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Wonderbee31

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« Reply #400 on: 11-19-2003 01:28 »
« Last Edit on: 11-19-2003 01:28 »

I hear that Venus, I have that same problem with NMFAG sometimes as well.   You just gotta look for inspiration, and it'll likely come knocking.

Would you be able to post a preview sometimes, I'd love to see some of what you've written.

My new fic will hopefully be done before the end of the week, and then NMFAG 4 will come out in December.

Another TOTPD? Holy Krakatoa!
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #401 on: 11-19-2003 01:48 »

WB, i did it. I'm embarressed as all hell but i posted a little preview in the fanfic release thread.
Asylum-Fry

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« Reply #402 on: 11-19-2003 01:52 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
WB, i did it. I'm embarressed as all hell but i posted a little preview in the fanfic release thread.

*gawks*

Oh. Your. God. HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THAT?? Damn you and your - oh wait I just turned Liquid Emperor...

*pulls out a straw*
Wonderbee31

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« Reply #403 on: 11-19-2003 08:25 »

@ Venus:

I think that that preview was...Stupendous!  If I caused you any embarresment, I'm sorry, but it really was a great preview.  Now you've got me anticipating the whole of the fic even more.  If you need any help at all, go ahead and PM me some time, and I'll do whatever I can, in any small way.

Venus, it really did read very well, and I think it'll be a fic that warms shippers hearts.
wu_konguk

Urban Legend
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« Reply #404 on: 11-19-2003 11:31 »
« Last Edit on: 11-19-2003 11:31 »

Well thanks to the fact there are no lectures on a wednesday afternoon. I got around to reading UofM chapter 18.
Firstly EPICNESS woooo.(especially Epic since this one chapter is longer than my first fanfics entirity)

All in all bring on the next chapter, I can't stand the suspense.
On another point I think this chapter needs some character sketchs and artistic reditions of some of the sceenes    flirt

I have also reread Krytens "the Fault Dear Leela" and went to rank it on TLZ but could not (I entered rank but it said the filed name was empty) has anyone else had this problem.
Ol´coot

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« Reply #405 on: 11-19-2003 14:20 »

 
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Originally posted by Allen:
Well, I don't know about the rest of you, but I enjoyed the whole thing. Some people are letting their shipper feelings got in the way.

I enjoyed it too, I like what K has done with the Leela/Alesia/Fry triangle. He has Fry as still 'loyal' to Leela, Alesia wants Fry and is acting on her feelings (which might include some spite for Leela).

That leaves Leela... K left Leela hanging on to her bitterness and anger. I'm not trying to provoke anyone but it has always seemed to me that that is about all there is to Leela (sad really). I expect that I shall be cast into outer darkness for my heresy but that is how she appears to me.

Ol'Coot,
Unredeemed shipper and heretic.  frown
Thoth

Bending Unit
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« Reply #406 on: 11-19-2003 16:51 »
« Last Edit on: 11-19-2003 16:51 »

I couldn't agree more, exept fot the Leela part...
Deep down she has a warm caring person that only mannifests when she's with her parents(and Fry later on in the show), or it involves animals and simular situations.
She's just put up a brick wall beacuse of all the shit had to take from people, witch ofcourse have left her bitter and angry.
Wich sadly...i can really relate too....
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #407 on: 11-19-2003 16:58 »
« Last Edit on: 11-19-2003 16:58 »

I still got chills from reading the next part of UoM. That last scene..my heart wa sbeating..I was like, No Fry! Don't do it! Noooo!  I remeber telling myself he should like kick her or something   big grin I hope he can get control of himself, oh please oh please oh please...hey, look at me going insane over a fic? Oh well, it shows real writing talent. Cheers to my hopes.    big grin

Gee, I have real hatred for Alesia I've realized. I don't like her attitude at all. She and Fry would make a horrible couple! But ignore this, it's just me talking to myself.   big grin
Venus

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« Reply #408 on: 11-19-2003 17:25 »

 
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Originally posted by Thoth:
I couldn't agree more, exept fot the Leela part...
Deep down she has a warm caring person that only mannifests when she's with her parents(and Fry later on in the show), or it involves animals and simular situations.
She's just put up a brick wall beacuse of all the shit had to take from people, witch ofcourse have left her bitter and angry.
Wich sadly...i can really relate too....


i agtree with thoth. Seems to me that Leela has her 'self preservation mode' permanently stuck in the 'on' position
Ol´coot

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« Reply #409 on: 11-19-2003 22:05 »

 
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Originally posted by Thoth:
I couldn't agree more, exept fot the Leela part...
Deep down she has a warm caring person that only mannifests when she's with her parents(and Fry later on in the show), or it involves animals and simular situations.

