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SpaceCase

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« Reply #640 on: 02-27-2004 12:06 »

 
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Originally posted by bish:
...horriblre thongs[/b] happening to fox executives

*Shudders*
Ugh! There's a truly disturbing mental image...  X^6
Allen

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« Reply #641 on: 02-27-2004 14:21 »

 
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Originally posted by bish:
when uve finshed i will read them then allen. i don't want to start readin any unfinished series as i don't like the waiting. the wait for A.L.B.I.A is killing me slowly. the only thing that could sooth that pain is thinking of horriblre thongs happening to fox executives

Fair enough. It's only going to part 10 though. I already said it in the release thread, but I'll say it again. The writing has changed from script to prose to better fit my plan of descriptive scenes. Script doesn't allow for that and it gets annoying


The end of a story is only the beginning.
bish

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« Reply #642 on: 02-28-2004 07:10 »

i apologize for any sever mental images i may have caused with my mis-spellt THINGS. again i apoligize. MAY DEATH COME QUICKLY TO MY ENEMIES *cough* FOX *cough*
SpaceCase

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« Reply #643 on: 02-29-2004 04:49 »

 
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Originally posted by bish:
i apologize for any sever mental images i may have caused with my mis-spellt THINGS. again i apoligize. MAY DEATH COME QUICKLY TO MY ENEMIES *cough* FOX *cough*

Apology accepted (but you've scarred me for life  wink)
As for Morbo's line; I don't want death to come quickly to F*x, I want them to realize the error of their ways.
IE more Futurama.

Hey, if you're going to dream, dream big...
bish

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« Reply #644 on: 02-29-2004 08:45 »

death to the executives not F*X. maybe new ones will see the error of their ways or be persecuted . this shall carry on till Futurama is back on air
Ol´coot

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« Reply #645 on: 02-29-2004 19:48 »

Dave Vincent has raised the fanfic bar with part 7 of "Background Noise". He has done an excellent job keeping his muti-threaded story moving at a brisk pace. In addition to that he has added some rich character background for our favorite cyclops. His version of Leela - Sean and what that did to her is top drawer stuff!

 There were two of the scenes in part 7 that I found very compelling and that stood out for me as some of the best fiction I have seen. The first was Munda's refusal to pull strings for Leela's sake. Dave conveyed Munda's reaction to the request wonderfully. She refused Leela but made her understand why and you could feel Leela's shame and embarrasment.

 The other was although brief very riveting. This was the scene at the end where Fry and his buddies are on the shuttle. Dave did a first rate job crafting that scene, you could almost feel the fear and smell the vomit..   eek

 Yup, "Background Noise" has moved into number 1 on my list. Kudos to DV!
Ol´coot

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« Reply #646 on: 02-29-2004 20:05 »

And another thing! I really appreciate the way Dave weaves real life references into his work. I am talking about the references to the various defense companies in the part about Leo Wong's scheming. It is sorta inside ball but it adds a special flavor to the fic for me!
fryfanSpyOrama

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« Reply #647 on: 02-29-2004 23:37 »
« Last Edit on: 03-01-2004 00:00 »

I like SpacePilot3000's The Fry-Trix: Rebooted and Woodbot 2.0's Futurama WarsEpisode One: A New Smope
They are good so good, that they made me rush into finishing part two to my story, From SCAM With Hate at ff.net.
Venus

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« Reply #648 on: 03-01-2004 00:21 »

that wasn't a review that was a shamless plug. This thread is for reviews of other peoples fics, the release thread is for anouncements about your own stuff.
fryfanSpyOrama

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« Reply #649 on: 03-01-2004 01:04 »

okay, venus you got me, but rest assure, I truly do like the other fanfics I mentioned.  I tip my hat off to both SpacePilot3000 and Woodbot 2.0.
bish

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« Reply #650 on: 03-01-2004 13:56 »

i also like background noise. im halfway through part 3 at the mo. is the series unfinished?
Teral

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« Reply #651 on: 03-01-2004 16:18 »

Yeah, it's up to 7 chapters by now, and still running full steam.

