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Nobody seemed to notice this last time I posted it
That might be because you posted it in Demeter's thread. Anyway, I know little of TF2, but shall commend you for your successful project nonetheless.Yeah, it's meant to be a fluffy fox thing. Nothing special, just cute.
Indeed. Are its stripes and such meant to be bioluminescent? Even if not, they look cool.
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Nobody seemed to notice this last time I posted it
That might be because you posted it in Demeter's thread. Anyway, I know little of TF2, but shall commend you for your successful project nonetheless.Haha, that was silly of me.  The title was a bit vague so I thought it was the General Art one.  Anyway, thanks.
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Hey, I've tried to draw Leela for first time.  Nice  , now uncensored version?
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winna

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Neat.
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TheMadCapper

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Hey, I've tried to draw Leela for first time.  Argh, what horrible accident carved that chunk out of her torso and withered away her upper arm?!
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Argh, what horrible accident carved that chunk out of her torso and withered away her upper arm?!
Yeah, cool joke, bro.
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TheMadCapper

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Argh, what horrible accident carved that chunk out of her torso and withered away her upper arm?!
Yeah, cool joke, bro. I'm kind of a jerk. Don't take it too seriously.
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winna

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Cool.
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winna

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Excellent color work.
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« Reply #69 on: 07-23-2012 21:13 »
« Last Edit on: 07-23-2012 21:14 »
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As I helped you a bit to put it online, I feel the need/obligation to also offer some constructive and supportive criticism  So, about the positive aspects first: - The emotion/expression works great. - Your lines are stable. As I once explained: When drawing in a concentrated way, lines are easily subject to be drawn very slow, and therefore becoming frickled. This does not happen on that picture. So, so much about the positive aspects, but -as we all wish to learn something here- now for the "things you might change"  - The proportions are a little off. The head seems a bit too long around the mouth, and the forehead/hair a bit too short (though I am not sure if this is just the pics perspective). Anyway: The Futurama DVDs feature tuturials howtodrawthisorthat character. Their major advantage are pre-sketched, based on simple geometrical figures. These objects are a HUGE help to get the proportions right. In fact, it's nigh impossible to get the proportions NOT right with these sketches  Okay, once again, the "things you should change" text is a bit longer, making my post look like I have more to complain than to support/encourage. That's of course NOT the case  For a first time drawing a characters, this image is in fact quite good.
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I call this one simply "Love and jealousy in the future" I think you'll find it a step up from the usual art posted here 
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If it's any consolation I use the guidelines for Fry all the time and I still fuck his face up pretty good. Fabulous beginning to your Futurama fan art career, lauren. I do agree that his mouth is a bit long and that his hair line is too close to his eyes.
Thank's Zoidy, I might try and draw Leela soon. Please do! I personally think she's a little easier to draw, and you might find her to be easier as well.  And please do share it with us! We love seeing everyone's work.
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