She is all of those things but I wonder if those traits aren't like flowers growing on the flank of an active volcano. I could be all wet but I will stick by my original thesis....
Thoth

Bending Unit
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« Reply #410 on: 11-20-2003 04:18 »
« Last Edit on: 11-20-2003 04:18 »

Might well be, i think she has a loathing for mankind, wich is why she's so picky and love animals so much.
But she has shown that she does care for other people, and that's something that must have been there all along.
I think that her bitter,angry lothefull persona is going to(or would) take over if not a special someone brings out the good things in her, that special someone would be Fry, and that is what makes the show so great!
Altho i might just be wrong my self, but i think these aspects of her personality are clearer too people who  had similar experienses as her....or just imganes them :/
EDIT:
Alright! I'm a delivery boy!
Ol´coot

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« Reply #411 on: 11-20-2003 12:34 »

 
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Originally posted by Thoth:
I think that her bitter,angry lothefull persona is going to(or would) take over if not a special someone brings out the good things in her, that special someone would be Fry, and that is what makes the show so great!

Well Thoth I don't see Fry having quite that effect on her but that's just me! We will have to agree to disagree <g>. Congrats on the promotion BTW!

Coot
The arthropod  hmpf
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #412 on: 11-21-2003 00:28 »

Where's Kif? He usually pops by to comment on his story by now. I was kinda hoping he'd come by and be all insightful and stuff. He's like the directors commentary on a dvd.
Kif White

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« Reply #413 on: 11-21-2003 01:19 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
Where's Kif? He usually pops by to comment on his story by now. I was kinda hoping he'd come by and be all insightful and stuff. He's like the directors commentary on a dvd.

Sorry, I was away for the last few days so didn't actually get to see the release and its aftermath until just now.

Firstly, I'm glad there are so few death threats and nobody is going to stop reading. Now to address a few points  smile

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
WB:



 
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Originally posted by wu_konguk:
On another point I think this chapter needs some character sketchs and artistic reditions of some of the sceenes     flirt

Well... I'm not going to be personally drawing any myself, but the artists out there are free to draw any scenes they like. Perhaps you can convince some of them to?  smile

Feel free to ask anything further, but I'm not going to just give away what happens in the next chapter to you :P
wu_konguk

Urban Legend
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« Reply #414 on: 11-21-2003 07:54 »

But convincing people takes effort. It'll be easier to do it myself, if that's ok  wink
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #415 on: 11-21-2003 12:47 »

 
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Originally posted by Kif White:
 


Kif White

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« Reply #416 on: 11-21-2003 14:17 »

 
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Originally posted by wu_konguk:
But convincing people takes effort. It'll be easier to do it myself, if that's ok   wink

Sure, go ahead. If you need any reference material (ie, drawings of some characters to reference), just ask  smile

 
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Originally posted by Venus:

Kif White

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« Reply #417 on: 11-21-2003 16:17 »

Sorry for the double post, but this is unrelated to my previous one:

Just read "Dead Man's Tale" part 1 by Asylum-Fry. Very nicely written I must say. I'm not really a shipper, but this story is very intruiging and nicely scripted. Using Leela's POV most of the time really works well, the the whole thing is nicely eerie. Keep it up, AF  smile
Wonderbee31

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« Reply #418 on: 11-21-2003 18:47 »

I just finished reading "Dead Man's Tale" on TLZ, and it's really good.  AF's gotten a very nice story going on here, and the cliff-hanger was effective.  I'm looking forward to part 2.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #419 on: 11-22-2003 00:12 »

Read DMT, freaken awesome i must say. Can't wait for the rest!
wu_konguk

Urban Legend
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« Reply #420 on: 11-22-2003 08:59 »

Just read DMT. I must say that this chapter is well written. Many of the sceens were easy to visulise thanks to the use of language. I will be very interested to see what happens next.
Roll on I say roll on.
Kryten

Space Pope
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« Reply #421 on: 11-22-2003 21:29 »

DMT rocks. Keep it comin', A-F.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #422 on: 11-22-2003 22:53 »

Question for Kif!

Are there gonna be any tender moments between Fry and Leela? So far every sentimental moment has been between Fry and Alesia. Are Fry and Leela gonna have any 'interactions' that make his decision even harder for him?
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #423 on: 11-22-2003 23:16 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
Question for Kif!

Are there gonna be any tender moments between Fry and Leela? So far every sentimental moment has been between Fry and Alesia. Are Fry and Leela gonna have any 'interactions' that make his decision even harder for him?

You'll just have to wait and see   wink
Wonderbee31

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« Reply #424 on: 11-23-2003 00:43 »

Well, Kif, if it's as well done as the other parts have been so far, then my waiting factor has been multiplied by 7.