And I 'd like to acho everything Ol'coot said. This is one hell of a fan fiction, and it's a solid #2 on my all-time list.

What's #1 you might ask? Well, only the author and I know that.  wink Soon you'll all know though.
Venus

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« Reply #652 on: 03-01-2004 16:44 »

Is it Zeds? His is the only unreleased fic that i know of.
Teral

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« Reply #653 on: 03-01-2004 16:51 »

Maybe ... but I've already said too much.
Venus

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« Reply #654 on: 03-01-2004 16:55 »

It is isn't it! I'm already all excited! Do you know when it's coming out?
Teral

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« Reply #655 on: 03-01-2004 17:01 »

No, only Doug knows that. Afterall it's his story.
wu_konguk

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« Reply #656 on: 03-01-2004 19:03 »

Well maybe if some of the proof readers got their asses in gear it would come out soon......hold on....crap.

Well I still have 138 pages to get through but I will try to get throuhg it asap.
Action Jacktion

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« Reply #657 on: 03-01-2004 19:11 »

Well, I was planning to send in another story, but if you already have the best one ever, it seems sort of pointless....
Teral

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« Reply #658 on: 03-02-2004 10:17 »
« Last Edit on: 03-02-2004 10:17 »

I said it was #1 on my list, not the be all end all definite best fanfic evar!!!111oneone (generally speaking). Taste varies and all. Rest assured your fics rank very high on my list as well.

   
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Originally posted by wu_konguk:
Well maybe if some of the proof readers got their asses in gear it would come out soon......hold on....crap.

Damn, you have a point. I better write that email.
bish

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« Reply #659 on: 03-02-2004 12:00 »

i reckon 1bdi comes close, however they are both very different writing styles
Ol´coot

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« Reply #660 on: 03-02-2004 20:01 »

 
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Originally posted by bish:
i also like background noise. im halfway through part 3 at the mo. is the series unfinished?

There is so much going on in it that it could almost reach novel length. I suspect it will take a long time to finish but it will be worth it!
bish

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« Reply #661 on: 03-04-2004 14:57 »
« Last Edit on: 03-04-2004 14:57 »

im readin universe of malice now and all i can say is "WOW!!!!". im on part 10! great story, great writing, only bad thing so far although i didn't think i would be im against a possible alesia and fry relationship. FRY AND LEELA WERE MADE FOR EACH OTHER! espicially according to background noise but thats not the point. woo go ken white, or kif white according to PEEL.
Venus

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« Reply #662 on: 03-04-2004 15:06 »

a lot of shippers disliked the Fry/Alesia plot. I did my fair share of complaining about it on the raview thread. Hopefully it won't be too much longer before kif posts the final chapter.
Kif White

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« Reply #663 on: 03-04-2004 23:15 »

Thanks bish. That sentiment is shared by many readers, as Venus said. But it appears it was a relationship they mostly loved to hate  smile

As for the next part. Well... I'd say you'll be waiting a good month or so still. Things have been slow lately, though I'm hoping to get lots done this weekend if possible. And it's also increasingly likely that it'll be split into two-final parts. Hold tight though... it WILL be released and finished.
Venus

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« Reply #664 on: 03-04-2004 23:20 »

Well, good. After all 25 is a much better number than 24.
bish

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« Reply #665 on: 03-06-2004 13:06 »

the more the better. great stuff kif.
Venus

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« Reply #666 on: 03-19-2004 01:46 »

Hey Kif, i was rereading chap 21 of UOM (i was bored) and i was wondering why Alesia gave Fry her moon necklace and told him to give it to Leela? Why would she want Leela to have it, didn't her mom give that to her? And why would Leela even want the thing.
bish

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« Reply #667 on: 03-19-2004 11:05 »

ull probly find out in the new chapters. wait and see
Kif White

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« Reply #668 on: 03-19-2004 17:25 »
« Last Edit on: 03-19-2004 17:25 »

Well, that is up to the reader's interpretation to a certain degree. In a sense she's giving Fry something that meant a lot to her, and then telling him to pass it on to Leela is almost a way of saying that she concedes, and that she wants Fry to be happy, i.e. happy with Leela. As for whether Leela would want it... well... no comment for now  wink
Venus

