My first fanfic

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I wanna do a fanfic about either one of these three things:

The machines take over: The crew of futurama are accidentally jettisoned 570 years into the future. (I don't know how yet). The machines are planning to taken over, (a la matrix) and the machines have convinced Bender to join their uprising. The PE ship crashes with the nebucannezzah (I have no friggin' idea how to spell that) and meets the crew of the matrix. Together they fight to save their friend and mankind.

The freak within:
The crew is making a simple delivery this time. To a company called "lobecorp" somewhere in USA. They deliver the package to a man in a dark trench coat. Before going back though, the crew decides to take in the sites. There they meet Freakazoid!, Washington D.C.'s super hero. He is locked in an intense battle with the lobe. The crew decide to help. The lobe get's away. After the battle, Freakazoid! tells the crew that they accidentally delivered a death ray thingie and if they do not stop him, he will destroy the world!

Paradise lost: The crew is taking a vacation on the tropical plant Sstahh (hee hee). They are having a great time, but with out warning, the bendians attack the planet. The crew unwillingly get's drafted, and are forced to fight in the Sstawaiahhn army. Fry has a brilliant attack plan somewhere inside his skull, and he tries to tell everyone, but they ignore him. Fry tries his best to get it out, but everyone thinks he is just being stupid again. Will he get it out? Or will he fail? I really don't know myself, but I'll think of something...

So watcha think?

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that post messed up my mind, itll probably be good 

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You know, now that you mention it, they are a bit f***** up, aren't it?

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Machines take over: Mothers day.
Paradise lost: Parasites lost
That leaves Freakazoid. But can...you...handle...the freak?

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I also see a resemblence to mother's day, but then again it's not...How the hell is Paradise lost Parasites lost?

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Originally posted by Speli:
I also see a resemblence to mother's day, but then again it's not...How the hell is Paradise lost Parasites lost?

It's not, but the title is too similar.

Don't do "The Machines Take Over."  It's too much like "Mother's Day" and The Matrix is so last century.   

The Freakazoid one sounds good, but how are they gonna meet him?  Time travel again?

Do the third one.  It sounds interesting.  Just change the title.   

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I agree with Dave otherwise you'll have lawyers bangging at your door 

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I agree

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Originally posted by KENNEDY:
 But can...you...handle...the freak?

Probably not....