I've also read part three of "The Other", and it's geting very interesting.  Can't wait for part 4.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #425 on: 11-23-2003 01:41 »

 
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Originally posted by Kif White:
 You'll just have to wait and see    wink

so.....yes? The little winky guy makes me think yes.
Robiben

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« Reply #426 on: 11-23-2003 07:15 »

As someone who is helping AF with her fic i must say that if you enjoyed part 1 you will love part 2 and 3. AF has some great ideas bouncing around in that little head of hers.

Oh and when i say i helped her, what i am really saying is i sit back and ramble in AF's ears and she just ingnores me and gets on with her work.   tongue

But yeah i cant wait for Part 2 and 3 either. Especially part 3. *hops up and down on the spot*
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #427 on: 11-23-2003 09:25 »

I really like The Other, I think it has possibilties to one of my all-time favorites.  I just hope it doesn't get too simular to mine.  wink
Asylum-Fry

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« Reply #428 on: 11-23-2003 13:07 »

 
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Originally posted by Robiben:
Oh and when i say i helped her, what i am really saying is i sit back and ramble in AF's ears and she just ingnores me and gets on with her work.    tongue

If I wasn't listening to you, then how would the line "That ring should have been on my finger" get into the fic? Hmm?   tongue

Thanks for all the reviews, I'm surprised people like it. So, on with the fic, I'll start working on part 2 today.
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #429 on: 11-23-2003 19:00 »

Okay, I *have* to know for sure... are you *really* going to draw a scene from that last chapter, wu? You're not just getting my false hopes up are you?  wink

And to AF: Look forward to that second part  smile
Asylum-Fry

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #430 on: 11-23-2003 19:05 »
« Last Edit on: 11-23-2003 19:05 »

   
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Originally posted by Kif White:
And to AF: Look forward to that second part     smile

Check the Release Dates thread. You, combined with the book Stranger in a Strange Land, are the most evil form of inspiration ever    tongue

And I'm looking forward to UoM 19.
Kif White

Bending Unit
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« Reply #431 on: 11-23-2003 19:12 »
« Last Edit on: 11-23-2003 19:12 »

 
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Originally posted by Asylum-Fry:
   Check the Release Dates thread. You, combined with the book Stranger in a Strange Land, are the most evil form of inspiration ever      tongue

Yes, I just read it. Looks interesting.

Wow, thanks... I think?   confused

 
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And I'm looking forward to UoM 19.

That's good to hear. The first scene has been written already, and I'll write more this afternoon. Vacation for class = lots of free writing time    smile
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #432 on: 11-24-2003 11:30 »

Can i just say how much i love Missy's Delicious Surprise? There mere thought of new chapters just fills my insides with hot chocolate and fuzzy kittens. Speaking of new chapters theres one up at TLZ right now.
Wonderbee31

Starship Captain
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« Reply #433 on: 11-24-2003 12:28 »

Wow, just read Missy's Delicious Surprise 16, and it read great.  I can't wait for #17.
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #434 on: 11-24-2003 12:46 »

Latest chapter of Delicious Surprise is really good, I can't wait for the next- the end scene really left me wanting more.  big grin
Ol´coot

Bending Unit
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« Reply #435 on: 11-24-2003 13:06 »

Missy has done it again with Delicious Surprise 16! As is so often the case with her writings, this chapter left me thinking DON'T STOP NOW!!! Although it is getting kind of dark it is still a great read! (At least Leela escaped Zipp this time).

Coot
Wanting more!
Wonderbee31

Starship Captain
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« Reply #436 on: 11-28-2003 14:28 »

Part 4 of Rye Guy's The Other is up on TLZ, and it's great.  Makes shippers wanna go whee!  No spoilers, but, it's got me anxiously waitng for the next part.

On FF.net, fryfan has got another Spy-o-rama story going on now, and it's reading really good as well.  Take a look, and I don't thnk you'll be disappointed.
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #437 on: 11-29-2003 12:43 »

Yes indeedy, next part of The Other is really great. Except now I'm really scared it's gonna be very simular to mine!

I demand more shipper fics! NOW!
Futurama_Hil

Urban Legend
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« Reply #438 on: 11-30-2003 12:55 »

*sorry for DP*

Just finished UoM part 19. The ending..it was just so sad...poor Leela.  cry As usual, I love all of Zoidberg's parts, you really captured Zoidberg's character!

Anyway, once again, Ken, cheers!  big grin
Ol´coot

Bending Unit
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« Reply #439 on: 11-30-2003 13:06 »

Finished UoM 19, well done as always Ken! I thought the scene where Leela suddenly realizes that the crew DID think she could murder Alesia was very arresting. It seemed like it finally dawned on her how she comes across to the others.

Kudos for the ending! Don't get me wrong, I enjoy a good shippy Leela - Fry yarn but I like where Ken has gone with this part of the story. I mean, how many times can he take being rejected and put down?? Even Fry has to have some pride for pity's sake. Yes, it is sad for Leela's sake but it is mostly of her doing is it not??
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