyone but Futurama_Hil...  Shipper content = 0.001
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #738 on: 07-03-2004 16:56 »
« Last Edit on: 07-03-2004 16:56 »

damn.

by the way, Ken, when will this fic be done? hurry up!!   wink
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #739 on: 07-03-2004 17:44 »
« Last Edit on: 07-03-2004 17:44 »

*LOL* It's actually, technically finished. It's currently being previewed as a first draft at The Groening Fanworks Central (http://www.simpworks.com) where it will stay for a week. So it should be released on Friday. Anybody is free to go there and take a look, but the final product will have some changes. I've already made some edits based on one review, as well as fixing some mistakes.
Crash_7

Professor
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« Reply #740 on: 07-03-2004 18:26 »

 
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Originally posted by JBERGES:
Now, to complete the cycle of reveiw whoring (because it's fun), everone go review my new fanfic:The Bearer of Bad News         big grin

I liked it.  I rated it "very good" at TLZ.  Question, though, to you and other fanfic authors.  Why do there seem to be so many fics that have Leela physically assaulting Fry?  Seems kind of out of character.  Offhand, I can only recall one instance in the series when she struck him in anger (TKOS) and then you didn't even see it.  You just saw the resulting black eye. 

Ol´coot

Bending Unit
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« Reply #741 on: 07-03-2004 20:22 »
« Last Edit on: 07-03-2004 20:22 »

 
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Originally posted by JBERGES:
I’m helping!

It’s untitled, and can be found here:
 http://www.peelified.com/ubb/Forum4/HTML/000840.html#0

 Thanks for the pointer J! I thought her piece was well done over-all. I like reading people's takes on what it might be if the 2 of them were together in a longer term relationhip.

 That said, I wish she had spent a little more space examining the conflict between them. We start with them seemingly on the rocks without a solid idea of why. Before you know it everything is okay again with just a sketchy explanation.

 All that said, I did enjoy it quite a bit and I hope she will do more!

 
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Now, to complete the cycle of reveiw whoring (because it's fun), everone go review my new fanfic:The Bearer of Bad News          big grin


 "Bearer of Bad News" is perhaps the best of the 'episode fics' I have read. J's pacing is very tight and he adds plot elements at the pace of an episode (that's intended as a compliment BTW!)

 His depictions of the characters is spot on with the show characters too, very good job! I would quibble with the degree of Leela's violence though. Sure she is violent but maybe her attack of Fry was a wee might over the top?? Still it was a great job overall!

Set ye Zapp in the forefront of the hottest battle, and retire ye from him, that he may be smitten and die.

II Yosemite 11:15
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #742 on: 07-04-2004 23:45 »

Okay, a little later than I had initially planned, but none-the-less, here's my two cents on part deux of Dave Vincent's Background Noise...

Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #743 on: 07-08-2004 21:22 »

TCoF-n was awesome, as Kif fics tend to be but
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #744 on: 07-09-2004 06:04 »

Firstly, a quick note on TCoF-n...


Now, onto the main point of me posting here... a review of the third chapter of Background Noise.

Allen

Professor
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« Reply #745 on: 07-09-2004 12:57 »

I loved TCoF-n. Very shippy and yet nothing conclusive. While I did find the cloning Fry idea a bit strange, it's no less weird than her dream in "The Sting" A cop out to be sure, but in tune with the thinking of the show. I had problems with rather short visits after Fry finally understands what's going on. Interesting concept that you can only travel to those realities that you had a direct hand in changing, however slight.

Good work Kif, though I must say I was surprised at the format you chose.
Ol´coot

Bending Unit
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« Reply #746 on: 07-10-2004 19:04 »

 There are a couple of new items over at fanfic.net that deserve a look. The author is Shattered Echoes - a new on to me.
 The first is an unfinished fic Love is About Giving Up Everything. The main plot revolves around Leela head over heels for and dating someone other than Fry (sorry F/L shippers). It is set after Amy and Kif have started to have a realationship. The writer has done a wonderful job describing the emotional states of Fry and Leela as the story is unfolding. He/she has done a particularly nice depiction of Fry and what he's going through emotionally.
 I can't tell where the plot is going yet but I am looking forward to more! (I say that alot don't I)    hmpf There are 2 glitches with canon that aren't too distracting and shouldn't spoil the enjoyment of the story. (I would also quibble with Leela referring to Amy as a sl*t but that's just me)  no no

 The other piece by the same writer is Drowning the Past. It is based on / inspired by a song Whiskey Lullaby (unknown to me). It is a bleak 2 page fic about the end of Fry and Leela's love. It is very well crafted and VERY depressing   cry  The devoted F/L shippers might want to avoid this one.

Set ye Zapp in the forefront of the hottest battle, and retire ye from him, that he may be smitten and die.