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« Reply #669 on: 03-19-2004 17:45 »

i don't see why she would. i certainly wouldn't. First off, it's creepy. Second Leela didn't like her, i doubt that would change now that she's dead. And third she would never be able to wear it without Fry thinking about Alesia. Talk about living in someones shadow. Fry admitted that he would have picked Alesia over Leela. I wouldn't be so quick to strap a reminder of that around my neck.
Kif White

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« Reply #670 on: 03-19-2004 18:30 »

Interesting thoughts, for sure. I won't say any more on the matter at the moment. I'd be interested to hear other reader's thoughts on the matter though, if they have any?
Rhodan

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« Reply #671 on: 03-20-2004 12:45 »

I can highly recomend Rye guy´s "Even longer day" (A long night sequel).

-I´am also very satisfied with "Delicious surprise". Maybe it would just need some quicker start and have better done some things at the end (Munda´s characterization, coming of children (Lilah and Kif´s twins) could be more importent in the plot, hints about Nibbler were little pointless and epilogue could be more dramatic). I hope that Missy will one day write again something longer.

-Can someone tell me why the very promising "Dead man´s tale" never done it´s second part?         
Ol´coot

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« Reply #672 on: 03-20-2004 19:32 »

 
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Originally posted by Rhodan:
I can highly recomend Rye guy´s "Even longer day" (A long night sequel).


-Can someone tell me why the very promising "Dead man´s tale" never done it´s second part?         


I have to agree with Rhodan's take on "An Even Longer Day" In fact I greatly enjoyed both fics (just wish there had been more!). I have found that most of the fics I enjoy feature a somewhat more adult Fry, not the Fry of the series. (You have to believe that the show version would have taken advantage of Leela in the first part...)
  hmpf

Ah unfinished stories... A cronic condition it seems with many writers. That pesky real life tramples all over the story output, don't ya just hate how that happens?  mad
Venus

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« Reply #673 on: 03-20-2004 20:05 »

that's the problem with serial fics. That's why i think it's best to release a fic all in one go. You can't dissapoint anyone that way.
Shaucker

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« Reply #674 on: 03-20-2004 20:39 »

 
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Originally posted by Rhodan:


-Can someone tell me why the very promising "Dead man´s tale" never done it´s second part?         

Yeah, AsylumFry, tell us....it's your fic, isn't it? I wish that story had a second part, I loved the style and plot.
   I also have to rave about both "Backround Noise" and Delicious Surprise"...which, so far, are the only stories to take advantage of Leela's parents as major characters. Munda and Morris have such potential, as they were great in the (only, sob) three episodes they were in. Go Munda and Morris, the cyclopian Bronx couple!

If you don't eat meat, you'll break out in vaginas.
Venus

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« Reply #675 on: 03-20-2004 21:31 »

Morris and Munda are major characters in my story too. There's no denying their greatness. Their from the Bronx? Is that what accent Munda has? I thought it was kinda Long Islandish or Bostonian or something.
Shaucker

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« Reply #676 on: 03-20-2004 21:59 »

Bronx or Long Islandy....it's a NY varient. Doesn't sound Boston in the least. You're writing a fic? With the Turangas? I'd love to hear more about that, and I'm always interested in beta-ing.
Futurama_Hil

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« Reply #677 on: 03-20-2004 23:46 »
« Last Edit on: 03-20-2004 23:46 »

 
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Originally posted by Shaucker:
Bronx or Long Islandy....it's a NY varient.

Definatley not Long Island...we don't have any accents...it's a bronx accent   tongue
Shaucker

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« Reply #678 on: 03-20-2004 23:54 »

You have accents, don't go all denial. I tried to say that about Connecticut, but then talked with people from Indiana.
Either that or they have a Brooklyn accent...it's a cute touch no matter what.
Futurama_Hil

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« Reply #679 on: 03-20-2004 23:57 »

Well, what I meant was our accent sounds nothing  like a bronx or brooklyn accent  wink
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