Louiswuenator
Starship Captain
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« on: 10-12-2010 05:48 »
« Last Edit on: 10-12-2010 14:11 »
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Hello everyone. This is my first attempt at writing anything for Futurama. I hope you like it. It is written in pseudo-script format. All caps indicates a scene change, INT. and EXT. stand for interior and exterior, respectively. I originally intended for it to be an episode's length, but went over considerably. Oh well. This 'episode' is called "The Stung" (not 100% on the name; open to suggestion) and takes place some time after "The Mutants Are Revolting." It is heavy on the shippy elements, so if that isn't your cup of tea you may want to avoid this one. I don't consider it 'finished' and would be happy for criticisms, comments and suggestions. Anyhow, here it is in PDF format. EDIT: Here, try this. Sorry for the inconvenience. I've never tried hosting a PDF online before. https://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B4aCy0QJNcgaYTIyNGVlZDktZDg0Ni00NTJiLWE0MmUtYTE0NTE0ZGEyNmRi&hl=en
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Nutmeg1729
Urban Legend
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You should try to post your fanfic on Futurama Madhouse. The title is just a knockoff from 'The Sting'.
Captain obvious takes the prize. Louiswuenator: I had a skim, was too tired to read it all though, and to be honest, your writing isn't half bad. Your setting is good, the idea is pretty well though out, and the first five pages, although needing some work, as does anything, are pretty darn good compared to some of the other shite that fanfiction writers churn out. Maybe I'll read the rest later, maybe I won't. But either way, I'd say you haven't done half bad.
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mazda07
Bending Unit
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oka 9.5. but serious man that script could easy'li be from a real writher in futurama. it got.. humor, romance. serious. Bender. fry and leela. a good writen story, .
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