II Yosemite 11:15
Crash_7

Professor
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« Reply #747 on: 07-10-2004 21:58 »

Man!  They both seemed mighty depressing to me.  Nothing like a couple of suicides to brighten one's day. 
Black_Rose

Crustacean
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« Reply #748 on: 07-11-2004 01:19 »

I have been here for like an hour and read 4 fan-fics! The are creative and very funn! Keep it up to all who make good fan fics!!! I like this web site better than anty Futurama Web site I have ever been to!
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #749 on: 07-11-2004 06:55 »

i read Shattered echoes' stories right after they were first posted. i left reviews for both. Their very good. i loved the songfic and normally i hate song fics.
Xerxes

Bending Unit
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« Reply #750 on: 07-11-2004 15:36 »

I have just read Kif's Chronotons and I must say it's a very good story with a very interesting plot. Here are some of my remarks:


I'm not from here! I've got my own customs! Look at my crazy passport!
Spacedal11

Space Pope
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« Reply #751 on: 07-11-2004 16:20 »

To explain click here>  http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-000373-19/#t728 

Here's the first part of it. And CU= Close Up

{opening credits plays, A Chewy Source of Goodness! Cartoon old Snoop clip}

Scene shows a room with one light. It's not bright enough to see anyones faces but their bodies down.

Man #1 yelling: This is an outrage!
Man #2: How the heck could you have done this Bricon?!
Bricon: It was an honest mistake sir, I promise that Quiven 2.0 will be the soul perfection for our country.
Man #1: I know it will Bricon, but you will not have the faite of America in your hands anymore!

CU of his finger hitten a button, we see Bricon's chair drop as he begins to scream. And flames flare up where he use to be (Like in Austin Powers). The man is holding a disc,

Man #1: Take it to be destroyed! Make sure I never hear or see that disgrace again!

Two bulky men take the disc and walk out of the room. All seems quite then we here a scutle, the men turn every which way with their guns armed. They pause for a second and then they continue to walk on. We hear something drop and a loud clanky noise fade out. Soon we hear the men start shreiking in pain as they fall to the floor as the disc rolls off. A hand catches it and runs through the other door, behind the door we hear people running out to see what had happened. As the stranger in the stelth suit walks along he takes his mask off, we see the face of none other than Zap Branningin giving an evil smirk. He's staring at the disc tossing it up and down. CU of the disc, it has a lable on it that reads: Vengence Quiven X....

What do you think? I promise that the next part has the PE crew in it. This was the intro.
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #752 on: 07-14-2004 00:27 »

Read and now reviewing the 4th chapter of Background Noise.

Shaucker

Professor
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« Reply #753 on: 07-14-2004 10:50 »

Nice to see that someone else likes the character development in "Backround Noise", methinks  smile
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #754 on: 07-14-2004 12:29 »

Finished TCoF-n just now, and it was a nice read, as everything Ken does is.  One of the few fanfic writers I've seen to get all the characters down as well as the show.  While it could still be shippier  tongue, it was a great story line and a relief from all the non-shipper fics (or just few fics in general).
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #755 on: 07-17-2004 08:42 »

First of all, thanks to those of you who read The Chronotons of Fry-nia, and thanks for the comments  smile

Secondly, here's my thoughts on the 5th part of Dave Vincent's Beckground Noise.

Ol´coot

Bending Unit
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« Reply #756 on: 07-20-2004 19:53 »

 Wonderbee31 has finished part 5 of Leela Squared his Doctor Who / Futurama cross-over. It is up on TLZ.

 Wonderbee has done a first rate job with this chapter. His pacing is very crisp and holds the reader without rushing and his prose is as good as it always is.

 I had not known of the character Toy Maker so I can't say if the portrayal is accurate but he is a very Whovian villian! The scenes where the 4 protagonist are tormented are very well done (especially the Doctor's scene) and add some wonder character development. Fry's torment made me cringe for him.

 The fic is well worth a read even for the non - Whovian fans among us. (If there are such people!)   eek

Set ye Zapp in the forefront of the hottest battle, and retire ye from him, that he may be smitten and die.

II Yosemite 11:15
Wonderbee31

Starship Captain
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« Reply #757 on: 07-21-2004 11:02 »

Thanks for the kind words Ol' coot, I wish it was as good as you said.  For months I would work on a part of the story, and then get frustrated with myself, as I didn't feel that it was what I wanted it to be, as well as what other people may have expected.  Still, I look at it now, staring at me from the pages, and see things I could have fixed or at least made sound better.  That said, I am going to finish both of my currently active stories, and there will be a follow-up after I finish NMFAG 2.
Ol´coot

Bending Unit
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« Reply #758 on: 07-21-2004 13:41 »

WB,

Well I still think it is top notch! I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter of both stories (especially NMFAG2!!)
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #759 on: 07-23-2004 22:46 »

Thoughts on Chapter 6 of Background Noise, a little later than originally planned.

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